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Dustellar

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I insist that it would have been better if the final page of issue 9 was the final of this one, but Daval did the smart move, now he has time to change issue 11 thanks to the feedback.
 

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That's make sense. Like (y)
Something occurred to me. Sofia found Lana's behavior very suspicious. I'm not sure she waited exactly half an hour or something like this to see what Lana was up to. It looked to me like she was following her, but at a distance. She could spend some time in front of the door listening to what was happening behind it. And then, when the sounds are interesting to her, enter the room. In that case, she would have to know which door it was. Which means she followed Lana into Daniel's room. In chapter nine, she goes upstairs and hears suspicious noises coming from Daniel's room. Which means that she still waited on the ground floor for a while, but as I said, I don't think so.
 
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The beginning of id 10 is more than wonderful, but when I think that Sofia will discover them, everything is ruined. I hope that Daval will find a solution, either by having her fall down the stairs, or that Daniel hypnotizes her or gets her drunk so that she will not know tomorrow whether what she saw is reality or a dream.
 

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The beginning of id 10 is more than wonderful, but when I think that Sofia will discover them, everything is ruined. I hope that Daval will find a solution, either by having her fall down the stairs, or that Daniel hypnotizes her or gets her drunk so that she will not know tomorrow whether what she saw is reality or a dream.
As I already said. The best will be if all this things happens as a dream. Daniel wakes up scared, and sees Lana beside him... rest as usual I guess. But who knows. Just a suggestion.
 
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Maybe Sofia is going to blackmail Daniel to fuck her relentlessly any time she wants or else.
Sofia can always fuck that character from the beginning of ID. She is the only one from whom Lana and Daniel can fear being caught in the act. And that is her only role in ID, since no one else cares about Lana and Daniel, nor doubts their adventures. Alex is either tired or drunk or both. And without Sofia, who is always suspicious and snooping around, Lana and Daniel can fuck anywhere and everywhere without the slightest fear of being caught.
 

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Sofia can always fuck that character from the beginning of ID. She is the only one from whom Lana and Daniel can fear being caught in the act. And that is her only role in ID, since no one else cares about Lana and Daniel, nor doubts their adventures. Alex is either tired or drunk or both. And without Sofia, who is always suspicious and snooping around, Lana and Daniel can fuck anywhere and everywhere without the slightest fear of being caught.
Daniel kinda rejected her when she was sucking him off remember, that was the only time she took that risk (I know it was because Lana and Alex fucking in the kitchen but she doesn't know that) and she was coping about it but now knowing her suspicious are true well shes going to use that to take advantage of her sexual urges.

Alex is just there unaware of Lana and Daniel adventures lol.

Would be cool to see Martha and Rosa naked, Sofias tits are awesome btw but her lips are kinda weird but still she can get it.
 
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Daniel kinda rejected her when she was sucking him off remember and she was coping about it but now knowing her suspicious are true well shes going to use that to take advantage of her sexual urges.

Alex is just there unaware of everything.

Would be cool to see Martha and Rosa naked, Sofias tits are awesome btw but her lips are kinda weird but still she can get it.
Martha yes, Rosa... well I don't think so. What I want is little bit of Sharon in action. And yes, I think Sofia could look better. Sometimes she looks pretty, and sometimes not so much. It's weird.
 

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Martha yes, Rosa... well I don't think so. What I want is little bit of Sharon in action. And yes, I think Sofia could look better. Sometimes she looks pretty, and sometimes not so much. It's weird.
Could be a scene of Martha Sofia and Rosa putting bikinis on just to see them fully naked (I think Rosa should suck off at least one of the little dudes of chapter 1 because she witnessed Martha and Sofia doing it, I cant believe shes so pure lol) about Sharon I think she would be the focus in future pages.
 

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Sofia is a voyeur, shes just going to watch and get herself off just thinking about it. She's like the Gina character in the Taboo porn movies.
 
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