Rather uncanny, but this is result of stringing 3 generations together.
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Sex scenes are pretty "cursed" 
but well it's something. If they had a proper nsfw generator, so you can do explicit prompts, would be much better result. Civitai and Klingai should join forces.
One of the handjob scenes is somewhat "there", other ones are funny.
Missionary scene could be dope, but there' some fuckery.
A decent bj scene.
but well it's something. If they had a proper nsfw generator, so you can do explicit prompts, would be much better result. Civitai and Klingai should join forces. One of the handjob scenes is somewhat "there", other ones are funny.
Missionary scene could be dope, but there' some fuckery.
A decent bj scene.
some generations are getting better. maybe it's learning.
various generations. some cursed, some decent.
Exactly! The draw to this is primarily reliant on the fact that she's his mother. What mother would state, "I wan't to be [my son's] sex pet too!" in any believable way? Not even the dialogue in pornography is this indiscreet. Some have complained about the story degrading with each passing chapter, but if you ask me, it's the dialogue hands down. Seriously, if anyone maintains contact with Daval, please act as a liaison on my behalf. I'll do the work for free; I'll work overtime; I'll do everything short of taking time off my day job. It doesn't even have to be with me, suggest him partnering with Tal3sofDebauchery or LoseKorntrol to help improve the dialogue.
It makes me wonder if he had originally included Sofia in the original draft, but had to overhaul the entire thing after the backlash. It would explain the subpar dialogue and the increasingly delayed deadlines.
Tal3s has amazing dialogue, that guy knows how to write his shit fr. About the Sofia i‘d bet my ass that her joining in was definitely the original plan, especially after she blows him and Lana doesn’t even know about it so it doesn’t serve the whole “jealousy” arc. But i don’t think Daval changing it is the cause of delay. He doesn’t think ahead with the story, just goes with the flow and picks up from the last chapter. He rather got little lazy during holidays which is understandable.
Also i agree that his scenes rely too much on her being the mother. We are already in the 10th chapter, everybody knows their bound, you don’t need to have Lana call Daniel “Son” every single sex scene and vice versa. It wears down. He should focus more on sex talk and their chemistry, but i can’t imagine what that be like with his delivery. “YES DANIEL POUND THIS MILF PUSSY, IM SO WET FOR YOUR STIFF DICK”
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diverse generazioni. Alcune maledette, altre buone.
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Oh my God !!!!
diverse generazioni. Alcune maledette, altre buone.
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Oh my God !!!!