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"WHEN YOU TRY TO PLEASE EVERYONE, YOU'LL END UP PLEASING NO ONE."

I must admit that this is happening a lot sooner than I expected. And while it was a bit of wishful thinking presuming that their secret trysts would remain a secret for a while longer--at least until they got home--Sofia's finding out should come as no surprise. I don't see how she doesn't get involved with them sexually after this despite Daval presumably stating otherwise (I mean, why have Sofia discover Lana and Daniel, then?) which I believe diminishes Lana and Daniel's dynamic. For 9 chapters, Lana and Daniel's attachment for lack of a better term has been slowly developed to the point where they're actively excluding themselves from all other sexual prospects. And now, Sofia gets thrown in because "more women = better porn comic"? We don't get that in SN or MT?

I'm sure there's a large rally prompting Daval to include both Sofia and Martha (not to mention, his own presumed proclivities.) That's the reason I started this post with that quote: the attempt to please everyone is futile. And the attempt itself--i.e. pleasing both the just Lana and Daniel audience, and Daniel with every woman audience--could lead to ruin. Anyway, not the route I would choose, but I'm not the author. And as much as it displeases me to see this so early on the horizon, it's not a deal breaker, for me at least (or maybe it is.) We'll eventually find out as more content from Chapter 10 is released.
 

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Trying to please everyone isnt biggest problem. He wanted to end chapter with Sofia finding out so he rushed it. He forgot about most important story moment: Mom finaly coming to son and ask him for sex.Instead making 10-20 pages of her finaly admiting that she needs her son more than her husband and then Sofia can come and find them,we got only few.There isnt any law that says that chapter needs to be 150 pages. He says that he will explain it in flashback in ID10. Flashback breaks story progression and once it revealed what happend,how happend becomes less interesting.
 
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In fact, I thought Sharon would find out before Sofia, Sharon may divide the waters less, since she's also taboo (incest between cousin and maybe even aunt/niece) and basically a mini-Lana... also Sharon has this sub-plot that, unless Daval give her her own comic, will be touched here, a sub-plot that may involve onlyfans.
 

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Trying to please everyone isnt biggest problem. He wanted to end chapter with Sofia finding out so he rushed it. He forgot about most important story moment: Mom finaly coming to son and ask him for sex.Instead making 10-20 pages of her finaly admiting that she needs her son more than her husband and then Sofia can come and find them,we got only few.There isnt any law that says that chapter needs to be 150 pages. He says that he will explain it in flashback in ID10. Flashback breaks story progression and once it revealed what happend,how happend becomes less interesting.
He could've had the last 10 pages focus on Lana's reflecting on the events of that day including flashbacks of what happened between her and Daniel during their half-hour absence. And the chapter could've ended with Lana opening the door to Daniel's guest bedroom, where Daniel is patiently waiting for her. He smirks as she shuts the door behind her, and she states, "Daniel..." (To Be Continued.) The anticipation of Lana finally accepting her attraction to her sexual relationship with her son could've been the cliffhanger.

I agree with you. Sofia's discovering their relationship was rushed (most likely an attempt to keep Sofia fans on board.) And I too am vexed that the climax of a dynamic that has been building since the very first chapter has been merged with a rather convenient "Sofia the omnipresent sleuth" finally discovering them--an element which came to play at best at the end of the 6th chapter. I also agree that leaving Lana's presumed confession whether to herself or her son, about her desire to have sex with her son to just mere flashbacks does break the stories pace and makes less interesting a rather significant reveal between the two main characters. I try not to be too critical, but admittedly "me no likey this one bit."
 

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In fact, I thought Sharon would find out before Sofia, Sharon may divide the waters less, since she's also taboo (incest between cousin and maybe even aunt/niece) and basically a mini-Lana... also Sharon has this sub-plot that, unless Daval give her her own comic, will be touched here, a sub-plot that may involve onlyfans.
I thought the same. I thought at the very least that if anyone were to find out first, it would be Daniel's cousin, and Lana's niece, Sharon. And that's one of the reasons I'm skeptical about this "no threesomes or orgies" proclamation (though if he did state that, I suppose we should take Daval at his word) because is it really plausible for a character who's wanted to jump Daniel's bone for three chapters to do nothing? And if it hasn't been made obvious, not only am I not a particular fan of Sofia, but I'm disinclined to finding any sort of pleasure in a Daniel-Lana-Sofia threesome.
 
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I think Sofia is hot, not as hot as Lana and there isn't a taboo factor other than "fucking the son of my best friend", we will see how Daval handle it, maybe he will use Sofia as a way to push Daniel and Lana relatioship even more, maybe she has an incest fetish and prefer to watch them from time to time instead of trying to fuck Daniel? maybe she will tell Lana to embrace it! even if you guys don't like it, you have to notice this, now Lana finally has someone to talk about it, it may be good for her and Daniel.

Anyway... in a comic with a hot female cousin, an aunt that could be as hot as Lana and even a grandma mentioned (still no gilfs in Davalverse :(), if Daval ever think about giving us threesomes/orgies in ID, I think he should go full incest instead of letting Daniel fuck non-related people.
 

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I see a lot of people angry about the ending of ID9 both on boosty subscriberstar and forums like this one, I ask you, didn't you notice before? In ID, for 9 chapters, Lana's acceptance of Daniel was prolonged and now it will be shown in the most anticipated moment in a fucking flashback lol, Daval put Peter in MT out of nowhere, then in SN he wanted to put NTR in with the bullies that Amanda's husband owes money to, do you remember the monsters that appear at the end of chapter 8? he screwed up again by putting silvia the innocent alice without any sexual act he eats the pussy of a fat girl in the bathroom where he works, daval is very imbecile and lazy remember recently the nerve of saying despite being late with the udpates he put it's match day RM vs AT daval doesn't know how to tell stories because he bases himself on what his subscribers want who suck his cock on discord or pay him extra money outside.
 

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Daval's problem is that he can't keep two sectors happy and even more so with this shit. The people who maybe wanted Sharon instead of Sofia were screwed, because this is a one-time event according to Daval. Besides, we are not even sure that they will fuck Sofia, because she only said that she wanted someone to know the secret.
 

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I said end of story but I cant help myself and need to answer to that just for the sake of love for football :) - allow me to enlighten you :) that American Football like you wrote is very popular indeed but .. only in America, everywhere else in the world people call it football do you like it or not sir, biggest world football organization is called FIFA which stands for Federation Internationale de Football Association, no offence facts are facts ;)
ok. but we dont follow the world
I said end of story but I cant help myself and need to answer to that just for the sake of love for football :) - allow me to enlighten you :) that American Football like you wrote is very popular indeed but .. only in America, everywhere else in the world people call it football do you like it or not sir, biggest world football organization is called FIFA which stands for Federation Internationale de Football Association, no offence facts are facts ;)
FIFA!!!!???? Your football and our exsisted way before FIFA!!! Again you are ignoring the fact that American football evolved from Rugby football, and Rugby football existed before your football and ours. I dont get why so many europeans get sooo bent out of shape over this??
 

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I see a lot of people angry about the ending of ID9 both on boosty subscriberstar and forums like this one, I ask you, didn't you notice before? In ID, for 9 chapters, Lana's acceptance of Daniel was prolonged and now it will be shown in the most anticipated moment in a fucking flashback lol, Daval put Peter in MT out of nowhere, then in SN he wanted to put NTR in with the bullies that Amanda's husband owes money to, do you remember the monsters that appear at the end of chapter 8? he screwed up again by putting silvia the innocent alice without any sexual act he eats the pussy of a fat girl in the bathroom where he works, daval is very imbecile and lazy remember recently the nerve of saying despite being late with the udpates he put it's match day RM vs AT daval doesn't know how to tell stories because he bases himself on what his subscribers want who suck his cock on discord or pay him extra money outside.
I agree with you, Daval knows how to start a story and turn us on until our dick is really hard, but as the story progresses he listens to his subscribers who suck his dick until it's really dry and he shits, and the proof is SN and MT, these two stories were going so well until he himself screwed up.
 

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Sorry if I don't trust Daval when he says that this will be a "one time thing", when there are a lot of hints that Sharon may find out too, there were literally only two people suspecting, one was Sofia, the other Sharon... I already expect by issues 15 Daval saying "I wanted someone from the family to find out, but it will be one-time thing"

Anyway, I can't wait to see how Daniel and Lana solve this problem, I still think blackmail can't work because they have more to lose, plus they have no physical proof that Sofia cheated, and neither does Sofia, she wasn't smart enough to record them... people are jumping to too many conclusions, as I said before, maybe Sofia role will be of a moral support, now that Lana has a friend to talk about... or maybe there will be a threesome in issue 11, who knows! but I expect a cover with the three of them for issue 11.
 

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Sorry if I don't trust Daval when he says that this will be a "one time thing", when there are a lot of hints that Sharon may find out too, there were literally only two people suspecting, one was Sofia, the other Sharon... I already expect by issues 15 Daval saying "I wanted someone from the family to find out, but it will be one-time thing"

Anyway, I can't wait to see how Daniel and Lana solve this problem, I still think blackmail can't work because they have more to lose, plus they have no physical proof that Sofia cheated, and neither does Sofia, she wasn't smart enough to record them... people are jumping to too many conclusions, as I said before, maybe Sofia role will be of a moral support, now that Lana has a friend to talk about... or maybe there will be a threesome in issue 11, who knows! but I expect a cover with the three of them for issue 11.
You are right we are just speculating. I was gonna happen next until actually happens. It’s a lot of guessing but at the same time one of us is gonna be right.
 
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I'm sure that Daval can always change his opnio, and he screwed up with this even more so when in his personal discord, with the paying members, he tells them that it's only once, that's because it is. Things aren't very sure but it was definitely a mistake to use Sofia instead of Sharon.

One thing is for sure Daval screwed up and very deeply. To some people who try to deny the obvious.
Let's see what your paying members think.
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It seems there is not much happiness. It does not go from 0 to 100 in Hours. I fuck up.
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Let's look at Jack Cy's comparison, I'm sure it's not that much of a difference... Ah... Well, the sun can't be covered with a finger.
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I'm sure that Daval can always change his opnio, and he screwed up with this even more so when in his personal discord, with the paying members, he tells them that it's only once, that's because it is. Things aren't very sure but it was definitely a mistake to use Sofia instead of Sharon.

One thing is for sure Daval screwed up and very deeply. To some people who try to deny the obvious.
Let's see what your paying members think.
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It seems there is not much happiness. It does not go from 0 to 100 in Hours. I fuck up.
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Let's look at Jack Cy's comparison, I'm sure it's not that much of a difference... Ah... Well, the sun can't be covered with a finger.
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Daval screwed up and now this is going to be the move that will make his money back, or is this Daval's downfall?
 

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Daval screwed up and now this is going to be the move that will make his money back, or is this Daval's downfall?
Most of us know that he didn't make the right decision when he had to come out and show his face on Discord. But when he never explained things, something happened that he didn't expect and he had to come forward on Discord.

Also, it seems that in X before Twitter, the crowd is divided, that's why the boy came out to give explanations.
 
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Oct 02, 2024 06:16 am

Flashback stuff and other things
Some subscribers say that there is no time for there to be a long time scene. I'll explain what's going on.

Sofia wanted to enter Daniel's room but she notices that Lana is heading there. she was waiting for lana to get out, Sofia thought that lana visited Daniel but that she would get out quickly. sofia waited for wool exit for her to continue with his plans, but lana did not come out, about 30 minutes passed and nothing. (I missed adding "30 minutes later") when Sofia is in the hallway.
Sofia doesn't want to wait any longer and goes to Daniel's room. listen to the moans and discover the secret.
 
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