Agree with the people above on the story. The whole point of a corruption game is to show the heroine slowly giving in to the corruption.
As of the last time I played this (probably about a week ago?)...
- The heroine, supposedly a righteous cop, has to flirt with both her boss and the boss at her undercover job (or else it's game over). She hasn't even been drugged yet - she isn't supposed to be corrupt before the other people even try corrupting her. If she's already flirting with the boss (SPOILER ALERT) then what's the point of the twist where the boss is the one trying to corrupt her?
- After taking the drug once, she has sex with basically everyone. Okay, maybe that's how the drug works in the game, but it kinda destroys the point of further corruption since it's established that 'becoming a slut' is the end goal of her corruption, and just taking the drug once appears to permanently make her a slut. There's no clear attempt by the heroine to reject her corruption, except maybe a single line of reluctance when she meets her corrupter in the bathroom the second time. Why's he even giving her additional drugs if one is enough to make her all slutty?
Okay, I've been making criticisms so far, so I should probably give some proper suggestions.
1. Allow for a less slutty approach at the start. I know this will probably add more dialogue and paths, but IMO this is where the focus should've been placed at the beginning of the game - establishing the heroine.
2. Maybe have the drug wear off after a while? Have some choices for the player to reject the corrupters' influence? As of now it's just a written story where you need to click - which I'm honestly okay with -- many of the Anax's games are like that since there's only one real choice to progress his story, but if you're going this route you need to cut down on the spelling errors, grammar errors and, no offence intended, really, but you need to brush up on the writing a little.
3. Speed up the midgame - after a while it's just repetitive actions until a new option appears out of nowhere for reasons the player doesn't know. Maybe have that criteria a little more clear?
I really hope I don't come off as offensive here, but that's my opinion.