So far I like it, the writing is enjoyable & that matters far more to me than the question if the art has the level of consistency that is 1 of the advantages of (especially professionally) hand drawn art. I also don't see a reason to doubt your ability to develop a routine at tweaking the images until the results fit the characters, doesn't have to be perfect by any means.
I really like Violet, the landlady also isn't bad by any means & while there could be a bit more buildup to Violet making a move on the protagonist I don't think it's strictly necessary. Personally I'd prefer seeing things moving than delaying the lewds just for flavor.
Things I hope for in the future: Definitely would be cool if the protag could go through some character development & stop being such a jerk in regards to their treatment of especially Rue (though some of that of course is warranted in a way because of what she did although that of course also wasn't exactly unwarranted either) but this is probably something you don't need to be told, I mean this is just a first release, a glimpse at what you have planned.
On an entirely personal note (and this is a pure nitpick, so it's not something the game needs by any means) I would welcome an alternative start where the protag isn't a jerk towards the entirely desirable and very loveable
Rue & ends up with the curse as more of an accident. Since that idea would mean a lot of rewriting for the prologue tho it can be discarded, read this more as me really hoping to get the choice to apologize and make it up to her at some later point in the story.
Edit: To provide at least something of an idea how I think the accident thing could work (not saying though that it works nearly as well as what you did): theoretically Rue could have experimented with her attempt to create cum vampirism & because the player teased her for years (on the verge of bullying, sometimes beyond it, out of inability to approach her in a proper manner because of being an uptight, arrogant dumbnut worried how it would be percieved by peers from their own social class if they tried to get closer to Rue) the protag kinda ends up being the target for it but it goes further than Rue initially intended?
But, again, not really something the game needs, it just would make me feel better about "my"self (or rather the character I'm playing)
My second kinda-nitpick would be the way Rue's dialogue is altered when she confronts the player character. In my personal opinion it would make more sense if the female protagonist had girlfriends (not boyfriends) because then it would make a bit more sense for her to maybe feel threatened by Futas who could potentially provide something to the (statistically probably not overly common) girls who'd be interested in a female protagonist that the latter doesn't have. This also would be closer to the male protag feeling jealous of Rue's cock (which I assume is the male protag variant of that dialogue)
I want to be honest though so I'm gonna add that this would also cater more to my likings since I'd prefer playing (or getting the choice to) a female protag who's a lesbian, so it's not a purely altruistic recommendation.
Looking forward to the upcoming updates!
I really like Violet, the landlady also isn't bad by any means & while there could be a bit more buildup to Violet making a move on the protagonist I don't think it's strictly necessary. Personally I'd prefer seeing things moving than delaying the lewds just for flavor.
Things I hope for in the future: Definitely would be cool if the protag could go through some character development & stop being such a jerk in regards to their treatment of especially Rue (though some of that of course is warranted in a way because of what she did although that of course also wasn't exactly unwarranted either) but this is probably something you don't need to be told, I mean this is just a first release, a glimpse at what you have planned.
On an entirely personal note (and this is a pure nitpick, so it's not something the game needs by any means) I would welcome an alternative start where the protag isn't a jerk towards the entirely desirable and very loveable
Rue & ends up with the curse as more of an accident. Since that idea would mean a lot of rewriting for the prologue tho it can be discarded, read this more as me really hoping to get the choice to apologize and make it up to her at some later point in the story.Edit: To provide at least something of an idea how I think the accident thing could work (not saying though that it works nearly as well as what you did): theoretically Rue could have experimented with her attempt to create cum vampirism & because the player teased her for years (on the verge of bullying, sometimes beyond it, out of inability to approach her in a proper manner because of being an uptight, arrogant dumbnut worried how it would be percieved by peers from their own social class if they tried to get closer to Rue) the protag kinda ends up being the target for it but it goes further than Rue initially intended?
But, again, not really something the game needs, it just would make me feel better about "my"self (or rather the character I'm playing)
My second kinda-nitpick would be the way Rue's dialogue is altered when she confronts the player character. In my personal opinion it would make more sense if the female protagonist had girlfriends (not boyfriends) because then it would make a bit more sense for her to maybe feel threatened by Futas who could potentially provide something to the (statistically probably not overly common) girls who'd be interested in a female protagonist that the latter doesn't have. This also would be closer to the male protag feeling jealous of Rue's cock (which I assume is the male protag variant of that dialogue)
I want to be honest though so I'm gonna add that this would also cater more to my likings since I'd prefer playing (or getting the choice to) a female protag who's a lesbian, so it's not a purely altruistic recommendation.
Looking forward to the upcoming updates!
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I think this game is built around a hilarious set of premises.
ai cg + avatar that is obviously drawn by boobsgame + all of these images looks random af, I assume you must've used ChatGPT to right ur codes and dialogues plus prompt u the "concepts of an adult themed game"?
Dude I don't have anything to say that could possibly degrade u more. If that is your philosophy of game-making then I have but only one question, why did you even bother?
Dude I don't have anything to say that could possibly degrade u more. If that is your philosophy of game-making then I have but only one question, why did you even bother?
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Sure, I did it in ~30 days, but I had mentorship from Futadomworld devs and tech support from the renpy discord community.Actually game is not that bad at all for a first attempt. And a month of work.
Love the dialogues. They're not great but they are better than 85% of the shit here around here.
I would recommed getting some UI changes, like what day is it, time of the day...as you do things how the time progresses. Would be nice to have option of inputting a custom name. Maybe as the story progresses, some character relationship display screen with NPC-s would be nice. Like some statuses. How much you're friendly/annoying or submissive to them. Sort of like a score sheet. Just to give some representation to some of the choices consequences.
Inventory system would also be a welcome addition. Some items you could buy and use.
Also since this world is magic theme, perhaps give some thought to a possibility of a different curses that some other witch might bestow upon the MC, like shrinking his penis, perhaps some sort of chastity, maybe even shrinking his body a little by each time. Enlarging his tongue?
Hope you get a hang of AI generated art so you can pull more things...like different POVs (from suckin POV, licking feet). Try checking out deviantart, there's a lot of artists that do a really good job with their prompts. They can even pull some limited continuity with their characters, eg. face & body proportion stays the same. But I guess they even use slightly some photoshop.
All in all, not bad,
its got potential!
Cheers!
What? It's not great??? WHO'S BETTER??? THERE MUST ONLY BE ONE!
The code is an absolute mess right now. Instead of systemising the day/night cycle, I manually added day and night each time ♂
But yeah, that's next on my list as well as a cum and sanity/pride meter. You haven't even seen the gameplay mechanics yet!
The relationship dynamic thing might be a good idea I'll consider it.
I'm not sure about inventory. I'll add that when I have a purpose for it.
Those alternate magical curses are outside of my plans, but I'm not opposed to them either. Some SPH might be good though
I'll make sure to include opt in and out options for most stuff.
Someone is helping me with the AI art. Though they're not proficient at it, they actually have the hardware to locally install SD. I make due with extremely limited free online servicesAnd yeah, this short time made me much better with gimp (free alternative to photoshop)
Thank youuuuu~
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I won't make it too harsh or miserable, don't worry lol... unless, of course, if people really want it...
Oh, believe me, it was much more broken before. She used to hold up cocktail shrubs in her hand... for some fekkin reason.
Some of the pixel art were free game assets, some were generated. All of them were edited in gimp by me.
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I love the adult female MC design, but for fuck's sake, did you really have to ruin the game by making H-scenes with AI software!? AI art is full of errors, dude. How have you missed the ones that's already visible in one screenshot??
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On contrary I meant it's something that fits both ends. =)
Keep doing what you planned already, this auth to be successful project.
Also as for name, "Cum junkie" would be perfect haha.
Good luck dev, looking forward for more already