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Who do you suggest? maybe her dad.
I know ppl are gonna disagree w me, since a lot are taking ID as romcom where the two of them are destined to be, but i was thinking given the fact that Sophia is gonna blackmail them into Daniel fucking her otherwise she’ll tell, that Lana would get jealous as usual and as the time goes and Sophia keeps getting the d, some neighbor son would seduce her, cuz i mean it’s Lana and her being left out first by husband then with seemingly Daniel that it would put her jealous side to another use
 

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I know ppl are gonna disagree w me, since a lot are taking ID as romcom where the two of them are destined to be, but i was thinking given the fact that Sophia is gonna blackmail them into Daniel fucking her otherwise she’ll tell, that Lana would get jealous as usual and as the time goes and Sophia keeps getting the d, some neighbor son would seduce her, cuz i mean it’s Lana and her being left out first by husband then with seemingly Daniel that it would put her jealous side to another use
Of course is not going to happen but following your idea how about Rose son debuting with that role and she gets jealous of Lana I think she needs a purpose on the story so why not another mom son drama, or maybe the 2 young fellas from chapter 1 since they are unhinged af.

The romcom mentality is in Pegasus Smith Au Naturel too, Im not a fan of it tbh because takes away so many possibilities.
 
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I know ppl are gonna disagree w me, since a lot are taking ID as romcom where the two of them are destined to be, but i was thinking given the fact that Sophia is gonna blackmail them into Daniel fucking her otherwise she’ll tell, that Lana would get jealous as usual and as the time goes and Sophia keeps getting the d, some neighbor son would seduce her, cuz i mean it’s Lana and her being left out first by husband then with seemingly Daniel that it would put her jealous side to another use
It's not just people who disagree with you, it's Daval himself as well:

Any of the alternatives sofia would discover the secret and that would start a stage where Daniel and Lana solve that problem together. that's my intention. I'm not going to add Sofia to the relationship, Sofia is not going to blackmail them for sex. I won't create orgies, Lana won't fuck Uncle Peter NO! NO! NO! none of that will happen and I have to explain that because some subs think I will do all those things. Sofia will not start to be important to the plot, in fact she will not appear much more. that was my idea but some subs think that now Sofia will be the new protagonist.

This is my comic and I know it.
If anything Daval has described the opposite of what you've stated. I understand the fetish for polyamory, but none of the scenarios you've described logically extends the narratives and themes we've seen thus far.
 

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It's not just people who disagree with you, it's Daval himself as well:



If anything Daval has described the opposite of what you've stated. I understand the fetish for polyamory, but none of the scenarios you've described logically extends the narratives and themes we've seen thus far.
Wouldn’t be the first time daval contradicted himself, i mean logic is not really a thing or the reason why people read these type of stories to begin with plus after this jealous arc or call it what you will, it could strengthen their relationship since they would come back to each other cuz they’re obviously the endgame whatever happens along the way, it’s only a matter of good writing, it would be a change of pace, now with Lana openly expressing her feelings and them being caught the only things to come are like dad finding out or sum butt stuff etc. but nothing of major importance.
 

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Of course is not going to happen but following your idea how about Rose son debuting with that role and she gets jealous of Lana I think she needs a purpose on the story so why not another mom son drama, or maybe the 2 young fellas from chapter 1 since they are unhinged af.

The romcom mentality is in Pegasus Smith Au Naturel too, Im not a fan of it tbh because takes away so many possibilities.
Did we even see Rose‘s son? I honestly can’t remember, speaking of those guys from chapter 1 i would rather not see them again cuz they look like 8 year olds so if the son is ti make debut it would be cool to at least make him similar to Daniel in age category, i mean Au Naturel is a thing of its own lmao i’m not talking about nudist orgies just that it would make sense for Lana to feel lonely and jealous again which would leave her vulnerable to lust. But a Rose is a good idea nonethless.
 
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Wouldn’t be the first time daval contradicted himself,
Fair enough.

i mean logic is not really a thing or the reason why people read these type of stories to begin with
I never suggested that it was. But proposing scenarios just for the sake of proposing scenarios without much if any consideration to what's happened before not only makes no sense but also isn't the reason people read this type of material, either. What if I were to suggest a scenario where Lana gets her nipples and clitoris pierced, gets a sleeve tattoo, dyes her hair to a midtone saffron, and has Daniel fist her in her ass, while she straddles and mounts a puppy they just bought?

How does the scenario you described make any more sense than mine? We know in chapter 8, Daniel refused a blowjob from Sofia because he was upset that his mother was having sex with his father. We knew that the only reason he even touched Sofia was to make his mother jealous. We know that Lana and Sofia are friends. With all that under consideration, how would it make sense that Sofia would blackmail Lana and Daniel, because apparently Daniel's dick is more important to Sofia than Lana's friendship, have sex with Daniel and become the priority of all his attention because Sofia is without question more attractive than Lana, and then drive Lana into the arms of someone else's son, because it was so easy to get her to accept a physical relationship with her own son, just because...?


plus after this jealous arc or call it what you will, it could strengthen their relationship since they would come back to each other cuz they’re obviously the endgame whatever happens along the way, it’s only a matter of good writing, it would be a change of pace,
It wouldn't be a "change of pace;" It would just be a change that serves as a large "F You" to everything that has happened up to this point. Why not just come out and state, "I personally think the mother/son angle in Immoral Desires has ran its course, and I'd like to see Lana and Daniel have different sexual partners?" Why attempt to shoehorn nonsensical scenarios?


now with Lana openly expressing her feelings and them being caught the only things to come are like dad finding out or sum butt stuff etc. but nothing of major importance.
Because Lana can always fall back on the fact that she's drunk. Or Daval can have Lana completely submit to Daniel. If the covers are any indication of what's to come, then on the Chapter 9 cover, we see Lana take off her ring. I can see Daval dragging this on for a few more chapters. And when Lana and Daniel have ran their course, the popularity of which after 10 chapters, doesn't seem to be dying down, then why not just end the story? Why have them have sex with others? This is no indictment on your personal preferences, but more so with Daval's technique of inventing stories along the way. At a certain point, the female characters become nothing more than pornstar facsimiles who have sex just for the sake of having sex.
 

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Did we even see Rose‘s son? I honestly can’t remember, speaking of those guys from chapter 1 i would rather not see them again cuz they look like 8 year olds so if the son is ti make debut it would be cool to at least make him similar to Daniel in age category, i mean Au Naturel is a thing of its own lmao i’m not talking about nudist orgies just that it would make sense for Lana to feel lonely and jealous again which would leave her vulnerable to lust. But a Rose is a good idea nonethless.
No we only know about his existence thats why I said debuting.

I get your point about the 2 fellas from chapter 1 but Daval didnt have any problem using them so.

Au Naturel is suppose to be the land of free will with swingers everywhere without any ntr but subscribers are treating Brandi and Dylan the main characters as a couple without letting her to fuck anyone else but Dylan can lol it doesn't make sense.

I want to see Rose having sex scenes, shes getting snub for no reason.
 
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