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sorry. English is not my native language. when translated, these phrases seem quite normal.
why don't you offer your services to the developer?
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why don't you offer your services to the developer?
- Oct 27, 2017
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Like I said, post any of these three lines - and there are dozens and dozens more, almost all of the dialogue has minor errors here and there - straight into any kind of spell checker or Gramma checker program and it would find all of these problems. So to me this isn't just a problem of not speaking English as a first language, it is either laziness or you just don't recognize what is wrong with the writing (which based on what you said, does seem to be the case). It reads like something someone wrote on the fly and never checked. Considering the updates on this game seem to come out at a glacial pace and the writing seems to get done long before anything else, it would really behoove you/the Dev's in general to double check the writing in some basic ways, because it has noticeably declined over time to a level that is frankly kind of disgusting at times. And one way or another writing is what is fundamentally kind of the more important element to a game like this.
And yeah, I know that it's super easy to criticize rather than do something yourself. But there are a ton of free, braindead tools you could use to improve this with relatively minimal effort. Hell, you can even post all of the dialogue into ChatGPT and tell it to rewrite them with proper English (edit: I did it for you in attached; you can do dozens of lines this way at a time, it takes seconds. These still aren't perfect because they lack surrounding context, but if you did a whole script in sequence it would be even better, and as is it's already a big improvement.)
- May 2, 2017
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The problem is that there are clearly two writers. You get some sentences with great structure, grammar and where the only real blights are the occasional spelling error. Then all of a sudden you get a sentence written by some dude where English clearly isn't his first language.
i did not notice spelling errors or grammer issues because i was immersed in renders and control skip
if renders are good no need for dialog u can understand what is going on
this is a minor issue, real problem is wide update frequency and out of character responses
(hey this is a porn game, if it were realistic, most we were to see would be a kiss, and mc being kicked out for being a pervert and Marcus thrown in jail for being a date raper then he would realisticly live his bbc fantasies)
wait a minute Marcus's dad is rich so no jail time for rich people so nothing would change my mistake
Marcus would be just he is but alpha path MC would not exist in reality
if renders are good no need for dialog u can understand what is going on
this is a minor issue, real problem is wide update frequency and out of character responses
(hey this is a porn game, if it were realistic, most we were to see would be a kiss, and mc being kicked out for being a pervert and Marcus thrown in jail for being a date raper then he would realisticly live his bbc fantasies)
wait a minute Marcus's dad is rich so no jail time for rich people so nothing would change my mistake
Marcus would be just he is but alpha path MC would not exist in reality
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Need help. Downloaded apk android but can't find options for save skip etc .
Also, to get ntr shall I choose less confidence?
Also, to get ntr shall I choose less confidence?
no idea about android but for NTR get confidence to below zero and sluttiness of the girls to max for best scenes
on 30+ days dev gives u a choice like NTR or Dislike NTR route save before to see both scenes thats it
- Sep 14, 2017
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Status Update
August 26
I am almost finished with Like ntr day34. with 10% day35 completed as well. The 3d guys is creating good animation, I am having no problem...
Status Update
August 26
I am almost finished with Like ntr day34. with 10% day35 completed as well. The 3d guys is creating good animation, I am having no problem...
- Oct 26, 2017
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Nahhh, He's done this before. I'm also going to become king of the pirates. Just because I keep saying it, doesn't make it true. I think the best update expectations is sadly no expectations. Then you cannot get disappointed....again. Also his status updates being patreon exclusive posts is a kick in the face to people who have supported him before but lost faith. That's called carrot on a stick. Not all horses follow, but you can lead the ones that do anywhere.
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27 september? Hardcore teasers will be behind $30 palpall
so softcore teasers may be seen but progress is very slow
what is day 34 stuff is it not complete?
- Jul 25, 2017
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There is no new information. The update status is also the same "Next update status of chapter 3 v0.5 Rendering 35% Writing 80% Coding 00%" I think it will take 4-5 months for the new chapter to be released.
An chance for double NTR,
Marcus hits on Tracy, she says she can not
Marcus ditches MC and Marcus returns to MC home from school early
and he door is opened by a creapied, sweat tracy wearing only a robe
So Marcus who is a NTRee becomes a NTRed
thinking all the women his own, got furious that someone fucked her before him and look for the culprid
an game this happened?
Marcus hits on Tracy, she says she can not
Marcus ditches MC and Marcus returns to MC home from school early
and he door is opened by a creapied, sweat tracy wearing only a robe
So Marcus who is a NTRee becomes a NTRed
thinking all the women his own, got furious that someone fucked her before him and look for the culprid
an game this happened?
- Nov 11, 2017
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I've said it several times but Tracy should be saved for Weiku and the whole modeling thing and of course being her boss that pushes her into making porn and Sunny eventually following.