there's a lot to like here. the girls are great, despite their strangely cute eggtato shaped heads. the protagonist is alright, has decent motivations and isn't a complete cuck, but his way too fucking long monologuing is an issue. most of the time it's not even advancing anything. i'm not getting to know him better by listening to his endless rambling about inane things, it's not advancing the story, it's not advancing the H aspect of the game. it's filler and at times it's so excessive that i really stop caring and spam space bar. that's not very rare for H game players, but it is rare for me. so, i'm hoping you tone that down. also please god don't ruin all the buildup and stuff with 'dream' scenes, it's sooo cheap. the neko girl scene was done incredibly well, i feel like miko was kinda cheated out of something like that because basically all of her goodies have been spoiled already