VN Ren'Py Cucked By The Neighbor [v0.5] [Marshall 77]

[Marshall 77]

NTR just doesn't mean anything anymore other than 'girls in this story fuck guys other than protagonist.'

Should honestly just be changed to Voyeurism...

NTR main parts is loosing what you have and humiliation. I tried to lean on humiliation because that's more devastating than loosing something.

 

[Marshall 77]

why is cucked if he is only the son... i don't get it...

In my opinion the mother has strong connections with the MC. So a wife or girlfriend who cared for them for sometimes changing their attention to someone else is like the mother who cares for them all their life.
I get the mom part is still unbelievable .

 

[gigan]

This was my first serous code in Renpy. And surprisingly I didn't get any errors for calling show black. The PNG format was my try to lowering the size of the pack and it didn't changed much like 10~20 lower. I think what was my mistake now. I will change it for next update.

it is not a direct a error sceen. I attach you a sceenshot what i mean. You see there on top in the middle the error

 

[Marshall 77]

it is not a direct a error sceen. I attach you a sceenshot what i mean. You see there on top in the middle the error

thanks i will fix it.

 

[Tiddle221]

I really appreciate how this starts at 0.5 others start from 0.1 and never follow up but you've given us a somewhat progressed game and not just something that just started. i hope you'll follow up soon and I'll be glad to play this soon

 

[jadexin6101]

They are from Alabama

understandable ..

 

[Kukipett]

Well this is the worst example of a rushed "story" with a strong engrish, very difficult to even understand.
Low effort crap and with the usual 5 stars review made by the dev himself or a friend.

 

[Yurnero21]

Why so many folks complain about smth above average for a debut and free? It is the first game for the op and english is not his first language. GIve him helping hands, not boots in the ego, and with some constructive feedback maybe this game will be a gem. Ty!

 

[jadexin6101]

Why so many folks complain about smth above average for a debut and free? It is the first game for the op and english is not his first language. GIve him helping hands, not boots in the ego, and with some constructive feedback maybe this game will be a gem. Ty!

so many? there's literally just 2 of them complained. one just allergic to grammatical error the other is reasonable and criticized how story not delivered well. it's a VN and story is crucial, while criticism seems demotivating dev, a determine one will use to improve the game.

 

[Irrfan007]

too short

 

[Lostmoon7452]

Like a rising star.. this game is the hope of the Mom/bully NTR

 

[Don't Ask ME]

Well this is the worst example of a rushed "story" with a strong engrish, very difficult to even understand.
Low effort crap and with the usual 5 stars review made by the dev himself or a friend.

wow, thanks. I wish, I could make a game too. (But for now I still haven't finished it and maybe I only make games for personal use )

And yeah...

sorry if my review is not to your liking. I only reviewed some aspects like story, design and whether or not this is the first game developer made (because I know making something like this even though it's simple is quite time consuming) and i'm not an expert in reviewing. so yeah, it's up to each of you to decide what you think

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[dog3y3]

This game has a very interesting starting story and I think it's different from the others. the story is quite easy to understand and the character designs are in my opinion very good (especially the mother's design, I'm not lying ).
so this game in my opinion still has a lot of potential (btw will there be tits piercing later?).
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It's doesn't sound like a 'game' in the sense of choices and trying to accomplish something. It looks like a novel, so you don't really make choices of avoidance or achievements.

 

[worldkaiser]

WOW... this is beyond bad. not even the poses are properly aligned. The mother model is crooked, missing bely button (seriously?), feet textures looks like a rock, her eyes socket are nightmare fuel, etc...
I'm not even talking about the story or the plot or anything in here. It is just basic shit.

 

[Theboss3213]

Was looking forward to this reading the description, but it's like you made it with one hand and the other on your dick. I'm not saying slow build but take your time with the dialogue a bit. Mom NTR is awesome when done right!

 

[Marshall 77]

i understand what you guys mean. and i agree with you. this is rushed and dialogs need to change and work one so i better fix this before i do much so i will try a new approach with these three character(with some change with them) and remaster this,and release it on this page.
thanks for all your opinions and your honesty.
-Marshall 77

 

[Chemtay]

I've noticed a lot of negativity in the comments. It's been a long time since we've had a solid Western-style NTR game featuring a "bully" theme with proper domination, not just focused on the girl, but also showing the bull humiliating the cuck. There's already plenty of femdom or bbc content out there, so it's refreshing to see a different angle.


While I agree with some of the critiques, yes, the game does feel a bit rushed, it’s important to remember that this is the developer's first game release (as far as I know). Given that, I think it's a promising start. Just needs a bit more polish and refinement.


I do want to say that even with the rough edges, it’s clear the developer is putting real effort into this. Looking forward to what’s next, whether that’s version 0.6, a remake, or a completely new project. Keep up the good work!

 

[Don't Ask ME]

I've noticed a lot of negativity in the comments. It's been a long time since we've had a solid Western-style NTR game featuring a "bully" theme with proper domination, not just focused on the girl, but also showing the bull humiliating the cuck. There's already plenty of femdom or bbc content out there, so it's refreshing to see a different angle.


While I agree with some of the critiques, yes, the game does feel a bit rushed, it’s important to remember that this is the developer's first game release (as far as I know). Given that, I think it's a promising start. Just needs a bit more polish and refinement.


I do want to say that even with the rough edges, it’s clear the developer is putting real effort into this. Looking forward to what’s next, whether that’s version 0.6, a remake, or a completely new project. Keep up the good work!

and the really great thing is, my friend.
they deleted my review .
I mean...
That's the funniest part....

and I'm quite sad to see their comments for the developer but I hope this developer can get positive things from this and still be able to grow.
(because I know, making something like this is not an easy thing)

 

[worldkaiser]

and the really great thing is, my friend.
they deleted my review .
I mean...
That's the funniest part....

and I'm quite sad to see their comments for the developer but I hope this developer can get positive things from this and still be able to grow.
(because I know, making something like this is not an easy thing)

Buddy, that's because your review along side the comment you replied to are in a tight race for 'The Most Misleading Statement of the Year' neck and neck!

 

[Don't Ask ME]

Buddy, that's because your review along side the comment you replied to are in a tight race for 'The Most Misleading Statement of the Year' neck and neck!

wow, so it's like prison rules here? cool and so I have to follow other people's reviews? cool