- Aug 22, 2016
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Now I understand why I wasn't getting any notification about this thread, this is a mess!
Don't get me wrong, I totally agree with the people who thinks Uncle Peter addition was unnecesary since it really adds nothing to this story that we didn't see before, I mean, Aunt Sarah was already corrupted by her nephew and now she's acting so dumb that it's hard to ignore, I still think the addition of Sarah's brother would have been better since the main focus of this story it's the evolution of David and Alice relationship from siblings to lovers, but complaining will not fix this story...
Unfortunately this is a VIP story, the one with the most money decides even if it's a dumb decision so we will have to deal with it until Daval himself decides to fix things, all I will say is that not making it a what if story was a "dick move" tho! the guy who paid for this "creepy old man" fetish could have commissioned it for his eyes only.
Don't get me wrong, I totally agree with the people who thinks Uncle Peter addition was unnecesary since it really adds nothing to this story that we didn't see before, I mean, Aunt Sarah was already corrupted by her nephew and now she's acting so dumb that it's hard to ignore, I still think the addition of Sarah's brother would have been better since the main focus of this story it's the evolution of David and Alice relationship from siblings to lovers, but complaining will not fix this story...
Unfortunately this is a VIP story, the one with the most money decides even if it's a dumb decision so we will have to deal with it until Daval himself decides to fix things, all I will say is that not making it a what if story was a "dick move" tho! the guy who paid for this "creepy old man" fetish could have commissioned it for his eyes only.