Personally I hate Elena. When you play in her favor she's a traitorous conniving cunt. Favor D and she's ok. But she's always completely self serving. I want to slap the shit out of her.
D's writing has gotten worse and worse. I know the writer comes here and reads this thread so I hope he reads what I'm saying here:
D right now is more like an adult with a developmental disorder of some kind. Seriously you wrote her into a state of mental retardation. She understands that guys jerk off but doesnt understand that massaging her dads penis is masturbating him? She doesn't understand ejaculation at 18? There is naivete and there is this..... I mean the masturbation scene with Elena I understand, some women actually can't bring themselves to do it, its a thing. But your confusing being innocent with being strait up retarded, and I'm sure retarded kids have a pretty good idea themselves so she's actually below that threshold.
Back when dad first grabbed a handful of boob, D accepted this and she seemed like she knew where this could lead and was ok with the direction. She seemed innocent, yet competent. But the writing has really gone downhill in her behavior since.
Did you miss the part where the daughter has been in an all-girls school for her entire life? (I can't recall if it was religious or not). Also did you miss the part where she was the late bloomer, and probably picked on her entire life?
Add in what appears to be a domineering/dominating mother and you have a very sheltered mentality. She's not stupid, she obviously got what was going on at the end, but she's been basically been the "side kick" her whole life and it shows.
I agree with you about Elena, she's not a real friend of the daughter, she's out to use her just like Elena lets guys use her. She has confused sex with intimacy. The daughter hasn't linked intimacy with sex, or rather she likes the emotional, supportinge, loving (non sexual for now) aspects of things.
I think the writing is a bit off-tilt mainly because characters do things to encourage a situation and then 'suddenly' realize "oh shit, this is wrong!" when they should have done that to begin with, but it is what it is. I suppose with the new character introduced at the end we'll get the typical whinging and morality second guessing once again. Probably some blackmail as well somewhere along the way. Although if the daughter starts to be written stupid, i.e. where she does sexual blackmail things to prevent "someone finding out" instead of confronting that stuff early, like so many brain-dead bimbo's in these games do, this game will be effectively over.