Is there any chance someone is willing to make this on android? Including update 0.2 that just recently came out? For some reason Joiplay won't work on it anymore... 
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Where does she muse that she's straight, explicitly. I may have forgotten if I added that in. I think in my mind, she thinks she's straight but is actually gay for futas or bisexual or something to that effect. She just needs some time to come around to the realization.Noooo it does not :x . I'm not sure what I'm doing wrong that it seems so hard to understand what I'm trying to ask
Lemme give it another go, though: Way back, when you released the first version of the game, you said you would offer an alternative to the internal monologue of the (female) protagonist, where she muses about how she's straight, giving players the option to instead play a lesbian female protagonist, as the internal monologue is admittedly a bit off putting and really hurts the immersion (only for people so inclined, ofc).
It just puts a dampener on the overall enjoyment of the game to have the female protag muse about how she's straight, especially since it is factually kinda meaningless, given how the game is about the addiction to Futa cum, there is no way around that to begin with & then also it didn't seem as if the game is about the trauma of a straight girl being forced to suck girl cocks, so while that could potentially be a plot point it doesn't seem like it would really lead anywhere in the long run anyway.
So my question is if it is still on the table that you adjust the internal monologue a bit, maybe give a choice to make that defines the player character's sexual orientation, something along those lines. Definitely not asking for anything beyond that, let alone any specific content building on that. Merely a flavor choice.
Now I wanna ask though, in regards to the femboy, if that NPC will be avoidable, if he ever gets added to begin with.
I thought I left it up to the reader's imagination tbh. Sorry that I didn't make that clear enough.
But I will make it clear if/when your character reaches higher levels of self acceptance. More on that later.
Oh sure. The femboy is an avoidable side character.
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Really? Oh, well I'm not sure what works on and what it doesn't work on.Is there any chance someone is willing to make this on android? Including update 0.2 that just recently came out? For some reason Joiplay won't work on it anymore...
Eventually need to figure out phone build
I'm sorry.
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Would pixel art be good? Because I have it ready for the Constance scene.Well I looked at the new version, still has the same main problem, no visual art in any of the sex scenes (outside of that opening bit), including the new ones.
Was giving the game a shot but quickly ran into this bug for the second day of speaking to Evelyn in the tavern.
Seems like end of content is reached pretty quickly. Gwendolyn's dialogue immediately loops for instance. Fun typos such as "voice grip" as well that made me laugh. I'm digging the general theme but obviously there's still a lot to do. Could be a great one in the future!
EDIT: Oh wait that is literally the end of content three lines later. Very cool. The FutaDomWorld influence was noted so funny to see that you're a writer there. Yeah good stuff I'll keep an eye out.
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Seems like end of content is reached pretty quickly. Gwendolyn's dialogue immediately loops for instance. Fun typos such as "voice grip" as well that made me laugh. I'm digging the general theme but obviously there's still a lot to do. Could be a great one in the future!
EDIT: Oh wait that is literally the end of content three lines later. Very cool. The FutaDomWorld influence was noted so funny to see that you're a writer there. Yeah good stuff I'll keep an eye out.
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You might have actually adjusted that already, it's been a while since I played the game (back when the last update came).
She does so relatively at the start, it's not a be-all/end-all kinda deal but it would certainly be nice if, at some point, there is a choice to make that defines the character as lesbian. Of course it would be nice at the start, but I trust your vision and writing skills.
I'll accept if you want the character to be bi, for sure, but please allow me to voice that I'd find that a little bit meh on a completely personal level, at least. But of course also nothing that would make me think less of the game ^-^
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that meter drain ramps up FAST, do you already have stuff planned(long term or short) to offset that or is it going to be a "tough break, suck more dick or die" sort of thing? obviously that is the theme here but i cant help but be curious about alternate 'paths' for managing oneself in this game
Somehow I missed the second version even though I originally saw this from the itch.io page because I downloaded it from here. Played through the second version and I'm liking it a lot. I think there's great potential here and I'm looking forward to seeing where it goes. The gain of thirst is quite brutal currently, however. I found myself in a locked state where Penny was the only option available to me, yet she was locked because of a bug where going to her at midnight caused the time to skip to next day with her still insisting she was on cooldown. I did some editing of your code (my apologies for reading it) to unstuck myself, but I like the bread crumbs of planned content.
Seconding the other commenter that a lesbian option would be nice and pretty interesting narrative wise on the character level. Currently it's implied otherwise with the line from Rue about the character's boyfriend's cock, but that could be read as a general remark. There's a few other lines that make me think the game is written in mind with a male PC but it's too early to remark much about that kind of thing. The "firstborn" line in particular, unless the religion is matriarchal, in which case hey that'd be something fun.
I don't know if it's an intentional line reuse, but the "dignity fucked out of your eyes" line being mused by Evelyn when she is writing and also stated directly by Penny in her introduction made me laugh. Not sure on earth what "thaggot" is supposed to be as an insult though. I mean, I get most of the inspiration, but it's an odd choice.
Are you doing the art as well? I noticed the replacement of the AI frame with something that looks much better. Liking the style of both the characters and the pixel art. The character designs are great stuff. Everything involving Constance so far is A+ for both writing and art.
Anyways yeah, even for just a rough version 0.2 this is already better than a lot of games so I hope you'll continue with it.
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OH GOD, not another bug. why can't my playtesters and I catch this shit?
So you talk to her on the second day, get through the "date" and get errored?
Gwendolyn's dialogue is meant to be loopable, but it would be nice if I can get her to options to appear more greyed out without writing too many lines of code. I can do it, but it's clunky and I can't help but feel it can be done better. Anyway, not your concern. My responsibility. Thank you for bringing it up.
I removed "Voice grip" already tho-
Oh, I see you played the old version. That makes sense now.
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I personally don't see a reason for her to label herself in any particular way. If MC is female, she is the queen B of her academy. She is presumably good at corralling the girls and talking to the boys. She hasn't sexed any of them (yes, she is a virgin until the opening scene of the game), but Rue doesn't know that. She only sees how the MC carries herself and assumes she gets around with the boys.You might have actually adjusted that already, it's been a while since I played the game (back when the last update came).
She does so relatively at the start, it's not a be-all/end-all kinda deal but it would certainly be nice if, at some point, there is a choice to make that defines the character as lesbian. Of course it would be nice at the start, but I trust your vision and writing skills.
I'll accept if you want the character to be bi, for sure, but please allow me to voice that I'd find that a little bit meh on a completely personal level, at least. But of course also nothing that would make me think less of the game ^-^
Is she straight? Is she gay? Is she straight but gay for futas? I don't think it matters to explicitely say it. I'd rather leave that open for players to decide, since including a choice would just be flavor and have no gameplay differences. I'm particularly allergic to choices that don't matter beyond a surface level.
But since you want it, I'll heavily consider putting it in. I have a journal system idea in the upcoming update I can use to voice the MC's thoughts about her life in general and each girl in particular (plus hints for progression and all that jazz). In it, I can have her explicitly grapple with her sexuality. I think doing it this way is best, since it stays out of the regular game and allows more people to self insert into her without constantly going "WTF" at her train of thought and stepping out of immersion.
Uh yeah, as you can see... writing is very interesting and very hard lmao. I'm figuring it out as I go along.
Thank you for your love and support!
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uh... well, that's a direction I don't wish to take, unfortunately. Lazy AI pics get the ire of the community and I'm already committed to serious and precise art control. You can't get that with AI. Or at least I couldn't. Quickly reaches the point of diminishing returns.
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I will keep diddling the difficulty and rebalance the game for added girls that provide extra cum. Once I figure that out, I'll make alternate difficulty modes and keep adding ways to squeeze out from under the harsh penalties of the vampirism.
At present, there is a way to survive past day 15 when it's the hardest and even completely reverse the curse by day 25. But I don't expect players to find it or have the patience to go through with it.
What I did is to try and get cured in the game. Once I did, I tweaked the code to make it easier. Then shipped it for playtesters. What I didn't realize is that my playtesters were more familiar with the game loop and could get to where they wanted easily.
So... chalk it up to me being a noob game dev. I'll figure it out. Thank you for the feedback. It is immensely useful.
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Yeah, Penny is bugged to jump to the next day if you try to feed from her at night. The only way to make it work is to drink from her during the day and don't bother night feeding. Obviously, I meant to make it night feedable but here we are.
It's fine. I don't put any critical information in the source code and know it's easily crackable with the right tools.
Yeah, so. Rue doesn't know how sexually experienced the MC is. He/she is actually a virgin until the opening sequence of the game where the facefucking happens (planning to make an alternate "skip intro" thing, in which you are fully virginal and plop onto the game)
Rue assumes the female MC gets around simply because of how she carries herself. Her commenting on "your boyfriends" is basically her way of calling you a whore for knowing how to talk to boys. Girl drama stuff.
The reason why the MC doesn't correct her is because she's been slapped 3 times already and doesn't want to get slapped again lol.
Uh... I'm sure that section could be re-re-rewritten better. I'll try again sometime in the future.
The male MC thing is because I'm a dude and have a harder time writing for a female MC. Currently asking some female friends to share their favorite erotic smut so I can add to my brain compost of ideas.
The firstborn are male and females. Thirdborn are hermas. On a human scale, Hermas have been a very very recent addition in the worldbuilding of cum vampire. I don't believe I wrote it in a way to imply it was males only. Did it come off that way?
Yeah, that was a very embarrassing double use of a line someone else caught too.
"Thaggot" is a combo of thug and faggot. Fictional writing requires fictional slurs to be believeable lol
Hermas have a bunch of names. The categorical and civil way to call them is with "herma". The religious clergy of the main religion calls them thirdborn, which is true and a bit of a putdown depending on how you use it. The regular people can call them thaggot as a slur. They have other names used by other parties I'm thinking of, but I can't talk about that shit yet.
I have two manual artists on the team. One of them is a pixel artist who made that breathtaking church BG, the other is a general artist who makes those beautiful expressions you see on Constance. One AI guy who occasionally comes up with templates, then we have the manual artist edit or redraw them from scratch. We need to stay artistically consistent.
Thank you for the Constance praise. I worked hard to make her make sense
You are making a good argument! And as much as I would love for that change to become a thing please let me re-emphasize that, for all my talking about it, I'd really rather not have some more or less personal whim of mine to take away your time and attention from what you yourself feel like really focusing on.I personally don't see a reason for her to label herself in any particular way. If MC is female, she is the queen B of her academy. She is presumably good at corralling the girls and talking to the boys. She hasn't sexed any of them (yes, she is a virgin until the opening scene of the game), but Rue doesn't know that. She only sees how the MC carries herself and assumes she gets around with the boys.
Is she straight? Is she gay? Is she straight but gay for futas? I don't think it matters to explicitely say it. I'd rather leave that open for players to decide, since including a choice would just be flavor and have no gameplay differences. I'm particularly allergic to choices that don't matter beyond a surface level.
But since you want it, I'll heavily consider putting it in. I have a journal system idea in the upcoming update I can use to voice the MC's thoughts about her life in general and each girl in particular (plus hints for progression and all that jazz). In it, I can have her explicitly grapple with her sexuality. I think doing it this way is best, since it stays out of the regular game and allows more people to self insert into her without constantly going "WTF" at her train of thought and stepping out of immersion.
Uh yeah, as you can see... writing is very interesting and very hard lmao. I'm figuring it out as I go along.
Thank you for your love and support!
From a fellow writer's perspective I can only agree that it's always an adventure, so to speak, at least if one is trying to go with the flow of one's imagination and creativity (which I personally prefer over the more methodical approach, though I will never say 1 is better than the other).
The idea with the journal is pretty smart (and tbh getting some hints how to progress with the individual characters is also just gonna be super helpful).
I hope you have a nice weekend! ^-^
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Oh it's fine. You don't need to worry about me being a pushover and bending over backwards for my audience. But I appreciate the gesture.
I look at it like this. If one person is bringing it up, some other people may also be feeling that way. Because you people who actually voice your opinions as opposed to the lurkers are a representative of those lurkers. I just have to be careful not to let some early fan feedback bend the game out of shape in a way that doesn't make sense to my vision. I'll think about it.
Yeah, Penny is bugged to jump to the next day if you try to feed from her at night. The only way to make it work is to drink from her during the day and don't bother night feeding. Obviously, I meant to make it night feedable but here we are.
It's fine. I don't put any critical information in the source code and know it's easily crackable with the right tools.
Yeah, so. Rue doesn't know how sexually experienced the MC is. He/she is actually a virgin until the opening sequence of the game where the facefucking happens (planning to make an alternate "skip intro" thing, in which you are fully virginal and plop onto the game)
Rue assumes the female MC gets around simply because of how she carries herself. Her commenting on "your boyfriends" is basically her way of calling you a whore for knowing how to talk to boys. Girl drama stuff.
The reason why the MC doesn't correct her is because she's been slapped 3 times already and doesn't want to get slapped again lol.
Uh... I'm sure that section could be re-re-rewritten better. I'll try again sometime in the future.
The male MC thing is because I'm a dude and have a harder time writing for a female MC. Currently asking some female friends to share their favorite erotic smut so I can add to my brain compost of ideas.
The firstborn are male and females. Thirdborn are hermas. On a human scale, Hermas have been a very very recent addition in the worldbuilding of cum vampire. I don't believe I wrote it in a way to imply it was males only. Did it come off that way?
Yeah, that was a very embarrassing double use of a line someone else caught too.
"Thaggot" is a combo of thug and faggot. Fictional writing requires fictional slurs to be believeable lol
Hermas have a bunch of names. The categorical and civil way to call them is with "herma". The religious clergy of the main religion calls them thirdborn, which is true and a bit of a putdown depending on how you use it. The regular people can call them thaggot as a slur. They have other names used by other parties I'm thinking of, but I can't talk about that shit yet.
I have two manual artists on the team. One of them is a pixel artist who made that breathtaking church BG, the other is a general artist who makes those beautiful expressions you see on Constance. One AI guy who occasionally comes up with templates, then we have the manual artist edit or redraw them from scratch. We need to stay artistically consistent.
Thank you for the Constance praise. I worked hard to make her make sense
The source code line was mostly a joke about the "I hope nobody is reading this mess" comment within one of the scripts lol. Trust me, I've seen worse!
I figured the boyfriend line was a general insult but wanted to mention it in case it wasn't. How you describe the scene is how I interpreted it. No worries about you having a harder time writing for a female MC since I'm used to that kinda thing, but I do hope some of your friends can give you some good inspiration!
The reason I interfered firstborn meant males is because there's the obvious "well what are the secondborn?" question which isn't mentioned textually at all yet. Early game still though so lots of worldbuilding still in the works, I imagine.
To be clear what I mean about "thaggot" is that while I understood the etymology, I thought it's an odd choice in that it's a mashup that just kinda sounds weird, but also usually a sexual orientation slur doesn't really fit imo. I can't say I'd suggest transphobic based insults though since I think any sort of fantasy insult based in reality is probably going to cause some players to bounce off the game when they otherwise wouldn't. Food for thought, anyway.
Wonderful news about the artists because that church BG is GORGEOUS and the character art is top notch. Excited for more!
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HOLY SHIT. I forgot an important detail.
Evelyn is repeating that line, because she is the author's self insert. Lmao
Basically, the joke is that she's writing smut for patrons (kinda like me, except I don't despise my fans lol), so I thought it would be funi if she was the author of the scene.