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StealeroftheSun

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Daval really should keep the plot line of Daniel fucking Lana on stream in the future, but without the weird wigs and costumes, would be interesting
 

Travaruz

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Basically they go to bed, some dialogue and Alice telling him how it’s for the greater good yap yap yap, hours later David still cant sleep because he can’t stop thinking about Sarah and how his best memory is that this is the same motel where he fucked with her while she was dressed as nurse, he gets boner and notices that Alice has great ass too, she wakes up but lies the other way to David, she asks him to get close that she’s getting cold, David is reluctant since he doesn’t want her to feel his boner, she insists
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No text yet, he hugs her and she’s surprised, David starts rubbing her dick against her while she closes her eyes and looks like she wants it so expect some internal monologue, he then grabs her hand and continues to pseudo fuck her, he cums in his pants and rushes to the toilet. He takes off his pants and his dick is more glazed than a donut all while the doors are wide open ofc, final page is alice still lying when she opens her legs to show she’s wet.
 

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Basically they go to bed, some dialogue and Alice telling him how it’s for the greater good yap yap yap, hours later David still cant sleep because he can’t stop thinking about Sarah and how his best memory is that this is the same motel where he fucked with her while she was dressed as nurse, he gets boner and notices that Alice has great ass too, she wakes up but lies the other way to David, she asks him to get close that she’s getting cold, David is reluctant since he doesn’t want her to feel his boner, she insists
MT 101-113
No text yet, he hugs her and she’s surprised, David starts rubbing her dick against her while she closes her eyes and looks like she wants it so expect some internal monologue, he then grabs her hand and continues to pseudo fuck her, he cums in his pants and rushes to the toilet. He takes off his pants and his dick is more glazed than a donut all while the doors are wide open ofc, final page is alice still lying when she opens her legs to show she’s wet.
Hide inside a "Spoiler"..
 

aviyaa12345

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Basically they go to bed, some dialogue and Alice telling him how it’s for the greater good yap yap yap, hours later David still cant sleep because he can’t stop thinking about Sarah and how his best memory is that this is the same motel where he fucked with her while she was dressed as nurse, he gets boner and notices that Alice has great ass too, she wakes up but lies the other way to David, she asks him to get close that she’s getting cold, David is reluctant since he doesn’t want her to feel his boner, she insists
MT 101-113
No text yet, he hugs her and she’s surprised, David starts rubbing her dick against her while she closes her eyes and looks like she wants it so expect some internal monologue, he then grabs her hand and continues to pseudo fuck her, he cums in his pants and rushes to the toilet. He takes off his pants and his dick is more glazed than a donut all while the doors are wide open ofc, final page is alice still lying when she opens her legs to show she’s wet.
no sarah and arron?
 
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_OBLIVION_

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The livestream angle in ID is so bad. This whole comic has really fallen off from the masterpiece it was…
Chapter 1 was very interesting, hot and unhinged milfs like Sofia and Martha showing how perverted they are while Lana and Rose (with delight) watch them sucking dick and later after Daniel and Lana broke their boundaries everything went to absolute shit with the same monotony between them in different places while the rest are underused in the background like retards :FacePalm:blame the subs for ruining this comic and Daval for being a cuck sellout bitch.
 
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Chapter 1 was very interesting, hot and unhinged milfs like Sofia and Martha showing how perverted they are while Lana and Rose (with delight) watch them sucking dick and later after Daniel and Lana broke their boundaries everything went to absolute shit with the same monotony between them in different places while the rest are underused in the background like retards :FacePalm:blame the subs for ruining this comic and Daval for being a cuck sellout bitch.
I disagree. All the character development between Lana and Daniel would go to waste if Daniel suddenly started to bang everyone and the comic would turn into yet another "male protagonist fucks every female character he meets" comic. Daniel wants only Lana and he wants to steal her from Alex. Lana is slowly starting to mentally give in, even though physical boundaries were crossed a long time ago and I think there are plenty of things Daniel and Lana can still do to keep to story interesting.

Yes, the plot armor is too strong in some cases, and I don't think Daval handled Kiara and Sharon's situation well in chapter 12. Chapter 12 was quite weak overall, especially the first half. Nevertheless, the comic is still much more interesting than TO where there is no direction in the story and Sarah exists only to get fucked by every male in the comic.
 

_OBLIVION_

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I disagree. All the character development between Lana and Daniel would go to waste if Daniel suddenly started to bang everyone and the comic would turn into yet another "male protagonist fucks every female character he meets" comic. Daniel wants only Lana and he wants to steal her from Alex. Lana is slowly starting to mentally give in, even though physical boundaries were crossed a long time ago and I think there are plenty of things Daniel and Lana can still do to keep to story interesting.

Yes, the plot armor is too strong in some cases, and I don't think Daval handled Kiara and Sharon's situation well in chapter 12. Chapter 12 was quite weak overall, especially the first half. Nevertheless, the comic is still much more interesting than TO where there is no direction in the story and Sarah exists only to get fucked by every male in the comic.
Wrong because the character development between Lana and Daniel could be the same if he fucks the other milfs/girls when Lana was with Alex , those gaps could have been easily filled in that way knowing the fact how horny he was in those moments and use the girls in different and creative scenarios but no Daval doesn't have imagination at all and instead he took the boring monotone route.

The plot armor is always strong everything is in his advantage no matter how stupid the scenario is that's pathetic , I agree he wasted Kiara and Sharon in this chapter.

Together has issues of course like every Daval comic but at least we see different scenarios there with different males, is fun to see how naive and horny Sarah is with every dick she encounters , ID doesn't have that but Daval tried something new in this chapter but guess what he threw everything just to go back to the same shit between Daniel and Lana with masks and wigs :KEK: :FacePalm:

This comics would have been perfect as a Daniel harem but still thinking Lana is his number 1 while the rest are sloppy seconds and nothing more , great females designs wasted just look at Rose she disappeared for no reason , pathetic...
 

Dami28

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Lana is slowly starting to mentally give in

She got drunk her husband, I think that train has passed, she just gave in like the hollow lustful slut she is.

I think there are plenty of things Daniel and Lana can still do to keep to story interesting.

Yes anal if subs allow it or pregnancy. I hope at least Daval don't use the resource of drugging or getting drunk to Daniel for fourht time.

For me the pictures are amazing but the future of the comic is just several situations of Daniel and Lana fucking and cuckholdinhg Alex there isn't much to tell not to different to KingPig's comics where there are zagas with more than 50 chapters with just sex scenes between Mother and Son and a cuck husband.
 
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no problem, hopefully she sucks him off or something
You mean Alice well I don't see enough credibility for that to happen tbh at the moment but hope that change soon , they need more time alone but the question is who's going to do the first step :4Head:
 
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davalfan

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Wrong because the character development between Lana and Daniel could be the same if he fucks the other milfs/girls when Lana was with Alex , those gaps could have been easily filled in that way knowing the fact how horny he was in those moments and use the girls in different and creative scenarios but no Daval doesn't have imagination at all and instead he took the boring monotone route.

The plot armor is always strong everything is in his advantage no matter how stupid the scenario is that's pathetic , I agree he wasted Kiara and Sharon in this chapter.

Together has issues of course like every Daval comic but at least we see different scenarios there with different males, is fun to see how naive and horny Sarah is with every dick she encounters , ID doesn't have that but Daval tried something new in this chapter but guess what he threw everything just to go back to the same shit between Daniel and Lana with masks and wigs :KEK: :FacePalm:

This comics would have been perfect as a Daniel harem but still thinking Lana is his number 1 while the rest are sloppy seconds and nothing more , great females designs wasted just look at Rose she disappeared for no reason , pathetic...
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there you go dude. the people who pay want it different. I am with you, but we are outnumbered.
 
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