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ArcanjoTox

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Daval was left without a story; now it's just sex and nothing more. Immoral Desires was a good story, but it was reduced to just sex.

The kid stopped sleeping with two girls, and suddenly, out of nowhere, her mother shows up at the same time. Very convenient. IT'S OVER.

All that's missing is to put a wig on Alice and Sara.

Total lack of creativity.
 

BORU1992

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Daval was left without a story; now it's just sex and nothing more. Immoral Desires was a good story, but it was reduced to just sex.

The kid stopped sleeping with two girls, and suddenly, out of nowhere, her mother shows up at the same time. Very convenient. IT'S OVER.

All that's missing is to put a wig on Alice and Sara.

Total lack of creativity.
I think we all are here for sex only.
 

LucidLover

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Daval was left without a story; now it's just sex and nothing more. Immoral Desires was a good story, but it was reduced to just sex.

The kid stopped sleeping with two girls, and suddenly, out of nowhere, her mother shows up at the same time. Very convenient. IT'S OVER.

All that's missing is to put a wig on Alice and Sara.

Total lack of creativity.
Immoral Desires doesn't have the scope of a third person, just Lana and her horny son. Also, Lana's character even though being a total hottie, only got fucked by Daniel, so no way she is like Sarah for MT, who's going to take any walking cock into her pussy.

Author surely struggles to make sex exciting, sadly, and ends up with brainless ideas. Instead of this, a date where he takes out Lana for a date and then plays the "husband wife" role would have been a better plot I felt, but even this "cam and stream" mess can be fixed with the right writing.
 

Moan Buster

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After this chapter I belive next one will be about mom son camp. So there is possibility of having some other couples and see the sex between them.. it would break the monotonous nature while building up the relationship between main plot.
 

Blowdry

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After this chapter I belive next one will be about mom son camp. So there is possibility of having some other couples and see the sex between them.. it would break the monotonous nature while building up the relationship between main plot.
First, where's the money for the Mom-Son Camp thing coming from? Second, hasn't Lana's little psycho left it too late to be able to book a place on the camp now anyway? :unsure:
 

Dami28

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First, where's the money for the Mom-Son Camp thing coming from? Second, hasn't Lana's little psycho left it too late to be able to book a place on the camp now anyway? :unsure:
I guess the money will be with the live stream but i don't know what excuse will imagine Daval to make Daniel get the money from Sharon and Kiara 's account In someway Daniel is Lana's Pimp:ROFLMAO:

At this point this comic should be published without dialogues because at this point they are unbearable
 
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Dustellar

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Teacher/student roleplay now, I can see some potential for incest roleplay, viewers will never know it's for real.
 
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