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Alexishierro

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Friend, you realize that I'm a random guy from the internet, right? Okay. The only thing I said is that I wish the story had ended a long time ago because it doesn't make any sense anymore. But I also emphasized that I couldn't have done it better and that I wish it had a good ending. I never demand, I just expressed a wish and an opinion I had. (I didn't say. Fuck Daval cansela, this damn story because it's boring)
I don't think it's true, I just expressed an opinion I had and I wanted the story to have a good ending, that's all.

Believe me son, your porn would go nowhere. Don't worry.
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I'm sorry, I didn't want to bother you, I just wanted to express that it's a comic, not a bestseller that has to have an ending, it's just porn.
 

Jack_Zy

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I'm sorry, I didn't want to bother you, I just wanted to express that it's a comic, not a bestseller that has to have an ending, it's just porn.
No problem my friend, it's really no bother. And what I'm saying about the story is that a long time ago it lost the meaning it had within its fictional world and became a carnival of porn, simply put. But if you think differently about your opinion. He just doesn't like it when people say if you don't like it, don't watch it. Because it is a very stupid argument.
 

Donnie Brasco

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Here it is. Everything from Daval3D that I could find on this thread and beyond. Immoral Desires (chapters 01-09), Madness Together (chapters 01-07) and Satisfying Needs (chapters 01-12). Images that are not in 3200X2200 resolution are. ID03: 004-006, ID10: 001-015; MT03: 121-126, MT04: 021-030, 073-079; SN11: 099-160, SN12: 001-008, 051-150. I don't think SN01 and SN02 were even released in the said resolution. Finally, the last image for Immoral Desires is ID10: 015, Madness Together MT07: 152 and Satisfying Needs SN12: 150. Not all images that are in 3200X2200 resolution are necessarily on the same level when it comes to quality, but that's about it. When there are any changes, I will update. But only till end of this year. After that this link will be unavailable. To be honest all I can find others can find too, and I'm not interested in his work anymore, well at least not as I was once.
 
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AnonLeague69

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i dont see any difference , same dialogue.
monotonous.
bathroom = sleepingroom
Well honesty dude I don't have any argument for that . For you the place you shit & shower is same as someone's personal room. I hope that ain't true for you buddy. Eessshh.

As for the dialogues I blame Daval for not hiring a writer. But right now you're only assuming the dialogues will be monotonous based on what you have already read.
I see a different scenario than before. I already mentioned that. Feel free to read my other comments.
 
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sifurex

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Daniel and Lana's kiss scene should have been prolonged and sexier because in the past there was a certain tension built up around it and I loved it. at this point Lana should still have some reservations with daniel like Kisses. Daniel can also strive his next big goal "impregnating Lana". I found many stories became repetitive and boring after sometimes. Maybe one of the "boys" from part one (martha's nephew) can emerge as one of her admirers. this can create an equal sexual tension and competition form both Daniela and Lanas side. Lets be honest, We love to see Lana's shiny body being fucked by some young lads and not by some old hog like uncle peter...
 
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Jack_Zy

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Daniel and Lana's kiss scene should have been prolonged and sexier because in the past there was a certain tension built up around it and I loved it. at this point Lana should still have some reservations with daniel like Kisses. Daniel can also strive his next big goal "impregnating Lana". I found many stories became repetitive and boring after sometimes. Maybe one of the "boys" from part one (martha's nephew) can emerge as one of her admirers. this can create an equal sexual tension and competition form both Daniela and Lanas side. Lets be honest, We love to see Lana's shiny body being fucked by some young lads and not by some old hog like uncle peter...
And then all the people think they would make a better story than Daval, and end up writing this garbage.
 
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Jack_Zy

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It's just fascinating how people think they wanted a better job than Daval, and then you see his ideas and it's like brother. It's really funny that people call Daval for lazy and lazy writing. And then your ideas are type. (Sex here and then sex there, but a nefarious guy arrives and passes by and then everything is resolved and they have sex again, and the end)

People really have to appreciate the good work Daval does with his stories. Not only does it set the stage, it also gives characterization to its characters, while building the world in which the story takes place. Where it also has narrative threads to reach the sex scenes and make them more enjoyable, and satisfactory. No longer just meaningless sex, as people suggest.
 

mickeymcd30

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It's just fascinating how people think they wanted a better job than Daval, and then you see his ideas and it's like brother. It's really funny that people call Daval for lazy and lazy writing. And then your ideas are type. (Sex here and then sex there, but a nefarious guy arrives and passes by and then everything is resolved and they have sex again, and the end)

People really have to appreciate the good work Daval does with his stories. Not only does it set the stage, it also gives characterization to its characters, while building the world in which the story takes place. Where it also has narrative threads to reach the sex scenes and make them more enjoyable, and satisfactory. No longer just meaningless sex, as people suggest.
Good point.
 
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It's just fascinating how people think they wanted a better job than Daval, and then you see his ideas and it's like brother. It's really funny that people call Daval for lazy and lazy writing. And then your ideas are type. (Sex here and then sex there, but a nefarious guy arrives and passes by and then everything is resolved and they have sex again, and the end)

People really have to appreciate the good work Daval does with his stories. Not only does it set the stage, it also gives characterization to its characters, while building the world in which the story takes place. Where it also has narrative threads to reach the sex scenes and make them more enjoyable, and satisfactory. No longer just meaningless sex, as people suggest.
In real life , I am myself a professional native lang writer ,earned about 18k dollars from my works(not a adult writer lol) and i can say that daval writing is nor bad not much good too..It just feels sometimes repetitive or sex without story but it is understandable. Much worse writer than daval exist..Except dirdog writings which is supposedly bad , daval is avg writer and sometimes good too(ID3-4,SN Alexa Liam Amanda first threesome ,MT3)..What he needs is just a nice plot which in future we may see..as current, we can't Title him as a bad writer. THERE r only 3 works..Not like 20,25 y3df works..and He is better in his genre much better than crazydad picking,himeros..
Ofcourse he is a liar..and nor trustworthy, but artworks are great, especially LANA...wooah
 
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