- Thread starter UncleVT
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Shouldn't this have kinitic novel tag?
lol bro do you not see the third screenshot? That black dick is about as thick as a coke can, and about 12+ inches, always have to over exaggerate the mandingo
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Kinetic tag needed. Also some proofreading needed, hell the MC's name was also used for her husband but in different color. As for the quick corruption, she just finally had enough and wentr apeshit, plus it is written to be a short story, so it has to happen quickly.
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The reason the corruption seems too fast is the stapled on dom/sub overtone. If she just accidently came across the gloryhole and the corruption was driven by her desires, the pace would be fine.
Another guy writing a female that can't believe a woman would actually want to have sex, therefore she has to be forced in some way. Close but eh. Basically another bad sex comic with terrible dialog but a decent premise. Let's see if he takes any criticism and makes adjustments.
Another guy writing a female that can't believe a woman would actually want to have sex, therefore she has to be forced in some way. Close but eh. Basically another bad sex comic with terrible dialog but a decent premise. Let's see if he takes any criticism and makes adjustments.
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I was talking about the 3th screenshot. The perspective is uncertain. The dicks are closer to the point of view than the girl, maybe 1 meter closer (count the square on the wall to evaluate the distance). Depending on FOV angle, they will appear bigger than they truly are.
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More like confusing, are they trying to say that the game isn't about corruption or doesn't have an element of corruption in it? Why bother having a corruption tag at all if it's not used?
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Corruption Stories [v0.3] [NTRandCorruption]
SPANISH TRANSLATION - 24/07/2021
With the permission of the creator I have generated a patch to translate the game to spanish. As always thank the creator of the game for his time and dedication.
Greetings. Darax
Thank to geordie for the 0.3 version of the game... download from here :
(https://f95zone.to/threads/corruption-stories-v0-2-ntrandcorruption.86755/post-6191156)
or click on this link directly
SPANISH TRANSLATION - 24/07/2021
With the permission of the creator I have generated a patch to translate the game to spanish. As always thank the creator of the game for his time and dedication.
Greetings. Darax
Thank to geordie for the 0.3 version of the game... download from here :
(https://f95zone.to/threads/corruption-stories-v0-2-ntrandcorruption.86755/post-6191156)
or click on this link directly
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Next story coming out today. Soon I'll do a proper game. Thanks for playing it everyone.
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version 0.2/ second story
This week I have a lot to do in my day job, probably I can't deliver the next version by the weekend,