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xdddddd20233

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Something interesting, ID is the same characters with the same story across all 13 chapters, Daniel convinces Lana to have sex and she enjoys it and even if someone caughts them they are too drunk to remember it so the story stays all the same, peak writing
Now that i think it, itts true i dindt see new poses nrw dialogues , i would like to see trio or a new famale caracter , that Lana accepts and they do trios or other things , also iam a little bored of the posed or the ultra " proccesd " dialogues , like sometimes they say things that are not sexy or similar , also i started to like ID IA videos that are alittle bit diferrent , Daval should take a little more of details like the cum , tits , squirts , faces ... i think they need to add s Female character and do a trio like Amanda , Liam and Alexa. I would like to see a good dialouge or at least good scenes , imagine Daniel fucking Lana mouth and still fucking it after cum , and add Details like Lana tits bouncing , Daniel balls moving , Daniel moving his hips etc...
 

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Now that i think it, itts true i dindt see new poses nrw dialogues , i would like to see trio or a new famale caracter , that Lana accepts and they do trios or other things , also iam a little bored of the posed or the ultra " proccesd " dialogues , like sometimes they say things that are not sexy or similar , also i started to like ID IA videos that are alittle bit diferrent , Daval should take a little more of details like the cum , tits , squirts , faces ... i think they need to add s Female character and do a trio like Amanda , Liam and Alexa. I would like to see a good dialouge or at least good scenes , imagine Daniel fucking Lana mouth and still fucking it after cum , and add Details like Lana tits bouncing , Daniel balls moving , Daniel moving his hips etc...
See that’s the thing dialogues are mainly just “fuck your mommy, you’re better than your dad, i love your mighty cock” writing all around is not Daval’s strongest suit, his models and graphics are exceptional no questions asked, however for a story consisting of the same characters and give or take same scenario to be good is a matter of good writing especially for a comics as long as ID, which Daval isn’t able to deliver so for his situation there are two choices- change it up somehow to make chapters not a copy of the previous one more or less since having attractive models only goes so far or keep it the same with its quality going down with each chapter. Unfortunately he chose the latter since his subs would probably read ID to Lana’s 60th birthday as long as it’s the same stuff
 

xdddddd20233

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See that’s the thing dialogues are mainly just “fuck your mommy, you’re better than your dad, i love your mighty cock” writing all around is not Daval’s strongest suit, his models and graphics are exceptional no questions asked, however for a story consisting of the same characters and give or take same scenario to be good is a matter of good writing especially for a comics as long as ID, which Daval isn’t able to deliver so for his situation there are two choices- change it up somehow to make chapters not a copy of the previous one more or less since having attractive models only goes so far or keep it the same with its quality going down with each chapter. Unfortunately he chose the latter since his subs would probably read ID to Lana’s 60th birthday as long as it’s the same stuff
its there a creator that has good dislogues?
 
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Aryy007

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Something interesting, ID is the same characters with the same story across all 13 chapters, Daniel convinces Lana to have sex and she enjoys it and even if someone caughts them they are too drunk to remember it so the story stays all the same, peak writing
what if daniel has a twin when they were born some company stole the baby and now he comes back it would be nice cuz sn we have multiple women what if lana get DP by her sons :WeSmart:
 

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All I want to know is what happens when Kiara and Sharon wake up and what the fallout is for that little shit Daniel. (y) The story needs a ton of spice added to it. I never thought I would say this but I'm bored seeing Lana naked and even more bored of seeing her being fucked athletically by the psychopathic priapic fruit of her womb.
 
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