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rifrulz

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The entire chapter of Immoral Desire 5 ended in public bathroom. which is very underwhelming .....i was hoping there will be at least 2 or 3 location for sex to takes place.....that would definitely spice the story . For example....what daval could have done is...he could have broken the sex scenes in segment for example ....only do missionary scenes with danial and Lana in public toilet.... and then rosa intervened.... and then lets say do doggy scenes with Lana only in another location then another third character comes in to break the scene.... and so one and so forth.......this creates more opportunity for danial to trick lana into having sex .... and as a viewer we enjoy watching lana slowly loses are morality.......this will no doubt spice up the story even more .........SEXUAL TENSION is the key factor in ID ... i hope daval takes that into account and creates more sexual tension in ID story moving forward....but its just my opinion.....comment below what's your thought
 
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The entire chapter of Immoral Desire 5 ended in public bathroom. which is very underwhelming .....i was hoping there will be at least 2 or 3 location for sex to takes place.....that would definitely spice the story . For example....what daval could have done is...he could have broken the sex scenes in segment for example ....only do missionary scenes with danial and Lana in public toilet.... and then rosa intervened.... and then lets say do doggy scenes with Lana only in another location then another third character comes in to break the scene.... and so one and so forth.......this creates more opportunity for danial to trick lana into having sex .... and as a viewer we enjoy watching lana slowly loses are morality.......this will no doubt spice up the story even more .........SEXUAL TENSION is the key factor in ID ... i hope daval takes that into account and creates more sexual tension in ID story moving forward....but its just my opinion.....comment below what's your thought
I understand what you mean, but always interrupting the scene, without having a final ejaculation, makes the scene less erotic than expected. He would have to find a way to separate each scene and each ejaculation into different locations. With this Rose who cockblock him every time... no thank you :ROFLMAO: Which would have made the chapter twice as long. In my opinion it is not something feasible in public or rather with just one chapter. It should divide the chapter into multiple chapters.
Perhaps is something Deval could do, when he writes a chapter dedicated to the beach. Something like, sex in the changing booth, sex behind rocks, sex in the water and so on. But it should make the MC ejaculate every time. Stopping it at every sex scene and how to have blue balls :eek::ROFLMAO:
 
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rifrulz

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I understand what you mean, but always interrupting the scene, without having a final ejaculation, makes the scene less erotic than expected. He would have to find a way to separate each scene and each ejaculation into different locations. With this Rose who cockblock him every time... no thank you :ROFLMAO: Which would have made the chapter twice as long. In my opinion it is not something feasible in public or rather with just one chapter. It should divide the chapter into multiple chapters.
Perhaps is something Deval could do, when he writes a chapter dedicated to the beach. Something like, sex in the changing booth, sex behind rocks, sex in the water and so on. But it should make the MC ejaculate every time. Stopping it at every sex scene and how to have blue balls :eek::ROFLMAO:
Bro i got your point..........each has his own taste, kinks and fetsihes......it was my personal opinion...... i felt at least Daval should break ID chapters sex sessions in 2 segments.... so we can see more interaction of sexual tension between Lana and Danial... rather than 1 specific location.... i feel the key to any good porn comics.....is the sexual tension....if its not there ...there is no fun...anyway cheers...hope the next chapter will be better.
 
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Bro i got your point..........each has his own taste, kinks and fetsihes......it was my personal opinion...... i felt at least Daval should break ID chapters sex sessions in 2 segments.... so we can see more interaction of sexual tension between Lana and Danial... rather than 1 specific location.... i feel the key to any good porn comics.....is the sexual tension....if its not there ...there is no fun...anyway cheers...hope the next chapter will be better.
I understood it now, if i think about it, if the story would have been between house-market or market with the presence of Rosa behind the door, there would have been more tension, I like it the way it is too, great chapter for me, but for the tension of being discovered you are right, Together, before ruin was used to give this tension if i understood you well, that is why was so great....
 

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I understood it now, if i think about it, if the story would have been between house-market or market with the presence of Rosa behind the door, there would have been more tension, I like it the way it is too, great chapter for me, but for the tension of being discovered you are right, Together, before ruin was used to give this tension if i understood you well, that is why was so great....
In the case of Together i agree with you on this part........although i would be very honest....personally i love NTR.....no matter who likes it or not his choice.....but i felt the story got ruined.... the sexual tension is gone....i agree.
 
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The entire chapter of Immoral Desire 5 ended in public bathroom. which is very underwhelming .....i was hoping there will be at least 2 or 3 location for sex to takes place.....that would definitely spice the story . For example....what daval could have done is...he could have broken the sex scenes in segment for example ....only do missionary scenes with danial and Lana in public toilet.... and then rosa intervened.... and then lets say do doggy scenes with Lana only in another location then another third character comes in to break the scene.... and so one and so forth.......this creates more opportunity for danial to trick lana into having sex .... and as a viewer we enjoy watching lana slowly loses are morality.......this will no doubt spice up the story even more .........SEXUAL TENSION is the key factor in ID ... i hope daval takes that into account and creates more sexual tension in ID story moving forward....but its just my opinion.....comment below what's your thought
What I expected was for it to happen, just like on the cover she was looking at him in bed...
 

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Gonna have to step in again, and say try and get the thread back on track. Both sides aren't going to agree on it, and it's at the point that it's just going around in circles. I don't want to get the mods to prune the thread, but it's getting to the point it will need to.
 

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Bro can u post 30-45 pages of together 3 it's past 3 weeks since the release
Gonna have to wait a few more days so Daval won't say anything about it, but it's 3 weeks+ for the Madness Together pages, since he initially asked me to wait 2 months. Hope you bois understand.



More like straight up degenerate pedo stuff, like the bullshit in Who you Fuckin' Podcast. Basically, he doesn't even shy away from specifically mentioning the idiots fucking the fat, disproportionate whores in heat are really underage kids (!!), or third graders, to be exact.:eek::FacePalm: Who da fuck gets off on that ??:poop: Have to say I didn't expect this from him, and I'm growing more and more concerned for the Madness Together porn comic after the all the NTR and pedo bullshit he released so far. At least here, in SN and ID, the women actually look hot AF, but in the NTR commissions, their proportions are ridiculous and they look stupid even to fans of curvy women and fat asses like myself.
 

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It seems that Daval is not doing very well this beginning of the month, deleting posts in the thread and many nervous about the early leaks, nice.
 
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I have some questions for you.
1.) How come you know he is banned whereas million times you have told you're not a subscriber, some source of your share images with you. So if you're not a subscriber how do you know he is banned..!??
2.) Whenever you share any update or images you claim them to original . Yet again I state this you're not a subscriber, some source of your shares them as you have told a million times. So my question is how come you have so much confidence in this source of yours that whatever he/she shares with you is 100 % guarantee an original.
Cause when we talk about original the only logical explanation would be the raw renders/ images which come out from davals pc can only deemed original. Rest all the ones that daval share through his subscriber and fanbox are just copies.
So are trying to say that you are daval with a fake account or someone hired by daval to stop any others from leaking and report him back whoever is leaking.

I know they will delete it but previously I said that a person acted like this in discord every time something was leaked he got angry and told Daval on which pages and who the leaker was, that person seems to have all the free time to search and is the unmentionable that put the old man on MT4, everything starts to make sense.
 

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damn i was hoping to finally a kiss, guess better lucky next episode.
No friend in the next chapter daniel's cousin tells his father and he goes to talk to lana about what happened in the bathroom lana and her brother already had a relationship before and he fucks her in front of daniel fuck, yes more NTR.

For SN10 it's different, Daval was inspired by what happened at Au Naturel by PS. It will be on the resort's anniversary. Amanda will see Liam fuck Emma, she will get angry and Alexa recommends that he fuck the bartender. The party ends in an orgy, Daval is a genius.

I love that Daval finally dared to bring out his "great ideas" and not just leave them in his short VIP comics.
 
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Daval has no permissions to delete anything in the thread. We deleted comments because the thread turned into a shitshow.
But let me tell you, many deleted posts, they weren't shitshow. Some of my deleted messages addressed Daval's actions and how some users should act, such as asking for a refund. Some messages were due to conversations about who, I don't remember now, said that Deval was intelligent guy. And I told him no, explaining why he wasn't. Yet my messages were deleted. I don't understand why, given that as I explain, they are in the interest of those who have subscribed to Daval's page.
And as if your wanted to remove them, to support Daval and the mistakes he is making.

Please note, that my intere message is written in a calm manner. This is not an attack toward you (since I have to explain that I use a translator to write so is hard some time to explain myself better).

So seriously, I don't understand why so many posts, were deliberately removed saying shitshow. Now I don't want to say that Daval came here and said, remove them or others, but it's curious how some pro-NTR messages, which would be shitshow, still remained in the topic. Or how this user peter73 hasn't been banned yet, given the way he fooled many users. Going under each post to laugh it off. Those would be a shitshow.
 
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But let me tell you, many deleted posts, they weren't shitshow. Some of my deleted messages addressed Daval's actions and how some users should act, such as asking for a refund. Some messages were due to conversations about who, I don't remember now, said that Deval was intelligent guy. And I told him no, explaining why he wasn't. Yet my messages were deleted. I don't understand why, given that as I explain, they are in the interest of those who have subscribed to Daval's page.
And as if your wanted to remove them, to support Daval and the mistakes he is making.

Please note, that my intere message is written in a calm manner. This is not an attack toward you (since I have to explain that I use a translator to write so is hard some time to explain myself better).

So seriously, I don't understand why so many posts, were deliberately removed saying shitshow. Now I don't want to say that Daval came here and said, remove them or others, but it's curious how some pro-NTR messages, which would be shitshow, still remained in the topic. Or how this user peter73 hasn't been banned yet, given the way he fooled many users. Going under each post to laugh it off. Those would be a shitshow.
Daval has zero control over anything on this forum, I've never even spoken to him; nor would I want to do so. If you feel more messages need removing then you can report them. I stated multiple times throughout the thread to keep things civil.
 
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