VN Ren'Py Cosy Cafe [v0.13.1 EA] [Cosy Creator]

[nig9]

Blue ball update, 5 months for a BJ scene with a girl that already has half a dozen BJ scenes. Actually criminal where you ended the update.

 

[Ultimecea]

Blue ball update, 5 months for a BJ scene with a girl that already has half a dozen BJ scenes. Actually criminal where you ended the update.

wait what??
you fapped to this Visual Novel??
OMG.... its like reading Tomoko's route in Canvas 2 or lucia's, akane's, shizuru's route in Rewrite
or Kyou's, Kotomi's even Yukine's route in Clannad
or better yet, the perfect Heroine Tomoyo's route in Clannad and Tomoyo After ( true route is epic)
you should read them like it's the Holy Grail

 

[TBone9]

So one of the girls we're trying to fuck apparently has an "older sister" who is "twelve or thirteen." Cosy Creator I'm guessing English is not your primary language. If Ella is Catherine's "older sister," that implies to English speakers that Catherine is younger than "twelve or thirteen." You might want to change that wording. You can call Ella "the older of the sisters" without implying that Ella is older than Catherine.

A quick dialogue tweak could make it funny, he could call her the "older sister" then say, "Wait, not Catherine's older sister, i mean her older younger sister" and then try to clumsily clarify that, and finally just give up and call her "the middle sister".

While true. I don't think the girls are going to give up the free cafe food for instant stuff. Probably have it for emergencies and as a general back up.

I think they will be mostly regular customers after school, and whenever there is something that requires them to be absent, they will conveniently have "something going on after school" or similar, like in other stories when you decide to visit a girl for some "fun time" and her roommate/housemate just so happens to be doing something else, every single time.

It's genuinely surprising to me that some people have the computer know how to convert the game's files into better compressed ones but they don't have the know how to type "compressed" into a search bar.

Aw, come on, that's just so many letters!

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[ImperialD]

a few things that puzzle me ....

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the MC seems to forget what Alison had said to him about this , wouldn't it piss her off him doing this without her knowing

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people seem to forget .. her father is still around ... who knows what will happen going off without some strong help

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whats with the girls deciding things without talking to the MC 1st

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ya know it would benefit the MC to help , rather than complain

 

[BViking]

Rachel wont be optional, but I assume some of the lewd content with her will be. Some hate her, I trust Cosy will redeem her.
The rest of the characters are all well written and interesting, even with their flaws, no reason for Rachel not to be.

What if Rachel is nothing but the product of her upbringing? Maybe her mother was a diehard "feminist", and all her life she's been told that all men are the incarnation of evil and everything wrong with the world. Maybe with the arrival of the MC, she's finally starting to question everything she's been taught and believe in?
Or maybe she's just weird like that and there's no deeper meaning behind it all.

 

[shitass1001]

the MC seems to forget what Alison had said to him about this , wouldn't it piss her off him doing this without her knowing

He probably didn't forget, but we learn from Hannah that Allison is pretty stubborn, so the chances of her ever agreeing to a meeting like that is slim. Sometimes people need help but will vehemently deny it when offered, MC, who is also stubborn, knows this and chose to take things into his own hands.

whats with the girls deciding things without talking to the MC 1st

you're right saying that they should run things by the MC, but I think the intention here is so that MC can punish Sarah again. Also, I think its going to create more drama, with Rachel out of the picture, someone else who really wants a favour will probably get it, we know MC is uncomfortable with the idea of giving favours out, so in a meta sense this is the right move.

ya know it would benefit the MC to help , rather than complain

He is helping, by feeding the girls and working on his plan with Allison

 

[shitass1001]

What if Rachel is nothing but the product of her upbringing? Maybe her mother was a diehard "feminist", and all her life she's been told that all men are the incarnation of evil and everything wrong with the world. Maybe with the arrival of the MC, she's finally starting to question everything she's been taught and believe in?
Or maybe she's just weird like that and there's no deeper meaning behind it all.

Rachel is a big mystery to me, the only thing we know for certain is that her behavior doesn't stem from an abusive father. She could be weird like that, but I think we will get some sort of explanation.

One idea is that she just got radicalized online, which, while plausible given how common that is, would be a real boring explanation (but maybe the point isn't how she got to where she is but how the MC will help her out of it)
Another one, as you said, could be something from her mother. There are a few things that it could be, her mom could be just a raging misandrist, instilling those values on her child. Or she could be doing parental alienation, she and the dad are divorced, she got custody, and spends a lot of time lying to Rachel about how awful of a person her dad is, if this happens young enough it could turn into Rachel being generally distrusting of all men.

Whatever the reason is, I am excited both to see it, and also to see the threads reaction to it .

 

[BViking]

It's going to be interesting to see what kind of redemption arc Cosy has in store for Rachel. Shame we can't time skip in real life.

 

[virtek]

What if we guess who the next waitress will be?

 

[GamerDaddy]

What if we guess who the next waitress will be?

quite a few of us have made a guess or two,, so make yours

 

[jI11jaCksjAkk]

you know the funny thing is if he did follow the same path with her,he'd get complaints that its same thing with everyone
anyway narrative wise it makes sense,i think we'll see it happen again with one or two off the others

Agree that's probably the main reason.

But also...I know these are lewd fantasy games, but anyone who needs vaginal penetration before deciding they care about someone enough to add them as a girlfriend to your harem is probably playing the wrong game. Sarah has spent her entire life being marginalized by her parents and has incredibly low self-esteem, so IMHO it would be really inconsistent with the tone of this game if MC offered her a place in a new family that accepts and values her....but only if she lets him fuck her first. That would have felt a bit predatory and more suited to other games. The backstories and personalities of each LI are different, so why would anyone expect everything to proceed identically for all of them?

Blue ball update, 5 months for a BJ scene with a girl that already has half a dozen BJ scenes. Actually criminal where you ended the update.

Agree! Definitely "criminal" to not write the story the way you wanted. How dare they??

a few things that puzzle me ....

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the MC seems to forget what Alison had said to him about this , wouldn't it piss her off him doing this without her knowing

She's his advisor; he is the head of a FF. She might not be happy about all of his choices, but he is going along with her plan for the most part, so I doubt it would be a dealbreaker for him to decide that the risk of alienating another FF head too much is more of a problem than she thinks it is. Particularly with her having grown up in the FF world and knowing heads can do whatever the Hell they want, I would think that internally she probably has to be pleased he has trusted her with almost everything else, enough to earn MC some wiggle room without her getting too bent out of shape about it.

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people seem to forget .. her father is still around ... who knows what will happen going off without some strong help

Not sure how 4 mostly-adult women together in public should really be considered all that risky? I get what you're saying because they are well-developed characters that we feel protective of as players, but with 2 of them being FF members they should be safe enough.

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whats with the girls deciding things without talking to the MC 1st

I know it's a fantasy lewd game, but if female characters have no agency the games are pretty damn boring, no? It's not like they decided to do something horrible - they just decided to try and drum up business for their workplace.

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ya know it would benefit the MC to help , rather than complain

How is he complaining with an internal thought of frustration? And how is he not helping by the very fact they are there? He only found out they existed less than 24 hours before, and is still learning just how badly off they have been (e.g., with the comment she bit off just before this thought if I remember correctly). He then invites them to come by every day after school, so I'm not sure Cosy showing part of his internal motivation in a thought is complaining. Anyway, my useless 2 cents on the things you mentioned. Not worth more or less than anybody else's opinions, but none of those things stood out as inconsistent to me in any way.

 

[hameleona]

Rachel is a big mystery to me, the only thing we know for certain is that her behavior doesn't stem from an abusive father. She could be weird like that, but I think we will get some sort of explanation.

One idea is that she just got radicalized online, which, while plausible given how common that is, would be a real boring explanation (but maybe the point isn't how she got to where she is but how the MC will help her out of it)
Another one, as you said, could be something from her mother. There are a few things that it could be, her mom could be just a raging misandrist, instilling those values on her child. Or she could be doing parental alienation, she and the dad are divorced, she got custody, and spends a lot of time lying to Rachel about how awful of a person her dad is, if this happens young enough it could turn into Rachel being generally distrusting of all men.

Whatever the reason is, I am excited both to see it, and also to see the threads reaction to it .

She is a severely repressed sub and clearly has a non-con fetish. You can hardly do a bigger self-rejection then becoming the feminazi dyke, who blames everything on the Patriarchy(tm). Including her inability to do math. Doesn't need to have anything to do with her family - a lot of people react with disgusted rejection, when they discover they are in to "weird" shit sexually. Like, it could be daddy issues, could be mommy issues, but my money is on Rachel being dumb and scared of self-reflection.

I'm gonna confess - currently I don't like her and while I trust Cosy to give her decent character development, she needs to do something really major to win me over. And my problem isn't her misandry, my problem is that she is incompetent and honestly, probably the dumbest LI around. If she was a cometent adversary and a smart one and her schemes weren't pathetic - I would have liked having her. But the MC is right, she isn't even deserving of a good spanking.

 

[Rogue Reaper]

I share the same thoughts as you, but I’m sure Dev/Cosy has got something in store for us in the next update or so. Fingers crossed on it.

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Thinking about it.. There one thing Sarah hasn't done, that the other girls did.. Which is moving in with him completely, maybe we have to wait till that happens.

 

[-Maniackanime-]

Thank you for the update! It was heart warming, Catherine and Hannah got some good development this time around, too. I like their story so far, can't wait to see Hanna's story as well.

 

[goontuber]

i did kind of feel bad for rachel after her "detention"

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but yeah i still really dont like her. i dont think it will take quite as much for me personally to come around on her but it all depends on what happens. much like the MC i have a weakness for cute girls that need saving.

 

[swmeek]

So another full playthrough later I have to admit this is one of the best story wise updates yet.
I really look forward to the next one also.
As for my choice for a new waitress I think Samantha would be a good waitress if she could get past the founding family groupie thing !
Funny coincidence I've noticed is that at 2 of the songs in the game are in a game I have on steam too (non porn).

 

[Skep-tiker]

If Vickies threshold remains, i'd like to opt out on rachel...

 

[Konrad Simon]

What if Rachel is nothing but the product of her upbringing? Maybe her mother was a diehard "feminist", and all her life she's been told that all men are the incarnation of evil and everything wrong with the world. Maybe with the arrival of the MC, she's finally starting to question everything she's been taught and believe in?
Or maybe she's just weird like that and there's no deeper meaning behind it all.

Entirely reasonable. The exact opposite is also reasonable: that her parents tried so hard to convince her that women should be subservient, that she rebelled both against them, and against her own inclinations. Or, as you said, maybe that's just how she is and there's never going to be an explanation; I'd be fine with that, too.

 

[Konrad Simon]

I know it's a fantasy lewd game, but if female characters have no agency the games are pretty damn boring, no? It's not like they decided to do something horrible - they just decided to try and drum up business for their workplace.

This reminds me of an old joke. Master says, "Girl, fry me three eggs." Girl says, "Yes, master," and heads to the kitchen. An hour goes by. Master goes into the kitchen to find his slave holding an open carton of eggs, staring at them. She looks up and says, "But, Master, which three eggs should I fry?"

 

[Rogue Reaper]

If Vickies threshold remains, i'd like to opt out on rachel...

I second the Veto on Rachel.. Just no point to her character currently.. IMO Elizabeth, who for whatever reason is on the Main Girls page, but isn't a main, should be the 10th..