Thanks for the constructive feedback. I've added some of it to the "To Do" pile.
New update might come out this week. I'm almost finished, but I'm expanding the early Mom/Son date that was pushed to Day 8 and the renders are being a hindrance. There are weird positioning choices and the lighting just randomly changes from day to night and then back to day.
I've actually disabled the "incident" route for now. It was getting too difficult to integrate into the existing storylines now that I'm integrating scenes from future days into earlier ones. I'll re-implement it again when I'm farther along.
I agree about the internal apologizing with Karla's number. I'll restrict those lines to the BETA status.
That's a good idea about Sunny being warmer in some places. I think it would actually add to the "conflicted" dynamic she has with the mc. It may not happen this update, but I'll review her dialogue and see if I can add some more 'loving' lines.
So I've mentioned it before, but I've cut the corruption system from the rewrite. I would rather try to craft scenarios and relationship dynamics where the scenes could plausibly happen. And I'm not a huge fan of the mechanic in general. I think it 'overpowers' the story in almost every game I've seen it in. Like, you make a girl wear a skimpier bikini a couple times and then suddenly she's getting gangbanged in the bathroom. It's a net negative for character development.
As of right now (things are constantly changing), Karla will probably get sped up a bit. Emma may get a little slower. I tihnk she needed way more build-up in the original game than we got to justify some of the shit that she does.
In my opinion, what sets AVNs apart from normal porn is that buildup to a scene. There would need to be story reasons why the MC is gratuitously fucking the girls so early and often. Again this is just my opinion, but if a sex scene doesn't further the story, expand a character, or add context for future events, than I don't think it should be there.
New update might come out this week. I'm almost finished, but I'm expanding the early Mom/Son date that was pushed to Day 8 and the renders are being a hindrance. There are weird positioning choices and the lighting just randomly changes from day to night and then back to day.
Yeah, balancing is hard. It's constantly changing as I integrate more days, because I don't think a user should be able to get high numbers so early in the game.
I've actually disabled the "incident" route for now. It was getting too difficult to integrate into the existing storylines now that I'm integrating scenes from future days into earlier ones. I'll re-implement it again when I'm farther along.
I agree about the internal apologizing with Karla's number. I'll restrict those lines to the BETA status.
That's a good idea about Sunny being warmer in some places. I think it would actually add to the "conflicted" dynamic she has with the mc. It may not happen this update, but I'll review her dialogue and see if I can add some more 'loving' lines.
So I've mentioned it before, but I've cut the corruption system from the rewrite. I would rather try to craft scenarios and relationship dynamics where the scenes could plausibly happen. And I'm not a huge fan of the mechanic in general. I think it 'overpowers' the story in almost every game I've seen it in. Like, you make a girl wear a skimpier bikini a couple times and then suddenly she's getting gangbanged in the bathroom. It's a net negative for character development.
The incest storyline is getting sped up in many ways, if only to make the NTR more effective. It wasn't my intention to establish a pre-existing relationship between the sister and the MC, just imply that 'something' happened to make future events more plausible. I may have to rework their dialogue in the future.
As of right now (things are constantly changing), Karla will probably get sped up a bit. Emma may get a little slower. I tihnk she needed way more build-up in the original game than we got to justify some of the shit that she does.
In my opinion, what sets AVNs apart from normal porn is that buildup to a scene. There would need to be story reasons why the MC is gratuitously fucking the girls so early and often. Again this is just my opinion, but if a sex scene doesn't further the story, expand a character, or add context for future events, than I don't think it should be there.
That's actually from the original game. But I am removing her and some of the other characters from the menu screen in the next update. The renders just aren't there and you can tell they were added as possibilities, but then abandoned later by the original creator.
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