Ch. 5 part 2 feels like creating in a rush, I mean look, (1) heist is ok but Val sudden appearance in a warehouse room like dev can use her shadow figure in a dark room as a cliffhanger in part 1, (2) Kendra and Lilith adult scene is rushed too and MC's behavior towards Lilith after the scene is look like childish, (3) connection between Val and MC was better when Val is virtually present and it is good that she is now with them but still lack that verbal connection, (4) Agent Lawson can get more heavy presence when meet with Zhine like he is really know how to play with words, (5) sudden mention of gala event (not the issue in itself) but Zhine's connection with big-wig of the city, I mean atleast show us some of them (Big-Wig) in other previous chapters. And yeah! the dev is doing a great work with the story and it looks great if MC's mother is behind the Hack'n'Slay and MC's father is Agent Lawson. But all in all great work.