I apologize, English is not my native language. I’m already editing the conversations and correcting the grammatical mistakes. I can assure you that this won’t happen in the second episode, and in addition, the grammar of the first episode will already be corrected by then. Or if i get time enough, i will update download links with corrected grammar version.
I appreciate your words! That narrator thing is surely changing. As for the story, i'm also already working on paths, so players can feel an actual storyline not just forced random sex scenesWhile playing I actually have red the game story.
Opening greetling with 18+ question is superb. Best that I've seen, and I've seen many of them as fan of adult games.
Take away Narrator. Not needed. This yellow text feels alien to the game. Think something more organic, like story text in white and characters' phrases colored like their names (each char name has different color). Thoughts can be texted more lightly, like thin text, cursive or transparent letters. The players' general perception of gameplay and novel part will improve.
Personally I like that the main driving motive is attraction, not perversion. Im more fan of erotic approach, not pornographic with gangbangs and other hardcore staff.
Face emotions acting is good.
Choices are nice. Scene variations are easier to render and code, then paths and branches. From simple to more advanced, like points system and other stuff.
The girls talking to the player concept is great. You feel more intimately linked to them.
That sould be all for now. Great game, I enjoyed playing the first version.
P.S. Grammar didnt bother me very much as Im not native Eng speaker, but for some Players from Britain, US, Canada it is important... Imagine an intelligent educated girl (like the heroines) speak weird and ungrammarly phrases
I’m already working on renders for 0.2.0. I also hope not taking a long time
All actions from first episode will be taking effect at 0.2.0 and players will be able to actually choose what to actually do.
Awesome. I did really like the game overall. I'm looking forward to seeing what happens.
hi dev
Honestly, it’s a good idea, especially since version 0.2.0 will already include some grammar mistakes, and other corrections from 0.1.0 along with new scenes. However, it would also be great if you could try out or check the visual content. I’ve been told that people really liked the models I used. Honestly, whichever option you choose will be a good one.
Since the update it's close i can confirm i took notes on this and the opacity on the tbox is waaay lighter.I like it. There's potential here.
To-do list.
Add opacity to the text box. (See file.)
Work on grammar and syntax.
I wish you much success.
