Well honesty dude I don't have any argument for that . For you the place you shit & shower is same as someone's personal room. I hope that ain't true for you buddy. Eessshh.
And then all the people think they would make a better story than Daval, and end up writing this garbage.
In real life , I am myself a professional native lang writer ,earned about 18k dollars from my works(not a adult writer lol) and i can say that daval writing is nor bad not much good too..It just feels sometimes repetitive or sex without story but it is understandable. Much worse writer than daval exist..Except dirdog writings which is supposedly bad , daval is avg writer and sometimes good too(ID3-4,SN Alexa Liam Amanda first threesome ,MT3)..What he needs is just a nice plot which in future we may see..as current, we can't Title him as a bad writer. THERE r only 3 works..Not like 20,25 y3df works..and He is better in his genre much better than crazydad picking,himeros..
Sure, and that's simply what I say. Daval is not a magnificent piece of writing but it is good. Many times people forget that it is a sexual story. In other words, you don't have to have the writing level of the godfather, no. I'm just saying that Daval is well written and most people who complain about his writing can't even make a draft. But just what I'm going for. Daval is good at writing. He emphasized the word (Good) maybe not the best but he does it well. But people live thinking. (Hey friend, I would do a better job writing history than Daval) And his damn ideas are something like (He has meaningless sex here, then again but in a different place, then someone else joins in and guess what happens, he got more sex, and of course then a little Ntr, and also add more characters, and then cry that they are too many characters. And do you know how the story ends? It has more sex of course.)
