The following review is based off my personal experience with playing this Game/Visual Novel... I try to be as brutally honest and detailed as I can, and these are my own opinions and thoughts, from one or more play throughs...
(12/09/2017 - Original Review - Chapter 01/02)
Although it's only 2 chapters long thus far, it's a really good visual novel so far... The story is deep and engaging, and the visuals are rock solid...
I played chapter one a month ago, and it was really good... With chapter two out, I still think the series is going strong... The visuals are really good, both the characters and the backdrops... The user interface is good as well, even though saving a game isn't as quick as with Ren'py, it's still pretty good... I did like the fact that even though the chapters are each separate entities, the second chapter took the choices from chapter one, which made the story flow well..
The script is excellent, barely any grammar or spelling flaws... And reading something without broken English has been a pleasant break from the VN's I've tried out lately... The story flows really well, and choices feel impactful without feeling punished by the author... The only character I've not liked thus far is the cop, as so far as he is very abrasive and gives off a corrupt cop vibe... Can't tell yet if he's evil or just a grumpy old man... The interaction with the bartender felt very romantic, even though the protagonist had underlying desires, having nothing to do with getting romantic, it still felt like a romantic bond was being formed (at least for the choices I made)... For me, treating a lady right, even when it comes to apologizing for mistakes is a corner stone of being a good guy... Thus far most of the characters the protagonist has interacted with are pretty cool... And the story plays out very nicely... Nothing too overly dramatic or over the top, just a guy trying to live his life, care for his daughter and figure out where he wants to go and who he wants to fall in love with for a happy life..
Romance inclined stories in an erotic genre of visual novels are always my preference, with deep stories, meaningful choices, great dialogue/monologue, and so on... Not just a bunch of sex scenes thrown at you one after another... And so far this one is fitting that bill nicely... I hope to see the story continue it's current trends and can't wait to see how things go from here... Keep up the great work...
(01/17/2018 - Review Update - Chapter 03)
I just finished playing Chapter 3 of this visual novel/game series, and although it felt a bit shorter then the last 2 chapters, it was still done very well... And I enjoyed it...
There is a new twist revealed in this chapter regarding the possible future of the dinner... Plus this chapter begins to delve a bit deeper into some of the protagonists relationships with various characters, depending on your choices... The only qualm I really had was how the cop begins to talk in front of the protagonists daughter and Kathy... I already had issue with the way he talks about women, but it only seems to get worse in this chapter... I really hope he does not become a major issue in the overall story...
Overall, I still love this VN/game series and can't wait for future updates...