Draugo
Member
- Jul 12, 2022
- 292
- 500
Started ok enough but too much force teleporting MC around, MC feeling too powerless the whole time and the Demon chick just ruins the mood. Yes the MC is a newbie but that's why you build them up slowly and show obstacles he can deal with to show the growth. This whole time he's just tossed around, constantly being saved, everyone sacrifices themselves for him just because his mom is famous etc, one LI wasn't even a real LI, just a crafted body for a sword so I guess it's not as bad that she dies because I'm sure the sword will take her place... the best part of the whole thing was that one mission, should have had more of that. This doesn't even really touch on the cultivation aspect, it's just a backdrop setting.
Anyways, just my thoughts.
Anyways, just my thoughts.
