Unity Abandoned Dark Affection [v0.36a] [Nudis]

[thevoid089]

If Moriko is Kenzo's girlfriend, this might be the inevitable part. Unless the player doesn't mess with her.

I'm deciding what to do with it, not afraid if the game gets darker because I'm already plotting it that way.

But I'd love to hear your opinions as well.

If it's netori then everyone will okay with that, there's a difference between netori and netorare is that: Netori is where the MC steal the girl of other (friend, enemy, wife of someone else,....) which is okay in everyone's eyes, netorare aka NTR is where people make lot of fuss about because it would meant MC would have lost their girls to other NPCs which is what they dislike and didn't want it to happen. In short: Better I'm the alpha that go around cucking people than be the receiving end and got cucked instead
Overall that's would still depend on your choice if you want to add netorare or not, I'm personally won't be harsh on your decision if you let me and other to have option to avoid that fate completely

 

[mrttao]

So... they decided to make this in unity.
And they fucked it up somehow, there are constant delays. After many text boxes there is a small animation or sound effect which delay the showing up of the next textbox for up to several seconds. and it cannot be skipped.

Also it starts off way too slow with boring slice of life that could have been summed up with "this is my childhood friend". we could have had a flashback much much later on showing the childhood in question instead of starting out with a long overdrawn intro to each character. Should start out with the actual plot right away instead of this background stuff. This is called a writing hook.

 

[Alias Unknown]

Some advice to the Dev, let the audience figure things out.
"Mai-chan has the worst memories of a rainy night." was all I need to understand and then there are 3 text boxes elaborating on a point I already understood, making me stop caring. Every character has this on introduction as well.

Additionally, you are introducing too many characters too quickly. I don't know how many should be introduced over what time frame, but I am at the above mentioned scene and the only names I remember are Mai, Sakura and Elene and the only character beyond those I'm interested in the story of is the girl who approaches you about joining a club. Leading me to a suggestion, when you introduce a character, do so with a reason for the player to care. I don't care about the student president but I do care about the girl who asked me to spend time with her.

 

[Alias Unknown]

I've gotten to the moment the MC decides rather than interact with the characters the player already knows, he will go and introduce a new character, the nurse. Then instead I watch a conversation between two characters I have been made to dislike about how hot the nurse is.

The game has told me that it does not respect my time and is just throwing distractions at me. This is my quit point.

 

[Nudis]

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If it's netori then everyone will okay with that, there's a difference between netori and netorare is that: Netori is where the MC steal the girl of other (friend, enemy, wife of someone else,....) which is okay in everyone's eyes, netorare aka NTR is where people make lot of fuss about because it would meant MC would have lost their girls to other NPCs which is what they dislike and didn't want it to happen. In short: Better I'm the alpha that go around cucking people than be the receiving end and got cucked instead
Overall that's would still depend on your choice if you want to add netorare or not, I'm personally won't be harsh on your decision if you let me and other to have option to avoid that fate completely

Yes it's Netori, or maybe the latter but it can be avoided, I'll try to make it as safe as possible with the player's feelings.

 

[Nudis]

I've gotten to the moment the MC decides rather than interact with the characters the player already knows, he will go and introduce a new character, the nurse. Then instead I watch a conversation between two characters I have been made to dislike about how hot the nurse is.

The game has told me that it does not respect my time and is just throwing distractions at me. This is my quit point.

Anyway thanks for the comments, I personally feel that in the first EP the storyline is too long, I'll try to make the content more concise.

 

[MarkD]

If accumulating too much dark energy leads to a bad end, does that mean it will not be possible to see all of the erotic scenes in one playthrough? I hope there will be a way to reduce the main character's dark energy without choosing the "nice guy" choices (i.e. grinding money and buying items, doing some special training/meditation) so that it will be possible to have a "full evil" playthrough. That would give players 3 different paths through the game (all good, all evil or balanced) which would create more replay value.

 

[Nudis]

Latest update of EP1

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- Changed from Unity 2018 to Unity 2020
- Fixed all game lag (more smooth)
- Fixed girls character breast size
- Fixed some conversations to be able to score

Old saves may play some and not because they may be saved in the edited page. (Fixed almost every page in game acceleration section) This version is the last update of EP1.

 

[Drafox]

Great premise, hopefully it will get better and not fall rapidly after the first release like many others...Also no remakes please and no rework that's just too awful to watch these days, it's okay to make mistakes but it's not so to let it hold the whole project down.

 

[cumshot_enjoyer]

can anyone buy from the market like milk veggys and milk? Nothing happens in my screen

 

[bido0915]

I have played EP1 twice. Game update is considerably fast. When do you release EP2??

 

[Nudis]

can anyone buy from the market like milk veggys and milk? Nothing happens in my screen

Sometimes the game has a bug that I don't understand and have to find a weird way to fix it, if you buy something and can't move forward, try restarting game and play the save before that

 

[Nudis]

I have played EP1 twice. Game update is considerably fast. When do you release EP2??

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The next episode should be open for play around the end of March. I update the game progress every day in Discord. Now I want to modify the look of the game and make the system easier to play because in the next ep the game will answer all the questions players have

 

[MMEdge]

I can not buy anything in the market. I tried save the game but it does not work for me.

 

[Nudis]

I can not buy anything in the market. I tried save the game but it does not work for me.

You play from save file of the first version and continue with the latest version, or start over from the latest version.

 

[Nudis]

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Next will be to make the game system clear

 

[Nudis]

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This system will be displayed after the end of the conversation with the girls. There are 3 icons, the heart on the left is giving a gift, the black heart is corrupt mode, the right green is the girl's personal information.

 

[Nudis]

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[thevoid089]

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I'll help post the whole post here for Mods to see and updating your game thread

Dark Affection Ep.1C (Last update of EP.1)
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- Change the new map UI.
- Fixed some character details.
- Reset all variables to support the corruption system in the next EP.
- Speed up the processing game.
- A few scenes were added to give a hint of the story in the next episode.
"DARK AFFECTION EPISODE2: BROKEN SKY" will be available for download around the end of March.
I just found out that the discord invite link expired a few days ago, this is new link

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Once again thank you for your hard work and doing the best to improving player's experience with your project

 

[NikoHello]

It's still early in development, and I try to reserve harsh judgement for games that are nearing a state of completion. I've not made it too far in, but so far I'm liking it. That said, there's one minor part that after I noticed, I can't stop noticing. I'm not one to critique art (my own art is certainly worthy of it's own criticism), but the only thing about the game that's really bothered me is the MC's neck. Boy's got a THICC neck! Like, too thick. For the art style, I personally would slightly slim the neck a bit, mayb lower the head a bit to keep it looking right.

I dunno, I know I'm nitpicking. The art looks good, it's just that when I noticed that, every time I saw the MC's graphic, that's all I paid attention to. If that's what the dev sticks with, I won't make an argument. I'm just giving my 2 cents as a player.