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Davalfake

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Despite the huge differences between both contents, ID9's cliffhanger reminded me quite a bit of the cliffhanger made by OrbOrigin at the end of Part 11 of his great A Mother's Love.

After that AML's cliffhanger, everyone was outraged and angry that Nicole could have slept with her husband John, thus betraying the MC, since it was the most logical outcome in the face of such a cliffhanger. However, the dev kept that suspense going throughout Part 12 and only resolved the doubts about it in Part 13, denying that anything had happened between her and her husband, to the great relief of the MC and the players and fans of the game. Despite all the criticism, Orb stuck to his guns and followed his script from the beginning (some players remembered that a long time ago, when faced with a similar doubt in the past, he said that Nicole was only for the MC and he was true to his word).

In my opinion, Daval3D has tried to do something similar to that AML cliffhanger with the ending of ID9, encouraging the suspicion that ID would apparently follow a similar path to his SN (threesomes and orgies) and then finally keep Lana and his son exclusively for each other, but faced with complaints from his fans (who are still upset by the appearance of that older guy in his MT), he has not only given in to the pressure but has "apparently" revealed the content of the next Part (I say "apparently" because it may be an attempt to dodge the issue while hiding his real script, although he has been too descriptive for me to believe he is lying about it).

Personally, I think there are three possibilities for Daniel and Lana to get out of this without being discovered and without Sofia enjoying Daniel's cock...
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I really liked the second option, I think it's the most acceptable, but I highly doubt that Daval is thinking that hehe
 
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When you are absolutely unlucky. The first sexual experience with another person and you are immediately caught in the act.
Maybe Daval, and I'm guessing, perhaps might have the impression that since the fan base will never "forgive" him for Uncle Peter, he might as well go for broke--even if it's rather nonsensical and makes the narrative convoluted.
 

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I've been thinking about what could be a possible plot line for Immoral Desires 11 (or 12, depending.) I'm convinced that when Daval states it's "going to be interesting" there's a good chance that he's referring to the inclusion of Daniel's cousin and Lana's niece, Sharon. Now I am still of the opinion that the sexual interactions should remain between Lana and Daniel. But as I've stated before, I think eventually he'll be done with their exclusivity once he's done milking the mother-son incest angle. We know from the beginning of Chapter 9 that Sharon is headed over to their house, which will presumably happen after the Martha's House Arc concludes, the expectation of which Daval has stated to be the end of Chapter 10. Will Daval once again risk angering the fan base by including an outside party, even if they're related? I mean, Peter from MT is Sarah's uncle, and that did not quell the online rage one bit. Will Sharon be just another Sofia--i.e. one who's suspicious of Lana and Daniel's odd behavior? Can Daval include Sharon, while keeping the focus on Lana and Daniel, and not turn it into a harem or ramp up NTR elements as he has done with his other two works? I think I've figured out a way:

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I figure this way, it's a way to have Sharon get involved but not break the dynamic between Daniel and Lana, because they're still the primary focus. I'd like to know what you guys think if you're not daunted by its length.
 

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I've been thinking about what could be a possible plot line for Immoral Desires 11 (or 12, depending.) I'm convinced that when Daval states it's "going to be interesting" there's a good chance that he's referring to the inclusion of Daniel's cousin and Lana's niece, Sharon. Now I am still of the opinion that the sexual interactions should remain between Lana and Daniel. But as I've stated before, I think eventually he'll be done with their exclusivity once he's done milking the mother-son incest angle. We know from the beginning of Chapter 9 that Sharon is headed over to their house, which will presumably happen after the Martha's House Arc concludes, the expectation of which Daval has stated to be the end of Chapter 10. Will Daval once again risk angering the fan base by including an outside party, even if they're related? I mean, Peter from MT is Sarah's uncle, and that did not quell the online rage one bit. Will Sharon be just another Sofia--i.e. one who's suspicious of Lana and Daniel's odd behavior? Can Daval include Sharon, while keeping the focus on Lana and Daniel, and not turn it into a harem or ramp up NTR elements as he has done with his other two works? I think I've figured out a way:

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I figure this way, it's a way to have Sharon get involved but not break the dynamic between Daniel and Lana, because they're still the primary focus. I'd like to know what you guys think if you're not daunted by its length.
That’s really good and you do make good points and great chapter
 

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I've been thinking about what could be a possible plot line for Immoral Desires 11 (or 12, depending.) I'm convinced that when Daval states it's "going to be interesting" there's a good chance that he's referring to the inclusion of Daniel's cousin and Lana's niece, Sharon. Now I am still of the opinion that the sexual interactions should remain between Lana and Daniel. But as I've stated before, I think eventually he'll be done with their exclusivity once he's done milking the mother-son incest angle. We know from the beginning of Chapter 9 that Sharon is headed over to their house, which will presumably happen after the Martha's House Arc concludes, the expectation of which Daval has stated to be the end of Chapter 10. Will Daval once again risk angering the fan base by including an outside party, even if they're related? I mean, Peter from MT is Sarah's uncle, and that did not quell the online rage one bit. Will Sharon be just another Sofia--i.e. one who's suspicious of Lana and Daniel's odd behavior? Can Daval include Sharon, while keeping the focus on Lana and Daniel, and not turn it into a harem or ramp up NTR elements as he has done with his other two works? I think I've figured out a way:

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I figure this way, it's a way to have Sharon get involved but not break the dynamic between Daniel and Lana, because they're still the primary focus. I'd like to know what you guys think if you're not daunted by its length.
Man, u write better than Daval, he should hire u as script writer or story consultant!

Your version of coming events is hot af, without straying from the story arc and comics dynamics. Bravo!
 

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That’s really good and you do make good points and great chapter
Man, u write better than Daval, he should hire u as script writer or story consultant!

Your version of coming events is hot af, without straying from the story arc and comics dynamics. Bravo!
Thanks for the response guys, as well as to all of you who pinned a like to the post. I wish I could write for my favorite 3D artists. I've even offered my services to a few of them for free, even if it just meant correcting the grammar here; or providing a different voice, there. But alas, they weren't interested.

As far as the response to my fanfic, for lack of a better of a term (I'm promise that it's just one paragraph):

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Again, thanks for the response guys.
 
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Thanks for the response guys, as well as to all of you who pinned a like to the post. I wish I could write for my favorite 3D artists. I've even offered my services to a few of them for free, even if it just meant correcting the grammar here; or providing a different voice, there. But alas, they weren't interested.

As far as the response to my fanfic, for lack of a better of a term (I'm promise that it's just one paragraph):

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This is very good brother. I think that now we simply have to trust that Daval takes things carefully and does not rush into anything, as with the supposed ''UNIQUE EVENT''. Any option is good as long as it is not an SN 2.0
 
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Thanks for the response guys, as well as to all of you who pinned a like to the post. I wish I could write for my favorite 3D artists. I've even offered my services to a few of them for free, even if it just meant correcting the grammar here; or providing a different voice, there. But alas, they weren't interested.

As far as the response to my fanfic, for lack of a better of a term (I'm promise that it's just one paragraph):

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Again, thanks for the response guys.
If you don't mind answering. You would have an idea of how to get Uncle Peter out of the equation forever, naturally. I feel that Daval is very involved with Together, when it is relatively simple.
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