Others Corruption of Champions II [v0.8.4] [Savin/Salamander Studios]

[NODOGAN]

Though it's not like many people pick her and fewer people have looked at all of her scenes. And I know nobody reads her scenes because the italicized bleed through and formatting error on her foot job is STILL there

You goddamn right, I didn't knew that, hell I have NEVER chosen her (nor done Kitsune pregnant content more than the first time) because:
A) Her default content with us fucking an unfeeling ass is not my kink (I didn't alchemy'd an 18 inches long horse cock with a knot for you to be reading woman!)
and
B) Is written by Tobs, the guy who writes porn so long my erection flags before I'm done with one of his sex scenes & this is a pregnancy progression with MULTIPLE sex scenes, screw-that-noise!...hell, I don't even remember the LAST TIME I rubbed one to Tobs' content! (is like trying to jerk off to the dictionary as you jump through paragraph after paragraph trying to get to the good stuff only to be jumpscared by the words CUMVEIN & BABY BATTER!)

 

[zwere]

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Though it's possible people pick her and just don't read the footjob. Can't blame them.

I haven't laid my eyes upon a shitsune scene in years and now I can safely say, it really wasn't due to bias or oversaturation, the way Tobs writes hick speak is absolutely atrocious and unreadable if'n ya know what i mean.

 

[Meatshield236]

Tobs writes like a student trying to hit a word count. There's so much nothing that your eyes just slide over the words, and he always includes details that are already implied by his previous descriptors which clogs up the writing and leaves nothing to the imagination. The front half of second paragraph is just telling you that she takes special care of her feet doesn't do manual labor. That's it. It's first draft material, the kind of thing you spew out at first to get the ideas down which you then later refine into something actually good.

 

[Deviton123]

See I would've agreed with you if you didn't just post those screenshots.

The fact that he could not be bothered to let someone down gently on their work getting rejected shows he can't even fucking be bothered to have empathy for someone on the other side of the screen. This person is offering to do UNPAID work for you to make YOUR product better. The submitter gets absolutely fucking nothing out of it. To be such an abrasive asshole to people who go out of their way to help prop up your shitty game is just awful form, even if the quality of said submission isn't good.

This man just killed someone's entire fucking interest in a hobby and damaged their probably already low self-esteem because he couldn't assed to be a little courteous. Fuck him. He's a prick. Not gonna call him a garbage human being, but I'd rather eat paint chips than interact with him.

Also fuck Khanivore for liking that prick's post. Absolute dickrider.

You know what's really funny? Savin spews all that bullshit, yet has TOBS as a writer. Whatever they wrote, I doubt it's worse than TOBS' 30k word obsession with "baby batter" and coins during a sex scene.

 

[Plumpunikitty]

I've been thinking, do you guys think TOBS got his start by writing wuxia novels?

 

[Mrbark1234]

I've been thinking, do you guys think TOBS got his start by writing wuxia novels?

Start? One look at his writing will tell you he never stopped

 

[Unobtainium]

I've been thinking, do you guys think TOBS got his start by writing wuxia novels?

I see him in every Wuxia and Xianxia game community I look at so it wouldn't surprise me.

 

[Noone202]

I see him in every Wuxia and Xianxia game community I look at so it wouldn't surprise me.

Is there any Wuxia or Xianxia game with sex, preferably pregnancy that you know of? Just want to see if Tobs is an outlier or they all write like him for sex scenes

 

[jkh115]

Is there any Wuxia or Xianxia game with sex, preferably pregnancy that you know of? Just want to see if Tobs is an outlier or they all write like him for sex scenes

There is swordmaiden of the azure dragon, RPGM

 

[Noone202]

There is swordmaiden of the azure dragon, RPGM

The pregnancy content there any good? The game seem fun

 

[YouShallNotLol]

The pregnancy content there any good? The game seem fun

It's not fun. Unending grind of the same couple of enemies is all there is.

 

[Darak123]

So I haven't visited the OF in quite some time. I figured I'd see how submissions are going and if the writing crew are still abrasive. Turns out, that part hasn't changed.

Oh wow, this shit make me feel lucky that I haven't submit my Rooh's scene lol. And he really going down on that one huh. Poor them.

 

[Mayra]

Could someone share a save right before the event of the imps attacking the Frost Hound? I really wanna watch the scene but I to unlock it I would have to start from 0.

 

[Tsubuhaza]

You know what's really funny? Savin spews all that bullshit, yet has TOBS as a writer. Whatever they wrote, I doubt it's worse than TOBS' 30k word obsession with "baby batter" and coins during a sex scene.

I mean, he does have mastery over a certain technique of English writing... the Wycombian Wordflood.

 

[Susan Xandera]

I mean, he does have mastery over a certain technique of English writing... the Wycombian Wordflood.

Or in other words The British Shit Spew.

 

[claralover]

they're really milking brihaus, can't wait for a new update with brihaus finale that was supposedly finished ages ago and nothing else

 

[bigboomerstatus]

Hey idk if missed something at some point but all my saves keep disappearing after each update it's happened 3 times now and this didn't used to happen before. I don't really mind it cuz I like the game but it is starting to get slightly tedious having to replay everything over and over again. Anyone have an idea of why it's happening?

 

[zwere]

Hey idk if missed something at some point but all my saves keep disappearing after each update it's happened 3 times now and this didn't used to happen before. I don't really mind it cuz I like the game but it is starting to get slightly tedious having to replay everything over and over again. Anyone have an idea of why it's happening?

I haven't heard much of people losing their saves in the last few updates, but there was an explicit warning before the latest update that it will most likely delete all saves. There have been a few outliers that say their saves were untouched or not fully gone, but it was mostly a given you'd lose them after updating. Even without disappearing saves, you're better off occasionally saving to file anyway.

 

[destroyerofassholes]

they're really milking brihaus, can't wait for a new update with brihaus finale that was supposedly finished ages ago and nothing else

CoC development has become an utter fucking joke. Like TiTS.

 

[Unobtainium]

Is there any Wuxia or Xianxia game with sex, preferably pregnancy that you know of? Just want to see if Tobs is an outlier or they all write like him for sex scenes

I play them for the power fantasy. Most I get is a dual cultivation button and a fade to black.