- Oct 13, 2024
- 15
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Of course, here's the text with the spelling corrections:
"In other words, leaving their arguments aside, it seems to me that Daval is saturating the ID comic with too much sex. That makes the comic a bit boring. He should give it a better plot that makes each next issue highly anticipated. For example, he should have Lana seek out Daniel to satisfy her after a few days and have a crazy night of sex at his house, either in his room or in the kitchen. But until that happens, Daval should include other people who have sex, but as secondary characters, leaving Daniel and Lana as the main characters. For example, he should include another character the same age as Daniel, like Martha's son, whom he can use to satisfy Sofia, who can't with Daniel, and then have Martha gradually discover them and also try to have sex with him, for which he first talks to Lana to ask for advice, and Lana gets nervous but gives him advice and they manage to have sex. In the meantime, let Lana take a break from all the sex by sending her on a short trip with her husband. When they get home, Lana can visit Daniel at night and have sex. Meanwhile, in the other house, Sofía has fun with Martha's son, while Martha slowly discovers them. I'd also like to see characters like Rosa and the cousins included, but more in the future. What do you think?
"In other words, leaving their arguments aside, it seems to me that Daval is saturating the ID comic with too much sex. That makes the comic a bit boring. He should give it a better plot that makes each next issue highly anticipated. For example, he should have Lana seek out Daniel to satisfy her after a few days and have a crazy night of sex at his house, either in his room or in the kitchen. But until that happens, Daval should include other people who have sex, but as secondary characters, leaving Daniel and Lana as the main characters. For example, he should include another character the same age as Daniel, like Martha's son, whom he can use to satisfy Sofia, who can't with Daniel, and then have Martha gradually discover them and also try to have sex with him, for which he first talks to Lana to ask for advice, and Lana gets nervous but gives him advice and they manage to have sex. In the meantime, let Lana take a break from all the sex by sending her on a short trip with her husband. When they get home, Lana can visit Daniel at night and have sex. Meanwhile, in the other house, Sofía has fun with Martha's son, while Martha slowly discovers them. I'd also like to see characters like Rosa and the cousins included, but more in the future. What do you think?