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[Dustellar]

He could have ended the issue with Lana entering the room calling for Daniel, then issue 10 could have been in the present instead of a flashback, that way we would not have to wait months to see the resolution of this cliffhanger, not to mention that Lana finally embracing the relationship would have been a great closure of her character development, before starting this new arc about Sofia learning the truth...

 

[SoldierBoyRED]

Wow, more than one explanation and explanation in one day, this situation is just sad.

 

[Trile3]

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Oct 02, 2024 06:29 am

ENDING OPTIONS AND MORE
On id8 and id9 I did little sex scenes. Lana and daniel in the room of daniel sex scene in the car, martha, in the locker rooms, when they return to the house of martha Lana and daniel fuck in the bathroom again.

the ending where "sofia discovered the secret" I had it planned for id8 and thus finish the Martha's house arc, but I delayed it to add more sex scenes until id9.

I had some options to finish id9
1) lana tells Daniel that she wants to fuck with him and in ID10 start with a long sex scene where at the end of the chapter sofia would discover her secret.

2) that at the end of id9 sofia discovered the secret to creating expectation, but that in id10 she started with a long sex scene showing the moments before Sofia comes.

Any of the alternatives sofia would discover the secret and that would start a stage where Daniel and Lana solve that problem together. that's my intention. I'm not going to add Sofia to the relationship, Sofia is not going to blackmail them for sex. I won't create orgies, Lana won't fuck Uncle Peter NO! NO! NO! none of that will happen and I have to explain that because some subs think I will do all those things.

Sofia will not start to be important to the plot, in fact she will not appear much more. that was my idea but some subs think that now Sofia will be the new protagonist.

This is my comic and I know it. also I want to remember that this comic has been going on for 2 years and I had to add something to the plot or lana and daniel would continue to secretly fuck together until id56. that would be boring.

ID10 will be an excellent chapter and its first update will be on the 5th. at the end of the chapter, the arch of Martha's house will be finished. ID11 will be interesting.



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[SoldierBoyRED]

Brothers, Daval didn't last two days with a position and they already made him change his mind. As I said, it is not normal for you to release update after update, and even more so when he did it in his personal discord, My boy Daval tried to measure the waters and the current took him away. In the end, Daniel and Lana WOW won.


[Damage control mode activated]-definitely

 

[Jorjor69]

Darn, I've never seen Daval posting such a litany of apologism (except arguably on the Uncle Peter addition on MT) it's both sad and hilarious at the same time!

Well, let's see how'd he resolve this, and how credibly. It would add more interest and intrigue among his fanbase for sure.

 

[Dustellar]

Option 1 was literally the best option, now you have people that will not enjoy chapter 10 as much because they know that at the end Sofia will find out, he literally killed any hope and surprise factor by choosing option 2 xD I agree with something, Daniel and Lana secret sex for so many issues will make it boring, but wish he finished the "Lana embracing the relationship" arc before teasing the next one.

 

[SoldierBoyRED]

Well then only the secret is revealed but the relationship remains monogamous between Daniel and Lana. In addition to seeing the way they come out. Daval is the best at saving the game and he doesn't even come in at half time.

 

[Dustellar]

Daval testing the waters is a good theory, imagine him saving this last page for issue 10, he would have no time to change it for issue 11 in case people didn't like it, but now he has months to change everything and claim that "it was never part of the plan".

I insist, I agree with him about a few things, it was time to add something new, because Lana not accepting the relationship was one of the main focus of the comic but it lasted too long, the problem here is that the secret sex was another important part of it, Daval killed both in one page, should have done "Lana finally accepts the relationship/Sofia and Sharon become more suspicious of them > some issues of Lana and Daniel embracing in passionate sex >>>>> Sofia or Sharon find out", but instead did "Lana finally accepts the relationship/Sofía find out > a single issue of Lana and Daniel embracing in passionate sex > continuation of the cliffhanger"

 

[Ahsannnn]

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Oct 02, 2024 06:29 am

ENDING OPTIONS AND MORE
On id8 and id9 I did little sex scenes. Lana and daniel in the room of daniel sex scene in the car, martha, in the locker rooms, when they return to the house of martha Lana and daniel fuck in the bathroom again.

the ending where "sofia discovered the secret" I had it planned for id8 and thus finish the Martha's house arc, but I delayed it to add more sex scenes until id9.

I had some options to finish id9
1) lana tells Daniel that she wants to fuck with him and in ID10 start with a long sex scene where at the end of the chapter sofia would discover her secret.

2) that at the end of id9 sofia discovered the secret to creating expectation, but that in id10 she started with a long sex scene showing the moments before Sofia comes.

Any of the alternatives sofia would discover the secret and that would start a stage where Daniel and Lana solve that problem together. that's my intention. I'm not going to add Sofia to the relationship, Sofia is not going to blackmail them for sex. I won't create orgies, Lana won't fuck Uncle Peter NO! NO! NO! none of that will happen and I have to explain that because some subs think I will do all those things.

Sofia will not start to be important to the plot, in fact she will not appear much more. that was my idea but some subs think that now Sofia will be the new protagonist.

This is my comic and I know it. also I want to remember that this comic has been going on for 2 years and I had to add something to the plot or lana and daniel would continue to secretly fuck together until id56. that would be boring.

ID10 will be an excellent chapter and its first update will be on the 5th. at the end of the chapter, the arch of Martha's house will be finished. ID11 will be interesting.



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Excellent work

 

[SoldierBoyRED]

Well then only the secret is revealed but the relationship remains monogamous between Daniel and Lana. In addition to seeing the way they come out. Daval is the best at saving the game and he doesn't even come in at half time.

''Single Event'' step. Upon cancellation, very quickly. Apparently the tide takes you fast. Even in less than two days.

 

[Sith']

I think that, as Daval mentioned, he simply made a small effort to see the community's reaction and not make the same mistake as SN, and when things exploded in his face he went out to try to remedy everything so that nothing would happen... I didn't. I blame his wallet was in danger. I wouldn't risk ID's good remuneration for something so trivial either, and neither would Daval.

 

[8TB]

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Oct 02, 2024 06:29 am

ENDING OPTIONS AND MORE
On id8 and id9 I did little sex scenes. Lana and daniel in the room of daniel sex scene in the car, martha, in the locker rooms, when they return to the house of martha Lana and daniel fuck in the bathroom again.

the ending where "sofia discovered the secret" I had it planned for id8 and thus finish the Martha's house arc, but I delayed it to add more sex scenes until id9.

I had some options to finish id9
1) lana tells Daniel that she wants to fuck with him and in ID10 start with a long sex scene where at the end of the chapter sofia would discover her secret.

2) that at the end of id9 sofia discovered the secret to creating expectation, but that in id10 she started with a long sex scene showing the moments before Sofia comes.

Any of the alternatives sofia would discover the secret and that would start a stage where Daniel and Lana solve that problem together. that's my intention. I'm not going to add Sofia to the relationship, Sofia is not going to blackmail them for sex. I won't create orgies, Lana won't fuck Uncle Peter NO! NO! NO! none of that will happen and I have to explain that because some subs think I will do all those things.

Sofia will not start to be important to the plot, in fact she will not appear much more. that was my idea but some subs think that now Sofia will be the new protagonist.

This is my comic and I know it. also I want to remember that this comic has been going on for 2 years and I had to add something to the plot or lana and daniel would continue to secretly fuck together until id56. that would be boring.

ID10 will be an excellent chapter and its first update will be on the 5th. at the end of the chapter, the arch of Martha's house will be finished. ID11 will be interesting.



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I get the impression that a part of it is damage control, and the other part of it is sincere. I particularly liked it when he stated, "this is my comic and I know it." And that is indisputable. Whatever criticisms I have of how ID9 ended, Daval is right: it is HIS comic, and NO ONE KNOWS IT BETTER THAN HE DOES. Some of the criticisms tend to be based on hyperemotional responses, questioning Daval's character and integrity, whereas others I've seen are soundly based on the plot--i.e. criticisms of flashbacks, Sofia's rushed discovery, etc. And if Daval states his intentions with this comic is as he described, then I think there's no issue taking him at his word.

But I have a bias. I've already admitted that it would be my preference for the sexual interactions in Immoral Desires to remain primarily between Lana and Daniel, Lana's interactions with Alex notwithstanding. And I must also admit that Daval's prospects for ID10 at least suit my preferences, even if it's unfortunately a result of a kowtow. I don't envy Daval. It's clear to me, and again I'm assuming this, that Daval prefers the kinky stuff. If it were up to him, and I'm guessing, ID, MT, and SN would be like his other VIP comics. But as a content creator who commercializes his product, it's always incumbent upon him to find a balance between what he likes, and what his target audience prefers. So (Cue the track) "only time will tell..."

 

[zorro2000]

i hope daval will resolve sofia's problem in first pages of id 10 and after come to any flashback he wants

 

[Sith']

ID new pages??

 

[8TB]

ID new pages??

Well, there are these (p131-p133):



I didn't translate these, but I did reword (not change) just a little bit of the dialogues so that they read better. I also had to re-typset it because whoever did the original typsetting, even if it was Daval himself, clearly had an issue with the font-kerning. I did however tinker with the colors again. I tend to prefer colors that "pop," and the images typically tend to have dull and bland colors. So, here they are.

 

[Sith']

Well, there are these (p131-p133):

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I didn't translate these, but I did reword (not change) just a little bit of the dialogues so that they read better. I also had to re-typset it because whoever did the original typsetting, even if it was Daval himself, clearly had an issue with the font-kerning. I did however tinker with the colors again. I tend to prefer colors that "pop," and the images typically tend to have dull and bland colors. So, here they are.

I love Daniel's personality, he never gives up on Lana, even though she uses any trick, he knows her better than anyone. But with what he said to him: ''AND WHAT WILL YOU DO? GO OUT TO THE TERRACE AND HAVE A DRINK WITH OTHERS? MY COCK IS ALWAYS STIFF FOR YOU, MOM. AND DEEP DOWN YOU KNOW THAT'S WHAT YOU REALLY WANT.'' Simply magnificent, Daniel loves playing with Lana and as we saw Lana can't resist for long.

Also, from what we've seen in the updates, Daniel may not fuck Sofia, I don't know, time will tell since Daval said that maybe it's just time for someone to find out. Also, apparently, most of his paying members did not like the decision, which is why he made about 5 updates in less than 24 hours. I think Daval got into a cigar for nothing. Because what he thought would fill his wallet almost left it empty. And in the end monogamy won.

 

[Zimako]

There is a bug on subscribestar? September daval content is accessible even when you are not subscribed

 

[Kumar77336]

There is a bug on subscribestar? September daval content is accessible even when you are not subscribed

Not working for me ....if you can share missing files then

 

[pocholo36]

Hello, New here. I'm up to date with all of Daval's work. I wanted to ask you if you know why Madness Together sometimes says "VIP"? There are 2 versions perhaps?

 

[Dustellar]

There are a lot of subscribers against it, but there are also a decent amount of subscribers who seem to like it, so we'll see what happens, the smart decision will be to listen to the majority.

In my case, as a pirate, if Daval decides to turn it into an harem comic or keep it as a monogamous one, I don't mind either, I'm happy as long there's incest taboo, Lana as the main girl and she doesn't fuck other guys (no NTR vibes! please), all that will happen in both scenarios, because Daval isn't dumb enough to separate Lana and Daniel because Sofia or Sharon or any other girl find out, if he ever decides to add other girls to the fun, it will be with Lana's consent and participation, in fact I totally expect Daval writing her as the one with the initiative for a threesome, because at this point we are sure Daniel would never betray Lana, but I can totally see Lana doing that to make her son even more happy, it would not be 100% out of character... if you ask me, if threesomes/orgies ever happen, I prefer it with Sharon or any other future family member, not with Sofia who's just Lana's friend (and clearly not a good one xD)