Donnie Brasco
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I'm pretty sure this guy is gay. There is simply no other explanation.
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I'm pretty sure this guy is gay. There is simply no other explanation.
Trile3
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He is just drunkard,he is drinking from morning to evening since they came to Martha house. That amount of alcohol isnt good for libido.
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Daniboy85
is allways the King here
is allways the King here
Pascal68
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I hope Silvia will discover Sarah and David.
She could join them in their sex games.
She could join them in their sex games.
Donnie Brasco
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When you are absolutely unlucky. The first sexual experience with another person and you are immediately caught in the act.
8TB
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Maybe Daval, and I'm guessing, perhaps might have the impression that since the fan base will never "forgive" him for Uncle Peter, he might as well go for broke--even if it's rather nonsensical and makes the narrative convoluted.
This scene is so ridiculous. Seeing Alice getting raped by an obese woman is not exciting.
Please Uncle Peter and Aaron come back as soon as you can
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uncle piter and aron are the forgotten ones XD
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I've been thinking about what could be a possible plot line for Immoral Desires 11 (or 12, depending.) I'm convinced that when Daval states it's "going to be interesting" there's a good chance that he's referring to the inclusion of Daniel's cousin and Lana's niece, Sharon. Now I am still of the opinion that the sexual interactions should remain between Lana and Daniel. But as I've stated before, I think eventually he'll be done with their exclusivity once he's done milking the mother-son incest angle. We know from the beginning of Chapter 9 that Sharon is headed over to their house, which will presumably happen after the Martha's House Arc concludes, the expectation of which Daval has stated to be the end of Chapter 10. Will Daval once again risk angering the fan base by including an outside party, even if they're related? I mean, Peter from MT is Sarah's uncle, and that did not quell the online rage one bit. Will Sharon be just another Sofia--i.e. one who's suspicious of Lana and Daniel's odd behavior? Can Daval include Sharon, while keeping the focus on Lana and Daniel, and not turn it into a harem or ramp up NTR elements as he has done with his other two works? I think I've figured out a way:
I figure this way, it's a way to have Sharon get involved but not break the dynamic between Daniel and Lana, because they're still the primary focus. I'd like to know what you guys think if you're not daunted by its length.
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I figure this way, it's a way to have Sharon get involved but not break the dynamic between Daniel and Lana, because they're still the primary focus. I'd like to know what you guys think if you're not daunted by its length.
That’s really good and you do make good points and great chapter
Jorjor69
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Man, u write better than Daval, he should hire u as script writer or story consultant!
Your version of coming events is hot af, without straying from the story arc and comics dynamics. Bravo!
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Thanks for the response guys, as well as to all of you who pinned a like to the post. I wish I could write for my favorite 3D artists. I've even offered my services to a few of them for free, even if it just meant correcting the grammar here; or providing a different voice, there. But alas, they weren't interested.
As far as the response to my fanfic, for lack of a better of a term (I'm promise that it's just one paragraph):
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Again, thanks for the response guys.
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SoldierBoyRED
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This is very good brother. I think that now we simply have to trust that Daval takes things carefully and does not rush into anything, as with the supposed ''UNIQUE EVENT''. Any option is good as long as it is not an SN 2.0
SoldierBoyRED
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If you don't mind answering. You would have an idea of how to get Uncle Peter out of the equation forever, naturally. I feel that Daval is very involved with Together, when it is relatively simple.
Donnie Brasco
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Since there are no bubbles, I conclude that said by David and Sarah, said out loud. What are the reasons for the discretion so far?
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Thanks. I've recently skimmed the images of some of the recent chapters of SN and had no idea that Alexa was actually taping Liam and Amanda having sex, and selling those tapes for money. Not to mention, Alexa dry humps to completion whatshisname topless? I'm so glad I never invested myself in that series. And I agree: AVOID AN SN 2.0 at all costs.
Madness is such a mess, I hardly know where to start. I have mixed feelings because I think if the fan base were willing to embrace Uncle Peter, then it will allow Daval to cater to multiple fan bases without conceiving something worse *cough* Silvia *cough*. At least with Peter, it's the devil you know as opposed to the devil you don't. But if I were to try and "rectify" Madness, if you could call it that, I would:
1. Have Sarah hire Silvia as a private nurse for Peter. (My inclination is to get rid of Silvia entirely, but she's here, so might as well embrace it for now.)
2. Have Peter manipulate Aaron and exploit his feelings of resentment after having watched his mother have sex with David. That is, to push him toward having sex with Alice.
3. Aaron forces himself on Alice, after Peter tells him what he saw at the cafe (Alice running out of the bathroom with Silvia immediately following,) much in the same way that Peter forced himself on Sarah. Peter watches with pride.
4. Sarah and David continue to have sex both in and out of the house.
5. Aaron and Alice are distant with Sarah and David; Aaron is plotting revenge while Alice feels too guilty to look her brother in the eye. Peter coaches Aaron on how to train Alice to completely submit to him, i.e. make advances when she least suspects it (the bathroom, her workplace, the bedroom, when no one's looking, etc.) Aaron wants to take away everything from David, including his mom, and Peter's impressed.
6. Silvia washes Peter in the bathroom very much in the same way that Sarah did in Chapter 4. Peter thinks to himself how his manipulating Aaron can workout in his favor, i.e. using it as a way to have sex with Sarah again, while also trying his hand at Alice. Peter gets hard and Silvia notices. But this time, it's Silvia who takes the initiative since she works as a nurse who emphasizes "the emotional" aspect of nurse care. They have an incredibly long sex scene, but it proves too much for Peter's heart to handle and he dies from cardiac arrest.
7. Sarah disassociates herself with Silvia because even though she doesn't know for sure, she's suspicious that Silvia had something to do with her uncle's death. But it's already too late, Peter's work has been completed. He lives on through Aaron now.
8. David and Sarah are having sex when they hear faint gasps. They believe they're the only ones up at that time of night, so naturally it rouses their curiosity. They've surmised that the sounds are coming from Alice's room. They walk in on Aaron fucking Alice. Alice feels shame, but Aaron continues despite his tryst with Alice being exposed. Sarah prompts her son to stop seeing how uncomfortable it's making Alice, and Aaron tells his mother to "SHUT UP!" Aaron states that he saw her and David and having sex, and that she and David will stand there and watch as he finishes up with Alice, less they want his father to find out everything. [To be continued.]