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Donnie Brasco

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I can understand you but for the way i see It the real couple are Liam and Amanda, Alexa can do wathever she want.
Well, Liam fucks Amanda, Alexa and soon Emma too. Amanda fucks Liam only... and of course Thomas. So there is no couples there, at least not those important ones.
It's called "milking". But he's not the only one.
It's milking more or less. He'll keep doing porn comics no matter what. Difference is only did we like what he create or not. Or is there some point where we can say I'm not interested in his work anymore. To be honest I'm not sure he has any idea how his plots will unfold and in what direction in long-term.
 
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Well, Liam fucks Amanda, Alexa and soon Emma too. Amanda fucks Liam only... and of course Thomas. So there is no couples there, at least not those important ones.

It's milking more or less. He'll keep doing porn comics no matter what. Difference is only did we like what he create or not. Or is there some point where we can say I'm not interested in his work anymore. To be honest I'm not sure he has any idea how his plots will unfold and in what direction in long-term.
Liam and Amanda are the MC and a couple, we never saw Thomas he was only mentioned at the beggining of the comic to understand the story.So there is a couple there.
 
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I'm not sure he has any idea how his plots will unfold and in what direction in long-term.
It is precisely on this point that I criticize Daval3D.
He doesn't have a pre-written script.
He doesn't know how to continue the thread of the story.
He asks often for the opinions of his subscribers.
I don't find it professional.
Plus, these stories are too long.
Five chapters would be enough. And we move on !
Really a shame on his part.
He should work with a professional screenwriter.
In this case, these comics would be the best because he has talent for 3D drawing.
 

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Liam and Amanda are the MC and a couple, we never saw Thomas he was only mentioned at the beggining of the comic to understand the story.So there is a couple there.
I mentioned Thomas just because he had sex with her in some distant past at least, with Amanda I mean. But if we move Thomas aside she had sex with Liam only. As far as we know Alexa had sex with Liam only. And Emma... well she is virgin I presume. Since there is no other female protagonist in SN, I could say he will soon fuck them all. As the title of this porn comic says it's all about satisfying needs. Any weak attempt by the author to give it some deeper meaning is a fart in the wind. And couple... well you can say they are couple. I don't think they are. So we agree to disagree.
It is precisely on this point that I criticize Daval3D.
He doesn't have a pre-written script.
He doesn't know how to continue the thread of the story.
He asks often for the opinions of his subscribers.
I don't find it professional.
Plus, these stories are too long.
Five chapters would be enough. And we move on !
Really a shame on his part.
He should work with a professional screenwriter.
In this case, these comics would be the best because he has talent for 3D drawing.
Yes his artwork is amazing without any doubt. But story and especially dialog, when it's really good can be much more hotter than scene itself.
 
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Ivarr_993

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I mentioned Thomas just because he had sex with her in some distant past at least, with Amanda I mean. But if we move Thomas aside she had sex with Liam only. As far as we know Alexa had sex with Liam only. And Emma... well she is virgin I presume. Since there is no other female protagonist in SN, I could say he will soon fuck them all. As the title of this porn comic says it's all about satisfying needs. Any weak attempt by the author to give it some deeper meaning is a fart in the wind. And couple... well you can say they are couple. I don't think they are. So we agree to disagree.

Yes his artwork is amazing without any doubt. But story and especially dialog, when it's really good can be much more hotter than scene itself.
Of course you got your opinion i got mine. Peace!
 
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In Satisfying Needs When Emma was introduced didn’t she say that was seeing or dating someone. And in the car when she was giving him a ride she wanted to do much more but Daniel hesitated.
 

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It's time for a crossover between SN and together. daval's universe need some crossovers. The side characters could be some interesting experiments.
 
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Yes. There is certain crossover between SN and MT in this scene. All that remains is for Liam to screw Sarah and it will be poker of of queens :unsure:
 

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There was already a brief mini crossover if you can all it that..
On SN, when Liam, Amanda and Alexa go to the coffee shop, the barista/waiter is David from MT.
Not only that, one of the main reasons David developed a sexual interest in his aunt was because he saw Liam and Alexa (aunt/nephew) having sex, so yes, not only that crossover already happened, but it was relevant to plot of MT.
 

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So i was just re-reading SN the 7 chapter, i'm at the part when Alexa goes on Liam work place to pay his debts to Mr.Lennon and Emma find out from the security cam that Alexa fuck**g Liam.Emma says the secretary showed her their ID and they have the same last name.So if Alexa is Amanda's sister how this can be possible? She (Alexa) shouldn't have Liam's same last name cause' this would mean she's the sister of Liam's father.It's just a Daval writing error?
 

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So i was just re-reading SN the 7 chapter, i'm at the part when Alexa goes on Liam work place to pay his debts to Mr.Lennon and Emma find out from the security cam that Alexa fuck**g Liam.Emma says the secretary showed her their ID and they have the same last name.So if Alexa is Amanda's sister how this can be possible? She (Alexa) shouldn't have Liam's same last name cause' this would mean she's the sister of Liam's father.It's just a Daval writing error?
Well, is not that much of a deal. Nowadays is becoming a custom that some mothers give their children her last name, even if they're married.
 

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So i was just re-reading SN the 7 chapter, i'm at the part when Alexa goes on Liam work place to pay his debts to Mr.Lennon and Emma find out from the security cam that Alexa fuck**g Liam.Emma says the secretary showed her their ID and they have the same last name.So if Alexa is Amanda's sister how this can be possible? She (Alexa) shouldn't have Liam's same last name cause' this would mean she's the sister of Liam's father.It's just a Daval writing error?
Well as far as I know Daval is from an Latino country so I dont know if its for them the same. I'm Spanish and we usually have two last names, fist one from our father and second from our mother but five years ago or so the law changed in Spain that when you reach 18 years old you can swap both last names and change the order if you so desire
 
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