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lol I have a lot of time on my hands bro don't think it will be long but seems the poll people think I should start chap one first.
 

charizards356

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not giving it a try yet cause this is the first update but it definitely seems like my kinda game so i am definitely going to be watching. also @Ajlee7385 if you are the creator/developer ask for that tag to your profile so that people will know,
 

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Start chapter one is way out in front. I voted that way but i'll tell you why. If this is your first attempt at a game you'll want to complete a full character arc first as then you have experience of writting the full arc before starting the others and you'll hopefully pick up a few tips and tricks along the way. Then hopefully each character arc you write will get better and better and you can always go back and redo the inital arc once your better at it.

Its pretty much inevitable that once you get to the end you have story driven issues that you couldn't have known at the outset, so don't be afraid of rewrites.
 
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S1T355

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Because this is a fetish site and people enjoy that fetish?
I don't think this is specifically a fetish site which I would call stuff like TFgames and the MC collective. There are definitely fetishes around but I don't think this site is specifically "catered" towards fetishes like transformation and whatnot.

I do find it interesting with how prevalent games with such genres are though. I personally don't like the transformation genre but there seems to be a lot of them around for some reason. At least ones with stuff which I am somewhat attracted to. Don't see much stuff like foot fetishes and other such types around much. Incest seems to be pretty popular too for some reason. I guess people are just weird in general (myself included).

Might check out the game later when there are more options available but for now good luck with development.
 
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yeah but that's just its an intro most of the intros will be similar but as they branch out more there will be a lot more unique stuff at least I'm hoping that's how it works out.
 

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I am pleased to say your story read a lot better than what I expected it would! So well done with that!

However I think still images that fit in with the setting would be a billion times better than 1 second clips that constantly repeat themselves (visually annoying).

In fact the images would be my biggest negative. Half the pictures have nothing to do with the scenes and it confused me so much I had to reread a lot of it.

For example When you are alone inside the building and need to blow out the back wall. There is a clip following of a girl next to another girl standing outside and blowing up a wall and what seems to be a laughably bad prop of a person. This image is so disconnected from the story it does not contribute anything.

"The two of you are immediately dragged off and tied to crosses" - Image of three people tied up

Then later you wake up next to a insanely beautiful woman (very subjective) who says she is lucky she found you and not some pervert. You then immediately follow that by asking her to fix your morning wood, which she happily obliges. That in itself is confusing, but the images that follow is of a male sleeping with her when my character is meant to be a female trans.

In summary I would say, do not feel you need to have a picture of every scene. While I appreciate this kind of story is hard to find "real porn" on. I would at least need the characters to stay consistent for me to enjoy it.
 
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tetrisedris

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I really like the concept, of course there is content and finetuning needed, but hey, you said yourself this is more of a test.
As long as you keep on track, i'm sure this has a lot of potential.
Also, i think "classic" html games with real pics are underrepresented here - so keep it up :)
 

Leafy

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This game is in dire need of editing for punctuation, grammar, and narrative flow.

(That is meant to be constructive criticism. I do like the game and want to see more.)
 
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lucifuge1973

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Futa/trans is a hard pass. Why is this garbage showing up everywhere.

Niche/fetish games make money. I've talked too many people in the adult industry over the years. I've done countless interviews with content providers. They all say the same thing. People with fetishes pay. I've talked to "retired" performers that have said in the past they would never shoot again who are now doing custom videos and cam shows because that is where the money is.

About the game.... I am just going to re-iterate what some others have said ....dude get someone to fix the errors in grammar and shit yo!!

Why is this garbage showing up everywhere.
Personally....
I believe people said the same thing about the Beatles, porn and weed. <-- This is a reference not a comparison
If everyone thought like you I wouldn't be able to enjoy my three favorite things in life. I know this may be very hard to believe but not everyone thinks like you do. So there is that.

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Ty guys I am trying like I said I am using a spelling program but hey as I go along if anyone doesn't mind trying to help with my spelling I would appreciate it.
 
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hey guys I really appreciate what you are are saying in polls atm working hard on the story and I am trying to proof reed as I go I don't think Ill be able to update game today or tomorrow but really hoping to have something for you guys by Tuesday with maybe a surprise or two. I really wasn't sure if people would like my game but looks like it is ty guys.
 

ZachariaDorin

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I will follow your project. You have me with MC and breeding. :D
I would really like to see a male path.
 
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just so you fyi theres a reason it will take me a few days to get another update. im one of those easily exicted people so don't ask for spoilers unless you really want them cause I will give them to you.
 
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I am pleased to say your story read a lot better than what I expected it would! So well done with that!

However I think still images that fit in with the setting would be a billion times better than 1 second clips that constantly repeat themselves (visually annoying).

In fact the images would be my biggest negative. Half the pictures have nothing to do with the scenes and it confused me so much I had to reread a lot of it.

For example When you are alone inside the building and need to blow out the back wall. There is a clip following of a girl next to another girl standing outside and blowing up a wall and what seems to be a laughably bad prop of a person. This image is so disconnected from the story it does not contribute anything.

"The two of you are immediately dragged off and tied to crosses" - Image of three people tied up

Then later you wake up next to a insanely beautiful woman (very subjective) who says she is lucky she found you and not some pervert. You then immediately follow that by asking her to fix your morning wood, which she happily obliges. That in itself is confusing, but the images that follow is of a male sleeping with her when my character is meant to be a female trans.

In summary I would say, do not feel you need to have a picture of every scene. While I appreciate this kind of story is hard to find "real porn" on. I would at least need the characters to stay consistent for me to enjoy it.
yeah im sorry I have been tryting to match up images best as I could.

the image your talking about if from charmed it was one of the only images I could find with somone blowing a wall out.

I also had problems trying to match up witches burned on the cross images so that was closest I could get.

the kelly devine images are from someretyhing called the slut mother which actually stared james deen two.

also Kelly Devine didn't happily abilige I thought I wrote as he essentially raped her after she said no.

as for the futa not matching futa images like a spell for all one of the games I based my idea off of has females who are futas using females being fucked by males all the time.

when I can actually find futa images that match the pornstars I wanna use I will most certainly use them. but that is the prob with a story like this is you cant always find the perfect image to match the story your trying to tell and for that im sorry.
 
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