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I know Daval's VIP comics are very similar to his other stuff, but can we please stop mentioning the Dirdr works, and comparing them, giving work titles etc. I will have to get the thread cleaned up if it carries on. His other works are not allowed to be mentioned, as is stated in the OP.
 
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Not even Daval himself has the dialogues and you are asking for them View attachment 4326911
what daval had involved him self in? why to introduce sofia in such a successful story? i think he had in his mind to do a threesome and why not introduce marta and make a harem and so on, but like subscribers don't want story will involve in this way,he was hitting the wall and searching other exit. excuse my bad english, it's not a traduction via google
 

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Maybe what you like it's the pre-sex development, since most of the stories now are ongoing where the main character have fucked many times already you consider it's more of the same, maybe what you need is to see Daval release a new ongoing with new characters.
 
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Maybe what you like it's the pre-sex development, since most of the stories now are ongoing where the main character have fucked many times already you consider it's more of the same, maybe what you need is to see Daval release a new ongoing with new characters.
I think you are right

But maybe it's because all stories are mostly main characters centered and not much devlopment of other ( like every thing just end up on main character) for ex Sofia could have her story instead of just simping over Daniel

*Also not saying to not focus on main stories ( but stories and devlopment should be balanced instead of just main characters thing type)
 

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I think you are right

But maybe it's because all stories are mostly main characters centered and not much devlopment of other ( like every thing just end up on main character) for ex Sofia could have her story instead of just simping over Daniel

*Also not saying to not focus on main stories ( but stories and devlopment should be balanced instead of just main characters thing type)
Together is the only good one, since David is not the protagonist, and this helps to create more plot, more jealousy, revenge; there are many possibilities. Aaron's storyline is very attention-grabbing, Uncle Peter's is too, Alice and David are more of the same; can you imagine the possibilities?
 

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Maybe what you like it's the pre-sex development, since most of the stories now are ongoing where the main character have fucked many times already you consider it's more of the same, maybe what you need is to see Daval release a new ongoing with new characters.
The pre sex development is one of my favorite aspects in those comics but the problem is when the main characters fuck each other exclusively while the secondary characters just watch from the distance turns out to be boring after a while, Pegasus Smith has the same issue with Au Naturel and the worst part is that comic has so many secondary characters wasted...
 

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Together is the only good one, since David is not the protagonist, and this helps to create more plot, more jealousy, revenge; there are many possibilities. Aaron's storyline is very attention-grabbing, Uncle Peter's is too, Alice and David are more of the same; can you imagine the possibilities?
I agree , that's why is my favorite Daval comic because is the most intrigued interesting imo.
 

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I think you are right

But maybe it's because all stories are mostly main characters centered and not much devlopment of other ( like every thing just end up on main character) for ex Sofia could have her story instead of just simping over Daniel

*Also not saying to not focus on main stories ( but stories and devlopment should be balanced instead of just main characters thing type)
I get your point ,so many wasted characters makes it bland and monotone, Sofia Rosa Martha should have their proper development and give the main characters a rest in time to time , also the boundaries takes so many great possibilities.
 
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Technically speaking all the stories of both daval and Pegasus smith lost sense for me (don't know why)

I'm just not hyped or interested in any of them
I think the boundaries is the main problem on both artists (Daval Together is the exception no wonder why is the most interesting)

Pegasus Smith created a nudist beach with a lifestyle of free will with no rules sexually speaking and he thought in the stupidest idea of making Brandi the MC exclusive for Dylan to fuck lol while he can fuck whoever he wants that's retarded af it doesn't make sense at all.
 

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Can anyone point me in the right direction to get some of Daval's other series translated.
Not finding any sites or apps that can do what I want it to do.
 
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