The following review is based off my personal experience with playing this Game/Visual Novel... I try to be as brutally honest and detailed as I can, and these are my own opinions and thoughts, from one or more play throughs... The version this review is based on is Chapter 1...
(12/11/2017 - Original Review - Chapter 1)
This visual novel/game was strange yet entertaining to read, as it did have a lot of dialogue/monologue and the graphics were alright... It starts off dark and mysterious, and ends with a bizarre (maybe oh-so laughable) scene near the end... Can't tell if this is intended as a comedy or if they are being serious and it just ends up being slightly funny on accident... Who knows...
The visuals were average, not the best, but not bad either... Some of the characters had disproportionate size body parts compared to their body frame, which is probably something the author/s are just into... The backdrops were alright, about the same as the character visuals in quality... The UI was a bit substandard, as the interactions with everything were big letter boxes rather then some other method... They served their function, they were just primitive looking compared to other things I've seen in other vn's; like glowing items when hovered over or perhaps the words appearing in bold letters as you hover over them, etc... Instead it was almost like generic web buttons... It's one of the few Unreal Engine visual novels I've experienced, so perhaps that is just the limits of the software, dunno... Also, the protagonists doo-dah was WAY too oversized for his body frame, but I'll assume that was some supernatural thing going on, otherwise it was definitely a break from reality/immersion...
The story started off very strange, although it began to make some sense... There were some occasional spelling/grammar errors, but not a whole lot, as I could understand most of the script with ease... The story was going in some strange directions, and I started to feel a bit sorry for the protagonist as his mother and definitely his older sister were kind of verbally abusive towards him... The mother's emotions were just all over the place, and I couldn't believe how oblivious she was to his warnings concerning her dress code prior to the sudden realization, only after he started having pain in the car... The older sister, I can only assume she is super controlling and mean... Maybe because she's sexually frustrated and totally in love with her brother, and being overly mean in an attempt to shut out those feelings, but that's just me making a guesstimation... If I'm wrong, then she is just a jerk i guess... The story did flow well, and shows a lot of potential for an interesting albeit somewhat disturbing story...
This visual novel/game is in early stages of development, only being Chapter 1, although it felt more like a Prologue... If the authors can work out some of the kinks, however minor they may be, and continue to make it interesting and even sometimes farcical, then it might turn out alright... Have to wait and see just what the author/s have planned, will it get way out of hand or be rather entertaining? Have to wait and see...
(03/06/2018 - Review Update - Chapter 2 Bonus Ed.)
Well, this new chapter is definitely taking on a more dark flavor... In chapter 1, due to the visuals and so on, I had an inkling that perhaps it might be going more for a slightly dark comedy vibe... But in this newest version with Chapter 2, I don't really see much in the way of comedy at all, as it is taking on a darker feel...
It feels more like the other family members are becoming more corrupt in spite of the protagonists attempts to fight the darkness within himself... As though his actions are not directly influencing their behavior, so much as being victims of his attempts to stop the corruption from taking over himself... Not sure that was an intentional process, or just a byproduct of what is actually occurring in the story... In the end of this content he even attempts to take things to the extreme to stop himself, right before the content ends for Chapter 2...
Overall, Chapter 2 shows more of how this story will develop... More of an internal struggle between his inner demon and his desire to protect his family... In some instances he gives in a little, and in other ways he takes ahold of his destiny... Such as with his older sister, she had beaten him into submission so many times, you can decide to fight back or continue to cave in... But with that newly found strength, also comes the price of giving in a bit more to his desires... This whole story is a power play between his inner desires, his unwillingness to hurt his family, and the struggle of the people around him to deal and cope with his changes and their own needs/desires...
There is definitely more erotic events in this new chapter, which really is the focus of the content... Throwing erotic events at the protagonist, and letting the reader/player make decisions on how the story evolves during each event... How will the protagonist react, will he cave in to his desires, will he run away, will he take things too far, will he be strong, will he be weak, will he win the fight, or will he carefully seduce those he loves the most? There is a lot going on, all depending on the character he interacts with... There are still some adventure type elements, not many, just a few in each chapter, but enough to give more depth to the story... This isn't a hugely deep story, but there is a enough to keep me interested...
This chapter took a while to get released, or at least to appear on this site... I will most likely wait a while before checking back with this VN/Game... Give it time to grow a little bit more, content wise... Perhaps after a few more chapters are released... Give it some time to expand before doing a review update again...