Maybe. If I remember correctly, Daval had said that half the chapter would be a flashback and the other half would be about Sofia discovering the secret, but at this rate it doesn't look like that.
This Sofia is a pain in the ass
Very true. It's a character that tries to be, but ends up being nothing. It's like he's the female version of Uncle Peter. They're just two dirty perverts.
She wants to know what's going on so bad lol and I think shes going to drag Martha to it
Personally, Sofia has always seemed to me to be an annoying character with no substance other than (Perverted Woman). As you mentioned it's almost like Uncle Peter, if he was born with a vagina. Even for me Martha or Sharon were better options than Sofia.
Daval definitely knows how to make very good asses.
What an interesting update. I can't wait to see the next pages. It's great to see Lana's dirtier side as well as Daniel's.
Frankly, it's very nice to see how with him passed the chapters Lana, becomes a character to a more one-dimensional with more facets. And no longer just acting like a Tsundere when she's with Daniel. That she is almost incapable of admitting to liking or taking pleasure in anything. Part of the essence of having a dirtier/sluttier conversation is that the other person she's with also has it with you. And reading parts like "Do it honey!" You can shoot your cum in my face! Or "Fuck me again, son.... Please make me cum! I want you to fuck me hard and deep!"; coming from a person as conservative as Lana appears to be, it's just magnificent. Plus, most things are already external and not just spoken in her thoughts. Daval has worked very well, which is chapter 10. And I really don't want to throw the bad salt, but if he continues on the same path, he can close very well. After all, he himself, Daval said that this chapter will work to strengthen Lana and Daniel's relationship, and so far he's doing well.
