VN Ren'Py Curvy Moments [v0.17e] [AdultAndi]

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Overview:
You play as a Fashion Designer who works at a famous company while he lives in a suburban town away from his family
He starts to make his own business with the help of his neighbour’s wife and he became close to his dream
Will you dominate the other companies including the company you used to work for...and the surrounding women ? Or you will just sit on the street and lose everything and everyone you love,Your choices will decide…..​

Thread Updated: 2024-11-09
Release Date: 2024-09-08
Developer: AdultAndi

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Censored: No
Version: 0.17e
OS: Windows, Linux, Mac, Android
Language: English
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Extras: Walkthrough Mod*
*This unofficial port/version is not released by developer, download at your own risk.

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[effninefivehuman]

I initially thought that Chaixas released a new game

 

[Norman Knight]

The thickness is real boi!

I'll keep and eye on this one, love my curvy thick ladies

 

[Kakato]

I initially thought that Chaixas released a new game

If it was him, game would be called " Obese moments "

 

[Mirso]

So whats new from 0.1a and 0.1e?

 

[SummmerP]

"he starts to make his own business with the help of his neighbour’s wife and he..."

 

[BarbarrossaNA]

Pretty decent renders.. now all we need is it translated to english.....

 

[fanboi]

Curvy you say?

 

[Saint Blackmoor]

You play as a Fashion Designer

Brad Pitts's less well-known brother, Chad Pitt

 

[Crow Armbrust]

THX

 

[AndrwaQli]

"he starts to make his own business with the help of his neighbour’s wife and he..."
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i dont see where the funny part !

 

[punisher2099]

What are the future tags?

 

[fanboi]

Very nice start to the game! I really like the neighbor and especially boss's wife. Looking forward to see what the boss's wife does, she is giving off dominant vibes and I just love that! To the dev, congratulations on the game!

 

[Boobs Lover]

Curvy Milfs and fashion business, many intersting actions in changing rooms are coming
Awesome looking Milfs!
mc is even handsome, he is most good looking mc in this month, damn weirdo. he should be ugly like other male mcs

 

[rKnight]

Your choices will decide...

MC: "Better too much than too little! ...THICC makes right!"

 

[Dripping]

Biggest question: will this get the harem tag?
Asking for a friend, obviously.

 

[Manford]

I enjoyed the thickness. Needs a better proof reader and translator.

 

[Hornyowl]

Future Tags? Maaaaybeeeee Cheating? Harem?

Edit: Some quick initial comments:
...The MC's office looks like one for a private detective...complete with the folders and plaques. The guy is a fashion designer so the setting should reflect that so as to project some aspect of realism. It also doesn't match the rest of the company.
...If you are going to be developing an English Language game, get a competent person to read your script/dialogue. Do not only use Google Translate (or some other similar package). Native English speakers do NOT speak like that. Having to read such dialogue becomes jarring, frustrating and extremely annoying. Sometimes it's contradictory...e.g. if something is "too heavy" it generally means you cannot lift it, not "I got it..."
...Be consistent. A lot of the initial script deals with the MC's thoughts (him essentially speaking to himself). Nothing wrong with that but it may be advisable to maybe put it in italics or brackets (which you eventually did) so that it comes across better as an internal monologue.
...There are SEVERAL gaps in your story e.g. how does he know that the girl on the train is "an innocent virgin"? Or how does he initially know that Andrea is married? How does he know she is having marital problems? Why doesn't he know about the boss's trip? He works every day, so why does he tell the secretary he's just chilling?
...Aaaand your animations need to sync with your monologue.

 

[彡SILENT๛ONE]

What are the planned tags ?

 

[AdultAndi]

The thickness is real boi!

I'll keep and eye on this one, love my curvy thick ladies

Have a good day