now you sound like Jab in Keeping up with the Jones
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Small-pp-22
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MT is boring but this is not, again a sex scene with Lana refusing to admit she enjoys it with guilt dialogue, for the 99th time, just to spread her legs again the time just after
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Hey kinda agree with you on that bro. And even the dialogues are a bit stupid. Like for example Daniel is trying think of plan to fuck her inside a bathroom where everything is coastal clear. No one literally is there. He already fucked her in a public bathroom room & in home bathroom why need of a plan now.. !??
I sometimes feel like the first 3 chapters were written by someone else & now it's a different guy. I think daval should hire a writer since he's making alot of money atleast invest on something that will make your work even better not just graphically but also story wise & dialogues too.Dialogue and plot/story was never his strong suit. Every comic basically starts the same with the reluctant party being seduced/corrupted and from there he has no idea what to do with it. I doubt he'll invest in a writer since the way it is now he's basically being paid to have others write for him. I don't think it's the best move in the long term but he's making his money so what can you do I guess.Hey kinda agree with you on that bro. And even the dialogues are a bit stupid. Like for example Daniel is trying think of plan to fuck her inside a bathroom where everything is coastal clear. No one literally is there. He already fucked her in a public bathroom room & in home bathroom why need of a plan now.. !??
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As long as Sarah's there too, the old fart trio won't be having anything but dessert for that damn lunch they're invited to, if you know what I mean.
Have to agree. Lana needs to get her shit together and accept the fact that she loves Daniel way more than a fictional mom should love her son and is crazy about his big dick, anything else is just boring details to stretch out the story or till we get to the part where he finally fucks her in the ass too, cuz a woman with an ass like hers needs a lot of anal action.
Yep. Storytelling was never Daval's strong suit. His ridiculously attractive women and high-quality renders are the only things that made him so popular in this business. 'Course we can argue here that his stories, especially the seduction part, have improved a lot compared to when he released the first chapters of SN, ID and MT, but MT was anything but boring till Ch4, bcz we never even got close to seeing the part where David seduces and fucks his sweet, nagging sis Alice.
It's sad to see a very talented artist like him pulling cheap, disrespectful stunts like the ones in Madness Together, but money always talks, I guess, and when the opportunity to make the big buck basically falls into their lap, every person reacts to it in their own way.
Even tho they're pretty predictable and nothing much happens when it comes to action, plot twists and/or dangerous situations to really spice things up, the sex scenes are still very good... thankfully, Daval's not slacking off on that front, but the threat of having NTR in SN and ID doesn't make me too optimistic about the future of these two porn comics.
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Gotta admit, the dialogues are becoming more stupid than the story line or the overall direction of the comics.
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what work ? it has svscomics right on the link !! also it's 4mb you could have attached it in your post.
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Pascal68
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I already wrote it months ago.
Daval needs a good screenwriter.
His stories are becoming boring.
He only wants to make money
with his talented drawings.
That is no longer enough.
Daval needs a good screenwriter.
His stories are becoming boring.
He only wants to make money
with his talented drawings.
That is no longer enough.
Though it's a good idea, I don't think he Daval NEEDS it.
His stories are simplistic and shallow from day one, bad screenwriting prevents him from making masterpieces? Yes.
But it works enough for people to come back for more everytime, some come nagging and some drop it, but while they go, other new ones come.
So yeah, it's it's enough to maintain as it is.