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And that's why I believe Daval stories should be shorter, 5 issues max! this one was just at issue 3 when they decided to add the uncle instead of using the already introduced characters like Alice, Aaron or Sarah's husband to spice things up.
I remember reading once that Daval regretted having Amanda and Liam fuck so early, he made the same mistake here, he rushed the whole David/Sarah relationship and they were already fucking without hesitations at issue 2 so of course every new scene would be the same over and over again, but the comic had a huge potential because it had Alice, Aaron, Sarah's husband and they mentioned their mom and grandpa in the first issue, pretty sure Daval plan was to introduce the mom and grandpa later. what some people don't understand is that one of the main reasons of the complaints isn't really the NTR, it's the fact that Peter appeared out of nowhere and now Sarah acts out of character.
Now about ID, I think it was his best comic, it started really strong, Daniel and Lana were going slow... unfortunately every new scene after the first fuck (issue 3 I think) was mostly the same, fortunately Lana is slowly accepting Daniel and that's the development ID needs, a romantic one, but once it happens I think the best decision would be end the comic.
I remember reading once that Daval regretted having Amanda and Liam fuck so early, he made the same mistake here, he rushed the whole David/Sarah relationship and they were already fucking without hesitations at issue 2 so of course every new scene would be the same over and over again, but the comic had a huge potential because it had Alice, Aaron, Sarah's husband and they mentioned their mom and grandpa in the first issue, pretty sure Daval plan was to introduce the mom and grandpa later. what some people don't understand is that one of the main reasons of the complaints isn't really the NTR, it's the fact that Peter appeared out of nowhere and now Sarah acts out of character.
Now about ID, I think it was his best comic, it started really strong, Daniel and Lana were going slow... unfortunately every new scene after the first fuck (issue 3 I think) was mostly the same, fortunately Lana is slowly accepting Daniel and that's the development ID needs, a romantic one, but once it happens I think the best decision would be end the comic.