this game seriously needs proofreading before updates are released! Half of the sentences made no sense at all because of seriously poor English. The mc needs a massive overhaul, he is without doubt the worst protagonist I have ever had to play and that is really saying something about how badly many of these games mc are. The story is literally all over the place from beginning to end, and the plot holes are some of the biggest I have ever seen.
I really only kept playing on to the end of this version of the game, because some of the characters or women are really developed. Which is kind of odd considering how bad the mc actually is. MC joins the army and is told he will receive his uniform in a few day's time which never happens.
I wondered about the state of the developer's mind when they wrote this. I really dislike being rude to anyone. However, the fact is throughout this game, it's as if the writer completely forgets what he wrote previously. The writer for example constantly gets side-tracked, and then not remembering something previously that you're waiting to happen, but actually doesn't happen at all quite frequently and is the very likely reason this story ends up being an incoherent mess at times.
There is also a lot of time-wasting going on with the storyline too. for example having to sleep repeatedly just to wait for something to happen, which really isn't that often, except near the end of this version of the game.
Too many things make absolutely no sense whatsoever, again perhaps because whoever wrote this, really does have a bad understanding of the English language. The wrong choice of words, constant misspelled words. Incomplete words and a lot of time sentences make no sense, which is really bad when you're actually trying to follow the storyline and your confronted with nonsensical sentences spoken by a character, and your left wondering what the hell they just said. Sorry if I am being far too critical, but I want to like this story, and for me to be able to do that, I need to understand what is actually being said without so many spelling mistakes, and the wrong use of words, and as for grammar I am not even going there. All i care about is what the characters are saying to each other without having to spend 10 minutes trying to figure out what someone said.
As I mentioned this story is all over the place, and its actually difficult to follow at times, because of it. You need a proofreader or two, to fix all these language errors. The characters are gorgeous, except the seriously retarded mc..again it needs to be both toned down and fixed. There is nothing worse than trying to follow a story when the mc is a complete fucktarded manchild. sorry. In a strange way, I am looking forward to v.0.15 whenever that might see the light of day, i am just hoping you're going to take on board what I have said because it's a fucking mess the way it is right now!