Got to love how people blame the dev for the tropes instead of the comic that inspired this.
Huge difference in quality between the first and the second part, dev is certainly getting more comfortable with ren'py.
Animations are LONG, especially on the first part, even though I wish the first one could be redone - the way her hands spasm and the lack of articulation on the shoulders makes it feel like a horror movie.
I would propose taking advantage of the comic's framing to make more impactful renders, instead of using wide angles everywhere.
In for the next chapters and to see what is in store for Nathan, since he wasn't part of the original comic