- Apr 10, 2018
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Honestly, what this game needs most, is a good english speaker and writer to go through the game page by page and re-write of the whole thing. If that was done, it's actually not bad. It just needs some direction and more expression behind the writing. Develop the characters, hash out the inner thoughts.
Also a time indicator would be really helpful, as it's sometimes confusing what part of the day you're in, and having to take a shower just to progress the day is kind of strange. But the UI is cute, and with some polish, this could eventually be a solid title.
Also a time indicator would be really helpful, as it's sometimes confusing what part of the day you're in, and having to take a shower just to progress the day is kind of strange. But the UI is cute, and with some polish, this could eventually be a solid title.
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