RPGM Abandoned Dark Age [v0.10b] [Veeni]

[Veeni]

zeraligator I adore elves, so in the near future there will be only them to start with.
--Crimson-- ❤
Jacenraze Yes, there is a small problem here. Unfortunately English is not my native language, so there are some errors. But if you really like the game and want to help me a little, you can point them with screenshots in the discord server, thanks in advance
myself Definitely yes!
Helmyoga I'm not sure if I optimized the game for android... And this message does not make sense, since this plugin is already at the very top of the list, try to play on Windows better.
MythMackay I hope you enjoy it)
-VALKORION- I'm glad to see people here who played DA)
CircleJerker Wow, interesting of course ... But I prefer quality more.
Ronin250 Yeah... It's not that easy, maybe I should put a marker on the minimap for them (or is it still not worth it, because it's a challenge?)
moonblackhen 1)Just press F4, all decent games always starts from FULLSCREEN
2)Unfortunately this is the case, I will be glad if you help me fix some of them by sending a screenshot to the discord channel with a report of text errors.
3)This will not be changed because THIS will definitely ruin the dive. You do not know for sure what can lead you to what consequences in real life? (and if they knew, then I think they invested in bitcoin in the year 2016)
And I also tried to make such choices not random, but somehow related to specific things, for example, choosing the Sagittarius sign (if you know the right dates) you definitely cannot get any serious bonuses to magic, but on the contrary, you will get a reference to the fact that associated with this sign in real life. For example, in this case, this is the myth of the centaur Chiron, in which he dies from the poisoned arrow of Hercules, therefore this buff gives a bonus to accuracy, since Chiron was an accurate archer, but at the same time reduces resistance to poisons and piercing damage (often arrows) and etc. with almost everything.
Valeriyo Me too
Well, maybe someone decided to write something like their own wiki or guide so that those who want to know it in advance can see it, huh?)

 

[Harem Trooper]

Me too
Well, maybe someone decided to write something like their own wiki or guide so that those who want to know it in advance can see it, huh?)

I was thinking you would do it...since you know...you are the dev

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[Harem Trooper]

Anyone curious i write sauce because i am considerate like that. Saikyou Juzoku Tensei: Cheat Majutsushi no Slow Life

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[moonblackhen]

moonblackhen 1)Just press F4, all decent games always starts from FULLSCREEN
2)Unfortunately this is the case, I will be glad if you help me fix some of them by sending a screenshot to the discord channel with a report of text errors.
3)This will not be changed because THIS will definitely ruin the dive. You do not know for sure what can lead you to what consequences in real life? (and if they knew, then I think they invested in bitcoin in the year 2016)
And I also tried to make such choices not random, but somehow related to specific things, for example, choosing the Sagittarius sign (if you know the right dates) you definitely cannot get any serious bonuses to magic, but on the contrary, you will get a reference to the fact that associated with this sign in real life. For example, in this case, this is the myth of the centaur Chiron, in which he dies from the poisoned arrow of Hercules, therefore this buff gives a bonus to accuracy, since Chiron was an accurate archer, but at the same time reduces resistance to poisons and piercing damage (often arrows) and etc. with almost everything.

No offense, but this is stupid. This is a GAME, not real life! All you are doing is wasting my time by making me replay the start of the game over and over, until I find the choices that will allow me to create the character I want! Just let me create my character!

Question: What is the second bonus you get for choosing Divitaris? The first seems to be more gold dropped by enemies, but the icon of the second one is not so clear. Is it increased chance for enemies to drop items? Or something else? I honestly can't tell...


Some typos and weirdly worded texts:

You was born under the sign of...

That should be “You were born...” Seems to be the same for all signs (or at least the few I tried).

You was born as High Elf

Again, that should be “You were born”. Also, it should be “as a High Elf.”

You can feel how mana pulsing through your body.
From your very birth, fate itself was destined for you to become a skilled magician.

The first line should be either “You can feel mana pulsing through your body.” or “You can feel how mana is pulsing through your body.”

The second line... if I understand correctly what you were trying to say, there are multiple ways to word it, but I would use either “From birth you were destined to become a skilled magician.” or “Since birth you were destined to become a skilled magician.”

You are filling up with a slight cold , you feel how your mind becoming clearer.

There should not be an empty space before the comma, but more importantly, the second part of the sentence should be “you feel how your mind becomes clearer” or “you feel your mind becoming clearer” or “you feel how your mind is becoming clearer”.

Dominis
Rejoice, Elf! Soon you will be granted to see the light given to us our great god!

That should be “by our great god!”

Your gaze are fixed on Divitaris.

Should be “Your gaze is fixed” (I think this is the same for all three goddesses).

Amaris
I can see how passion springing up in your heart, Elf.

Either “I can see passion springing up in your heart” or “I can see how passion is springing up in your heart” or “I can see how passion springs up in your heart”.

You was endowed with the gift of Divitaris:

You was endowed with the blessing of Amaris:

In both cases it should be “You were endowed”.

The voice of all three gods standing in front of you sounds in your head at the same time, sticking deep into your consciousness.

If it is one voice, then it should be “The voice of all three goddesses standing in front of you sounds in your head, sticking deep into your consciousness.” If it is three voices, then it should be “The voices of all three goddesses standing in front of you sound in your head at the same time, sticking deep into your consciousness.”

You barely remember your childhood and your parents well. At an early age in you, yours older brother and yours sister was noticed the ability to magic and take to the school of magic in Divinor, the main capital city of Tenebria.

Multiple things here:
- normally it would be “your older brother and your sister” - unless this is some sort of stylistic choice
- the first sentence should be “You barely remember your childhood and your parents.”
- the second sentence should probably be rewritten – something like this: “At an early age the ability to use magic was discovered in you, your older brother and your sister, and the three of you were taken to the school of magic in Divinor, the main capital city of Tenebria.”

It was a closed school on the outskirts of the city, where trained children in who had at least some rudiments of magic.

The wording feels off here. One way to reword it would be: “It was an isolated school on the outskirts of the city. Children who had at least some talent for magic trained there.”

I think that's enough for today. Good luck with the game, I'll wait for a wiki or something.

 

[Deleted member 185293]

-be me
-download and install the whole 1.46 gigs
-skip text
-how do I get to the 3rd floor?
-BALEETED

 

[formasual]

Looks nice, but I'm just not a fan of 2dcg. Maybe add a tag for this? Or am I seeing something no one else is?

 

[Makaikishi]

Just finished the demo and i liked, it is interesting and looks that there will be some nice content.
A few things i think should be changed:
*Resolution, right now it loses quality when you want it to fill the screen and that looks weird.
*Performance, somehow it manages to drop fps quite frequently and i'm running on a 1070ti so it's not my pc.
*Lack of instant text, this is something that bothers me greatly, i really hate waiting for the text to finish and yes i know you can double click or press space again but that can lead to accidentally skipping text, i don't think it should be hard to implement such option.
Well for now this is what i think about it, good luck on your game

 

[Veeni]

moonblackhen Yeah, that increasing drop chance of items from enemies.
Thank you for some text corrections, it's just wonderful
Eric1981 Yes, unfortunately or fortunately, this is not just a visual novel where it is enough to press the "LMB" and watch porn)
formasual It looks like, cause 2dcg is only rpg maker sprites here)
Makaikishi Thanks

 

[♍VoidTraveler]

or fortunately

Definitely fortunately.
A lot of dimwits on this site skip text just so they can get to cg's quickly.
Like, why even bother playing games if jacking to porn pics is all you want to do?
Just go here:

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and wank all day long, no text to skip, no gigs to download, pure pleasure.

 

[-VALKORION-]

Definitely fortunately.
A lot of dimwits on this site skip text just so they can get to cg's quickly.
Like, why even bother playing games if jacking to porn pics is all you want to do?
Just go here:

You must be registered to see the links

and wank all day long, no text to skip, no gigs to download, pure pleasure.

Facts.

 

[Pervy Sensei]

myself Incest on patreon is allowed depending on the context, in this case it is the medieval setting and the biological characteristics of specific races.

They claim that it is allowed (basically because of the popularity of GOT), but anyone who gets reported by a patron is inevitably forced to remove incest content. It's just a matter of how long it takes for you to get popular enough that some new patron checks it out and then decides to report your Patreon page to the Trust and Safety team. If you don't believe me, then try reaching out to the Trust and Safety team about it and see what they say. It would be best for you to get this resolved now, rather than later and have to rewrite or entirely remove large portions of your game down the road.

If you can work out with them a way in which they will allow it "due to context", please let us know how that conversation went.

 

[Pervy Sensei]

Wow, 1.5 GB already? Not getting compressed at all, maybe?

 

[Veeni]

♍VoidTraveler Yes, there is a little problem with that, but that's their business. Perhaps I will add the ability to immediately open CG at the beginning of the game through the code for such people in the next hotfix.
Btw I use this same site to search for some hentai manga
-VALKORION- Definitely
Pervy Sensei Yes, I have already emailed them about this. I'll let you know as soon as I get an answer.
The size of the game is because there are some unnecessary animations now, I will remove them in the next hotfix along with some text edits and a couple of new features. The real size of the game at the moment is about ~ 700mb

P.S. Guys, btw. Please rate my game with your review on this forum thread, I'll just be sooooo grateful to you ❤ ❤

 

[moonblackhen]

For anyone interested, here are the effects of the choices you make at the start of the game. At least the effects the game displays – I don't know if there are any hidden effects.


Races:

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Date of birth:

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The spheres:

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The goddesses:

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The exam:

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Veeni I noticed that certain Properties are not reflected in the Parameters window. For example, the character from the screenshots below is supposed to have +1% HP Regeneration, but that is not shown on the Parameters screen (there you can see 0% HP Regeneration). Is this a bug? If it is intended, then it is rather confusing.

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[GXT145]

I came for some eyecandy but this looks promising; like it could become a very good RPG. I am really looking forward to it. All these character parameters, race, birth sign, resistances and item classes.. o boi.

 

[Veeni]

moonblackhen Attached your message to the post. Thanks
Regarding some properties, I will check it and in the next hotfix everything will work as it should.
"Some choices seem better than others."
Could you elaborate on what you mean exactly?
"Also not a fan of what I get if I choose to visit the MC's sister."
And this also (I forgot about it before...)
GXT145 I promise, it will be just the best game in the indie RPG 18+ genre!)

 

[moonblackhen]

moonblackhen Attached your message to the post. Thanks
Regarding some properties, I will check it and in the next hotfix everything will work as it should.
"Some choices seem better than others."
Could you elaborate on what you mean exactly?
"Also not a fan of what I get if I choose to visit the MC's sister."
And this also (I forgot about it before...)

Well, look at what each choice gets you. Capricorn, Pisces, Aries, Taurus, Gemini and Libra seem to have no negative sides that I can see. Compare them to Cancer, Virgo, Scorpio and Sagittarius – for me the negative sides out-weight the positives, especially when combined with other choices (High Elves already get negative resistance to Slash, Blunt, and Pierce, and Virgo makes it even worse). For Aquarius and Leo it is arguable whether or not the positives are enough to balance the negatives.

Same with the choice before the exam. I want to be a good brother and check on my sister, but that costs me more than it gives me. I mean, more Crit chance may seem nice, but in most RPG Maker games spells have no Crit chance, and with spells as my main form of attack Crit chance seems useless. Certainly not worth losing max HP. Choosing "Continue to watch people in the square" seems like a much better choice. Sure, I lose some Crit chance, but the gains are worth it, plus see what I just said abut Crit chance. I'd rather have the extra HP and HP regeneration.

Since I am playing as a mage I want to make choices that fit a mage. That makes some of the options less than optimal.

 

[Demoness_Kiss]

save location?

 

[Jacenraze]

I actually have to agree with MoonBlackHen on The choices, Not to mention having Melancholy as a personality would have HUGE social disadvantages you would have to overcome to be able to interact with others on a normal level, I would know having been there when I was younger, it took years of therapy to overcome. so you you would have double the disadvantage giving yourself a pseudo hard mode from the start.it just seems like to big of a problem from visiting sis.

 

[Veeni]

save location?

Dark Age (v0.10a)/save/***here***