So, while the smart guys code, I want to review the bidding thus far:
The obstacles in the way of the MC thus far are Marcus, his Dad, the bartender, and the leather clad lesbian whose name escapes me, yes?
Enablers are his Aunt and maybe the biology teacher.
I would assume that in a beta run, you could add Marcus' Mom to the list of predators, based on the way the Dad said she has a hand in picking out lingerie for those hilarious outfits. Seems like an easy seduction scenario.
Marcus's Dad has to also have an eye on Sunnie, so a couple of threesomes between the ladies and Marcus or his Dad ("Weak You," that kills me!) should be in the long term plans.
Thus far, I really like the world being built. There have been very sexy moments without this turning into a bad 1970's porn, while characters are being introduced and fleshed out.
Looking forward to hearing from the board on what they expect next, or want to see.