- Aug 18, 2017
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Thank you for the constructive criticism. The title of the image is Eclectic and the intent was to have the clutter give her a bit of personality...a quirkiness. Perhaps better use of DOF would have been a wiser move on my part. The light behind was there to show a bit of transparency on her shirt and could arguably be toned down a bit. The floor honestly wasn't even on my radar. It was the stock texture for that environment and I can't argue with the idea that it could be more reflective.I like the picture. My eyes get drawn to the figure immediately. I like the pose and think her expression fits the pose perfectly.
Don't see anything wrong with the fabric of her clothing.
If I wanted to improve something I would at least remove the large glass object if not all the clutter in the foreground.
I'd also want to see what would happen if I toned down the light directly behind her.
I agree with the other person that the floor could be a little more reflective but it doesn't really bother me that much.
At the end of the day, I'm still very pleased with it but will definitely take note of what can be improved and implement on my images moving forward.