VN Ren'Py Completed Dating My Daughter [Ch. 1-4 v1.01] [MrDots Games]

[Adoringfan]

20 dates? They would have to change the name to Courting my Daughter. Poor daddy is going to die of blue balls soon because, every single female that has given the father any affection ultimately leads the player to a game over screen. Little girl needs to get her shit together, I am fairly confident after the vacation and meeting the couple and her idol + with Elana chomping at the bit to see her friend she will be getting down to some action sooner than 20 fucking dates.

I am losing respect for the MC, he is starting to look like the guy from 40 year old virgin.

Don't get me wrong I love the game, but I think that vacation should be a wake up call for both the dad and the daughter. So if it keeps with a snail pacing it will be a bit disappointing. Or hell keep it at a snails pace but please give the dad some release without getting a gameover screen. Send the daughter home for a week or two or something and let dad get some play with Georgina, Olivia or the barista chick. Daddy is gonna die otherwise

 

[Aitan_3]

I do keep seeing "it's early in the game" said, and I wonder just how big this game is planned to be. At 9 dates, multiple levels of corruption, etc, it seems like it's pacing pretty well to have sex with D in date 20 or so. That's a good bit of story to build still to get there. now you all may be considering a different number so I'm just using that as a base here...

but with let's say 20 dates until sex happens, at what point do the branching paths come into play? Before then? After? how much will they branch? -- from what you're saying I kind of think it'll just be different images triggered at certain points. I.e. maybe D sleeps naked vs in panties. Maybe sex with lights on vs Off. Things like that. -- or will these branches be full on different story paths?

if it's the second, and you all need an extra person involved in helping build the story out, hit me up. i'd be glad to assist

As for the scope of the game: we are currently thinking of dividing it in different volumes. I'd say that at the moment we are somewhere between 2/3 and 3/4 of the first volume.

As for the various paths: you might have to wait a little bit before seeing some serious branching in regards to daughter's corruption; however, there are other branches that do not deal specifically with that. Just think of day 6 (I think, I'm not sure) where you could decide whether to have dinner with georgina or have some fun with D and Elena at the hotel. How will those (quite different) storylines evolve?

As for the working proposal: the best thing you can do is sending a message to MrDots explaining what you ar goog at.

Cheers!

 

[Aitan_3]

20 dates? They would have to change the name to Courting my Daughter. Poor daddy is going to die of blue balls soon because, every single female that has given the father any affection ultimately leads the player to a game over screen. Little girl needs to get her shit together, I am fairly confident after the vacation and meeting the couple and her idol + with Elana chomping at the bit to see her friend she will be getting down to some action sooner than 20 fucking dates.

I am losing respect for the MC, he is starting to look like the guy from 40 year old virgin.

Don't get me wrong I love the game, but I think that vacation should be a wake up call for both the dad and the daughter. So if it keeps with a snail pacing it will be a bit disappointing. Or hell keep it at a snails pace but please give the dad some release without getting a gameover screen. Send the daughter home for a week or two or something and let dad get some play with Georgina, Olivia or the barista chick. Daddy is gonna die otherwise

I think you're gonna like next release.

 

[dbp5ca]

Hi, I'm one the game's scriptwriters - I conceived and wrote most of the massage scenes, the whole Cupid Night and the nudist beach scenario (plus some minor dialogues here and there); I wished to thank you (and everybody else on this board) for your kind words. Next update will feature a revised nipple licking scene (I didn't really like the whole "let's pretend I'm your son" idea), plus MANY other things. Time allowing, it will be the biggest update so far. I'm revealing these things here so you can be sure I'm part of the team. ^^ Keep supporting us and spreading the word!

Thanks for your contributions. I really liked the Cupid night as it introduced time pressure events and it felt very organic with the tension the daughter was feeling. I especially liked her comment to the MC about why didn't he put her bra on first. It was a nice bit of levity.
Agree that the whole nipple-licking seemed a bit out of place with the "pretending" so I'm interested in hot that will be revised.
I like Leopold's ruminations above about how this could be unfolding. Makes alot of sense and fits really nice with the overall tenor of the story.

 

[401Grem]

Can we get a thick bush option at least on one of the female characters?

 

[ltpika]

By the time we get to the point we bone the daughter he'll be sick of it and move on to another game. Which is a waste of potential, there's so many more possibilities outside of this slow bullshit.

 

[Imskel]

Can we get a thick bush option at least on one of the female characters?

yea that would be a nice option, have to admit that Elean and Jenny don't look like they are 18, with there size and the other small assets, and I think the only reason your daughter look 18 is that she have a large chest and butt, her size is kinda small to you also. don't get me wrong its not a bad thing. Just makes you wonder.

 

[Carmen Sandiego]

yea that would be a nice option, have to admit that Elean and Jenny don't look like they are 18, with there size and the other small assets, and I think the only reason your daughter look 18 is that she have a large chest and butt, her size is kinda small to you also. don't get me wrong its not a bad thing. Just makes you wonder.

I agree with this, completely. Elean and Jenny look like kids to me. Anytime they're in the story I try and skip through it as fast as possible because I don't really like seeing scenes involving them... Maybe if I was in to loli, but they're still supposedly 18 so... The daughter is fine with me but Elean and Jenny should have bodies like that daughter from the beach (I forget her name, clearly) with smaller breasts.

 

[Imskel]

I agree with this, completely. Elean and Jenny look like kids to me. Anytime they're in the story I try and skip through it as fast as possible because I don't really like seeing scenes involving them... Maybe if I was in to loli, but they're still supposedly 18 so... The daughter is fine with me but Elean and Jenny should have bodies like that daughter from the beach (I forget her name, clearly) with smaller breasts.

since I just ran though the game a 2nd time, that would be Olivia, and damn is she hot.

 

[seden]

+1 as to more develloped body for the others girls, ass + breasts..

Also, make one using corset and so, having both boobs + small middle section.

 

[Imskel]

oops looks like I started something with saying that Elean and Jenny had small loli type bodys, but if they are changed now that would mean alot of work and maybe setbacks in release dates.

 

[Imperator753]

I doubt they get changed.... Anyway, I just want D to grow some pubes and make them heart shaped when she lets F take her.

 

[Adoringfan]

I like the models the way they are. Elena looks perfectly match her personality as the mischievous little troublemaker girl, the barista girl is meek and more conservative in appearance, but she wishes to be more daring like Elena. I am sure her clothing will change the longer she stays around Elena's bad influence. Also dunno what adding 70s shag carpet would bring to the game tbh.

 

[Imskel]

I will agree with that, some pubes would be nice, even on the MC, got to say when they looked at the MC I felt not quite a dude without any hair on my balls.... lol

 

[Imskel]

I like the models the way they are. Elena looks perfectly match her personality as the mischievous little troublemaker girl, the barista girl is meek and more conservative in appearance, but she wishes to be more daring like Elena. I am sure her clothing will change the longer she stays around Elena's bad influence. Also dunno what adding 70s shag carpet would bring to the game tbh.

sure they look OK, but you kinda have to admit they are alot smaller then the rest of the people and I remember when I was 18 I was as big as my Mum, Uncle, normal people.

 

[Adoringfan]

I dunno whenever highschoolers would tour my campus we would all spend time laughing at how odd they looked with their large heads and tiny bodies. Maybe they were all liberal snowflakes and lacked toxic masculinity to help them look proportionate, who knows? If 5'4 is considered the average female height, (hispanic and latina girls are usually much shorter than this), Elena and Jenny aren't that far off the mark.

 

[Imskel]

true, granted my time at being 18 is like some 30+ years ago so I could be wrong

 

[jackkane]

I dunno whenever highschoolers would tour my campus we would all spend time laughing at how odd they looked with their large heads and tiny bodies. Maybe they were all liberal snowflakes and lacked toxic masculinity to help them look proportionate, who knows? If 5'4 is considered the average female height, (hispanic and latina girls are usually much shorter than this), Elena and Jenny aren't that far off the mark.

who's jenny?

 

[Henz]

The barista

 

[ikaruga]

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