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Travaruz

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That's what I'm saying, if Sofia already know the secret, why bother with the glasses excuse? I feel Daval regrets the whole event and will try to go back to the previous state, with Sofia thinking that she dreamed about Daniel and Lana having sex, in that case the glasses excuse makes more sense for Sofia, would make a lot more sense for Alex, Martha or someone else.
Same reason why he made Lana forget it all due to alcohol, he wants to stretch it all over the month’s subscription as much as possible and only deliver it when there’s no where else to run with story
 

sstrangemd

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But, as I said, there is no need to touch Daniel and Lana's story, which can give them momentary closure; i.e., maybe a chapter or two. It does work. Then, if it continues to work, another character can be used
This is the exact problem I have with Daval as a creator; dragging shit out instead of just ending stuff and moving on. Imo giving these random characters screen time in a story that's pretty much been completely explored is the problem. People rightfully complain about him missing deadlines, SN being boring and dragged out, ID being same-y, etc. This will only exacerbate the issue. SN was about Amanda and Liam, then when that got boring that one-off lady whose name I forget hung out for a chapter, then Alexa showed up, then when that got boring Alexa became the main character, Emma started showing up more and then when that got boring the dad came in. It's the same thing over and over again. To me that seems like he's scraping the bottom of the barrel, and comes off more as desperate rather than creative.
 

Dustellar

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I insist that, since this comic is called "Immoral Desired" it should include more than one couple, Daval will never make Daniel fuck Sofia or Martha because he preferred to push the whole romantic angle and that's fine too (I still think that harem and romance can coexist) but Sofia, Martha and Rosa are being wasted, Martha relationship with her nephew is was started the corruption of Lana, I think now it should be the other way around and all her friends should be corrupted by Lana actions with Daniel... we could have a mini-story of Sofia fucking her dad, Martha fucking her son, Rosa fucking a brother, something! because even if Daniel and Lana are amazing as couple, how long can it last without turning boring? we got 11 issues of just Daniel and Lana, will Daval reconsider it later and make Daniel at least fuck his cousin, aunt, grandma?
 

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I insist that, since this comic is called "Immoral Desired" it should include more than one couple, Daval will never make Daniel fuck Sofia or Martha because he preferred to push the whole romantic angle and that's fine too (I still think that harem and romance can coexist) but Sofia, Martha and Rosa are being wasted, Martha relationship with her nephew is was started the corruption of Lana, I think now it should be the other way around and all her friends should be corrupted by Lana actions with Daniel... we could have a mini-story of Sofia fucking her dad, Martha fucking her son, Rosa fucking a brother, something! because even if Daniel and Lana are amazing as couple, how long can it last without turning boring? we got 11 issues of just Daniel and Lana, will Daval reconsider it later and make Daniel at least fuck his cousin, aunt, grandma?
:PogChamp:You are finally opening your eyes that's surprising...
 
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Dustellar

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Nah, just asking if Lana saw her glasses, without them Sofia will probably not see Daniel, I really think their plan now will be trying to convince Sofia that she was so drunk that she imagined/dreamed the whole affair, Daval realized that many did not like the twist so he will try to backtrack, put the whole "Sofia knows the secret" on hold to reuse it later in a future issue with them (Martha, Sofia, maybe even Rosa), meanwhile the focus will be on them returning home (probably in this same issue) and probably the role of Sharon in this story.
 

notmoji

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Isn't anybody here subbed to daval3d? how come the first pages of ID 10 never came in HD quality? every single version i download, the first pages are flawed.
 
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