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Dami28

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I think we wanted to see Lana slowly let herself go to Daniel...if Lana had continued to pretend to say no to Daniel, it would have been too banal.
Let's enjoy the incest and Lana finally being unable to do without her son.
And for god sake stop with the stupid Lana's whining, I am sorry Alex I will make up to you bla bla while Alex introduce his tool in each hole
 

Alfster

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"Your tongue is whirlwind"
Daval3D should really get a competent writer. In my opinion, the dialogue is quite cringe and nobody really talks like this.

He's doing alright, English is not his native language & he has to get a translator in for the dialogue each time.
 

Blowdry

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Offscreen.in id12 page 114,Daniel mention that he used last sleeping pills on girls.
Lots of continuity errors by Daval3D. :whistle:

For example: In the story, Daniel must have drugged Sharon and Kiara before he tied them up not to be discovered; if he hadn’t, he would have had to force them to swallow the drugs while tied up—either as tablets with a drink or ground up in solution—and they would have had no trouble whatsoever working out what he had done to them when they woke up. However there was no sign that I could see of either of the girls swallowing anything after Daniel arrived, before he tied them up, in which case how did the drugs get into their systems while they were free? And let's face it, Kiara and Sharon together could beat the shit out of a puny little coward like Daniel if they chose to and would have needed to have been subdued for Daniel to force them to do anything. :LOL:

On the other hand if Daniel did force drugs on the girls while they were tied, bound, and he was holding them captive, it would be obvious to them later that he had roofied them as soon as they woke up, in which case Daniel would have made two formidable enemies out for revenge—something that might come back to bite him later. :)

Personally I hope Kiara and Sharon end up doing a number on the runty psycho and fuck him up good. :devilish:
 
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Dustellar

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So, in the same issue Daniel ra*%@ his mom and drugged two girls xD what a role model, since it was off-screen I guess there are not many chances for them to wake up, guess Daniel forced them to drink it.

Anyway, this is a new chapter, right? there's a cover?
 

jaques

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Hopefully david starts peeking on alice in the 4 pages
Peeking? After a bazillion pages of nonsense with anyone but David I'd expect we'd finally get more. David/Alice has been teased since the first page. Even his whats-his-face cousin has gotten more from Alice (thinking it was David iirc).
 
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