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8TB

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Alex is low in virility now—mostly through overwork, based on the story—but would a hot-blooded woman beauty like Lana have married, and stayed married to him for at least 18 years (based on Daniel's probable age), if he had always been a dud in bed? I can't see it myself. A woman as gorgeous as Lana could have anybody she liked and the fact she picked Alex to be with must mean he was something really special at some point. :) Alex must have been a real stud once upon a time for Lana to have wed and remained with him long-term.(y) Maybe with a little chemical help, rest and recreation he could win back both his mojo and Lana's interest. :unsure: Or not. :( Who knows? :confused: Only time will tell. :p A good story involves readers in what is happening, with the characters, which is why a good story matters even in porn comics.
If I recall, in chapter four, Lana states that Alex is the only man other than Daniel, with whom she has been. Lana, when first introduced, was presented as the dutiful housewife who was pretty content with married life. It was only after listening to her friends, and witnessing their sexual relations with Martha's nephew and his friend, that Lana became "curious" and started to reexamine her own sex life. And so Daniel enters. His character and methods were necessary to break Lana out of that mold, and engage the kind of sex that most of Daval's subscribers want to see. I don't think Alex was particularly "a stud." I think that in their heyday, Lana and Alex were two decent people who happened to be attracted to one another. Alex must've had a nice enough personality, and made a decent enough living; thus, making Alex a suitable husband. Lana, paradoxically, appears to be both aware of and oblivious to her own appearance. Lana, early on, tended to cover up, and in Chapter 11, she mentions feigning her inability to swim because she didn't like the leers of strange men; however, she gets jealous over characters like Martha and Sofia, who don't even remotely compare to her. I suppose that's part of Lana's appeal, i.e. she's too meek and modest to know how insanely attractive she is.

I agree with you that a good story matters; it can't be helped however how we each see and debate over that which we define as a "good story."
 

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??? i think my standard just has raised because instead of just looking at a stunning rendered woman and getting a hard on, ive seen a handful of comics, 3d visual novels and games that have a decent story line to be invested in and form a much deeper connection than "uhguguh big tits and ass, fuck yeah"
I would agree with this.

this comic has 10 chapters so far and started off strong with introducing multiple friends from lana and daniels side, a decent corruption path, but everything around those two got scraped, and currently as i said, each chapter lana and daniel are just location fucking with the same dialogue.
Then you haven't read the comic, much. Don't get me wrong, the dialogue leaves a lot to be desired, but if your only conclusion from reading these 11 chapters is "it's the same story, but different location" then aren't you guilty of the very thing you lamented in that you've only been paying attention to the "uhguguh big tits and ass..."?

It always astonishes me how, instead of asking for quality and growth, people such as yourself keep defending it and become offended when the superficiality is being called out.
I don't think it's so much people getting offended as much as it is demanding that the critics spell out that which can be done better. And in my experience, what they want "improved," has nothing to do with either its story or its tone. They just want something "different."

Maybe you should explore more facets of the 3D porn world so you might understand what this comic lacks.
That's a bit presumptuous. Even if you have "more experience" in other facets of 3D porn, whatever that's supposed to mean, it doesn't make you more qualified to render an opinion than ID fan. We're all, at the end of the day, sharing our opinions, here.

And let's be real here. The guy has released about 10 pages over the past months. Not really a time investment if you ask me.
Again, presumptuous. I have no idea what Daval does with his time, and I going to assume that you don't either. I don't buy his reasons for delays most of the time, but the only issue I believe matters is his setting goals that he often doesn't keep.
 
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??? i think my standard just has raised because instead of just looking at a stunning rendered woman and getting a hard on, ive seen a handful of comics, 3d visual novels and games that have a decent story line to be invested in and form a much deeper connection than "uhguguh big tits and ass, fuck yeah"

this comic has 10 chapters so far and started off strong with introducing multiple friends from lana and daniels side, a decent corruption path, but everything around those two got scraped, and currently as i said, each chapter lana and daniel are just location fucking with the same dialogue.

It always astonishes me how, instead of asking for quality and growth, people such as yourself keep defending it and become offended when the superficiality is being called out. Maybe you should explore more facets of the 3D porn world so you might understand what this comic lacks.
And let's be real here. The guy has released about 10 pages over the past months. Not really a time investment if you ask me.
Do me favour name 5 stories better than ID with good graphics? As I'm not widen my horizon as you are in comics.
 

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We're going to 8 may and no id text, nandof had posted 40 pages for my mom is my pornstar. I'm not a subscriber of any of them, but i see that there are a real problem with daval and his delays, i Hope he has not the crisis of many artists who suddenly stop their work. Excuse my english
 

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You are way too serious. Started as a joke but some people are just on the prod. Hell maybe you've just been burned too many times. either way, enjoy and have a cold one, what ever that means to you
Wrong because it started as a joke by me when I said "those" lol and you replied scared af with the shhhh , your are the one being too serious , burned? nah you are delusional, enjoy "those" comics I guess and dont get burn :HideThePain: .
 

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Do me favour name 5 stories better than ID with good graphics? As I'm not widen my horizon as you are in comics.
Personally recently at least from chapter 8 i didnt watch ID..its not attraction to me anymore... ID nothing interesting offers to me tbt except maybe various position of sex of lana and daniel..MT is only work of daval that i interested in bc of its story.
 

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Personally recently at least from chapter 8 i didnt watch ID..its not attraction to me anymore... ID nothing interesting offers to me tbt except maybe various position of sex of lana and daniel..MT is only work of daval that i interested in bc of its story.
I see that you like whores every one fuck,only the train didn't go over them, i see that id is more realistic but daval has introduced Sofia. In any incest affair the secret must be between them, i mean consenting adult.
 
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I wished for more one on one between Alexa and Liam before she becomes the side character who sleeps with other characters for the development of the plot. But since daval is a bonehead it’s pointless to hope and argue under posts in twitter.
No argument here. Just making a statement is all:)
 
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