This isn't real 8muses .It's the one started by another administrator by same domain.It looks like real as it's in same domain so has same archive working too but it's not same and trustable too for now.
But, the operation is a lie, Pedro shouldn't leave yet, Sarah won't be able to live without him. even if he perverts alicia.
I have already suggested a screenwriter on the forum and on X (ex-Tweeter) for at least a year.
Why? It is well written in Spanish, except for putting a comma or accent in some letter, but what it means is perfectly understood
He IS gonna to f... Lana, Sara, Peter, also the reader
I mean about the story, Daval writes it day by day and in a hurry it occurred to him to include Aron in the story that same day and because of ideas like this the congruence of the story is greatly lost David should be the first to approach Alice but I think Daval hates David's character, first the old man takes Sarah away from him and now Aron is the one who is getting closer to Alice.
cause looks like he is the one getting cucked/ntr'd now .... since Peter stole Sarah away from him and now it looks like Aaron gonna steal Alice away from him too The only way this ends without bloodshed is an all out Orgy Finale for the final chapter. 
Just because the writing can be read, doesn't make it GOOD writing. He needs a writer because hes writing these stories like a chicken with its head cut off, willy nilly, spur of the moment crap. Dude probably doesnt know what hes going to do for the next pages, let alone the next chapter, until hes actually rendering it.
